TITLE    : Alliterative Enhancements
STORYID  : alliterative-enhancements
SUMMARY  : Enhance your story with alliteration.
AUTHOR   : Cal Y. Pygia@lit
DATE     : 2008-08-10
CATEGORY : adult-how-to
FLAGS    : 
TAGS     : |alliteration|writing advice|rhetoric|narrative|story|adverb|


Alliteration--the repetition of the sounds at the beginnings of words or in stressed syllables--is an easy, but effective, way to enhance the quality of one's writing.  Its use may go unnoticed, consciously, at times, by those who are more interested in the narrative sweep of a story than in the niceties of its rhetoric, but, on a subconscious level, it's likely to be observed--and appreciated.



A good place to include alliterative enhancements is in the use of adjectives to describe nouns that relate to sexual organs and or adverbs that relate to sexual acts.  (Yes, I am aware that some literary pundits decry the use of adjectives and adverbs.  However, I maintain that their use is acceptable, even desirable, as long as it's not overdone, for a judicious use of such modifiers can enhance a description, and, should one study the work of any successful, or even great, writer, he or she will see for him- or herself that, the advice of the literary pundits notwithstanding, such an author, in fact, does employ his or her fair share of adjectives and adverbs.)



The use of alliteration can also suggest characterization and narrative themes.  For example, "beautiful breasts" may not suggest much beyond loveliness, but "tempting tits" could imply that a nubile young woman is a tease who displays her bosom to entice lovers, perhaps for purposes other than, or in addition to, romance.  A temptress emerges from the simple alliterative description of this character's breasts as "tempting tits," as does, perhaps, a story line that involves, as either its protagonist or its antagonist, a seductive siren.



To facilitate the occasional use of alliteration, it might be helpful to create a list of some especially likely alliterative phrases, keeping this list handy when one is writing (and revising) his or her story.  To get you started, here's a beginning list.  Mostly, it applies to objects, rather than to actions, but a more complete list would also include modifiers that relate to such behaviors as cunnilingus, fellatio, masturbation, and anal or vaginal intercourse.  Feel free to use this list, to add to it, to subtract from it, and even to spindle, fold, or mutilate it, as necessary or desirable.



BREASTS



Bare breasts

Beautiful breasts

Big breasts

Bouncing breasts

Bouncy breasts

Buoyant breasts



(Some of the same adjectives can be applied, of course, to "balls," "boobs," "bosom," or "buttocks.")



TITS



Tanned tits

Teasing tits

Tempting tits

Tiny tits

Titillating tits



CUNT



Cleft of her cunt

Cozy cunt



PUSSY



Packed pussy

Patted her pussy

Penetrated pussy

Perfume of her pussy

Perfumed pussy

Petted her pussy

Piece of pussy

Pierced pussy

Pink pussy

Plowed pussy

Plugged pussy

Plunged into her pussy

Poor pussy

Pummeled pussy

Punished pussy



VAGINA



Valued her vagina

Vault of her vagina

Veldt above her vagina

Velvet-soft vagina

View of her vagina

Volume of her vagina



LABIA



Lapped her labia

Licked her labia

Lips of her labia

Little labia

Load on her labia

Lovely labia

Lubricated labia



PUBES



Patted his (or her) pubes

Petted (or her) pubes

Perfumed pubes

Pretty pubes



COCK



Chocolate cock

Colossal cock

Curved cock



DICK



Dark dick

Dense dick

Dick deep

Domed dick

Dreaded dick

Dreamy dick

Drooling dick

Drooped dick

Droopy dick



PENIS



Padded penis

Palmed his penis

Pampered penis

Pampered his penis

Patted his penis

Petted his penis

Pink penis

Placed his penis

Plump penis

Plunged his penis

Plunging penis

Pulled his penis

Pumped his penis

Pushed his penis

Put his penis



(The same adjectives can be applied to "prick.")



SHAFT



Slick shaft

Shiny shaft

Slim shaft

Slippery shaft

Smooth shaft

Standing shaft

Stiff shaft

Stiff-standing shaft

Swollen shaft



(Some of these adjectives can be applied to "semen" or "sperm," and a few might be applied to "scrotum.")



BALLS



Big balls

Blue balls

Brimming balls



(Some of the adjectives for "breasts" can also be applied to "balls.")





SEMEN and SPERM



See the adjectives listed under "Shaft."  In addition, these other adjectives may be used for alliterative effect:



Salty semen (or sperm)

Savory semen (or sperm)

Slimy semen (or sperm)

Spurting semen (or sperm)

Squirming sperm

Squirting semen (or sperm)

Syrupy semen (or sperm)



ANUS



Access to his (or her) anus

Admitted into his (or her) anus

Anointed his 9or her) anus

Aperture of his (or her) anus

Assaulted his (or her) anus

Attacked his (or her) anus

Availed himself (or herself) of his (or her) anus

Avenue of his (or her) anus



RECTUM



Raped rectum

Rammed rectum

Ravished rectum

Reamed rectum

Roomy rectum

Roomier rectum

