Yup, I guess it's a way he plays with the narrative he normally has, although sometimes it feels weird because what you say is true, but well, I guess it's also part of the TSF genre, the fact of playing with the personalities of those characters and turning them into evil or simply taking revenge on them through their suits.
Indeed, it's kind of weird what happens with Zis sometimes, although well, it's supposed that or at least I think it will happen is that in the next chapter of Needle they will have the mother's skin again or maybe make fun of her using the sister's body, I don't know but it left me intrigued haha
Don't worry, it's okay, I think a lot of us feel the same about that but oh well, I hope that in the next few days there will at least be changes to improve its content, and well, if something new comes out or I can have time to translate the next chapter I will share it with you.
Because personally for me that writing turns me off because it just feels like you could have ended the story but you're like elongating it for the sake of like keeping the story going. And it kind of comes off forced for me just under the idea that she at least doesn't write the people that are being targeted to be like good people they're always portrayed as bad people so then it just makes the story be everyone in the story is bad. Because it becomes less of a Revenge story and more of this bad person is doing something because there's a worst person but because of them doing bad things to that worst person now the worst person is going to be justified on being a horrible person because now the original people that may have been framed as good in hindsight and in all logic are horrible
because personally for me it comes off as repetitive just simply because I'm not really in it for the constant focus on how shitty this one person's life is now. Especially when the way it's written at least lately it constantly plays with the idea that there is a chance that he can fix things but the characters literally so incompetent that personally for me it frustrates me. Because I haven't finished your last translation get I'm at the part where the sister wakes up after being turned. And because I understand writing I know more than likely we're just going to repeat the same stuff again and that is showing that the victim is helpless. Because even in his previous one that is very similar to this one I think it was just called bully at some point the victim was in on it. Which I can get into because that's something interesting that hasn't been done already. It's one of the reasons why I found part 7 so interesting cuz they introduced the character that was finally competent just for the character to do basically jack shit.
Yes, it is actually quite strange, but well, I think he also does it to keep the series going. I would have liked him to explain how they got to the mother in the first place, among other things that he might not explain.
Indeed, I also thought that when this new character arrived things would either end with a happy ending or hell would simply end, at least for the boy who was supposedly the protagonist along with the bullies, but anyway, you can tell me what you thought when you finish it.
Yes, I also really like his stories, he knows how to tell you a good story and above all with good context
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