Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

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I think it started out well it held promise of being something different. But sadly Don fell into the same trap a lot of writers do. The story became too long he took too much notice of what people requested. I don't think that's always a bad thing but he lost sight of what he intended it to be. I gave up on it at chapter 15 to me it was becoming like Groundhog day meets 50 shades of grey (minus the BDSM?). I don't know for sure there maybe some of that in it now. As I mentioned earlier it's a pity it showed a lot of promise
 
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Hello, I created a Kemono account, and I would like to give my opinion on Donsilver's stories, but I can't post even though I'm logged in. Does anyone know how to write a post on Kemono?
 
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I'm wondering what the point of the questions Rabbleaid does between chapters is? I mean the customers ALWAYS pick the one that results in the husband being more pathetic/humiliated etc. She can probably even write ahead assuming the result. I'm becoming a bit disenchanted with the whole darker darker thing. Mostly just because these are stories--there needs to be some unpredictability or its all just predictable and all the stories are the same. Still...
 
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Man for this toxic attraction, we wait for whole month for a chapter to drop. I hope the writer won't write the intimacy between lester and Sarah's mother, it will be gross. I really want the story to progress further that how Dan suspect lester and start investigation about it and Sarah kind of don't believe dan and continue fucking lester.
I have a feeling that write is trying to turn Sarah's mom to a slut too, i hope he won't.

Eagerly waiting for next chapter!!!

Guys share your thoughts what do you think....
 
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It seems that the story has become a punishment for the author himself. This is noticeable even in the fact that Don began to confuse the names of the main characters in different stories. Don is a wonderful writer. But he got caught in a narrative whirlpool. He does not develop the wonderful discoveries of the first chapters and simply circles around sex.
 
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But the genius of Don's stories is not only the beautiful, exciting and dynamic presentation of sexual scenes! The relationships in the triangle are attractive, it is interesting - how will the spouses cope, what moves will the tempter use! After all, there were hints of revelations, of strengthening the plot with new ideas. But they are still almost absent. The discovery with the mother is hardly necessary. It is superfluous!
 
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