• Staff Applications are OPEN! [ Staff / Moderator ] More Info HERE Help us make a better forum for everyone!

[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

TBH
ITS A VERY GREAT AND EROTIC CHAPTER
IT'S WAY BETTER THAN THE PREVIOUS TWO CHAPTERS OF CHAP-7
GREAT AND BEAUTIFUL JOB FROM ZETTO
THANKYOU 💕
 
Ok Ok

IMG_4450.png IMG_4451.png IMG_4452.png IMG_4453.png IMG_4454.png IMG_4455.png IMG_4456.png IMG_4457.png IMG_4458.png IMG_4459.png IMG_4461.png View attachment IMG_4462.png IMG_4463.png IMG_4464.png IMG_4465.png IMG_4466.png IMG_4467.png IMG_4468.png IMG_4469.png IMG_4470.png IMG_4471.png IMG_4472.png IMG_4473.png IMG_4474.png IMG_4475.png IMG_4476.png IMG_4477.png IMG_4478.png IMG_4479.png IMG_4480.png IMG_4482.png IMG_4483.png IMG_4484.png IMG_4485.png IMG_4486.png IMG_4487.png IMG_4489.png IMG_4492.png IMG_4493.png IMG_4494.png IMG_4495.png IMG_4496.png IMG_4498.png IMG_4500.png IMG_4501.png IMG_4503.png IMG_4504.png IMG_4505.png IMG_4506.png IMG_4508.png IMG_4510.png IMG_4511.png IMG_4512.png IMG_4513.png IMG_4514.png IMG_4515.png IMG_4516.png IMG_4517.png IMG_4518.png
 
for me this chapter is okay intensity also good but the story telling isn't good

what u guys think

i want to see more lizana and homeless chapters moreee
 
It's good, but the ending doesn't convince me. I feel like we'll lose that spark I had with Ramón. But if the same thing happens to Lydia, that would be great!
 
The episode is good as fanservice, but the plot is very weak. That doesn't detract from Zetto's artwork, but the plot holes detract from the overall story.
 
for me this chapter is okay intensity also good but the story telling isn't good

what u guys think

i want to see more lizana and homeless chapters moreee
Totally agree — it feels like Zetto rushed to finish on time. The story moves quickly and the events don’t link together well, with transitions that feel a bit abrupt.
 
for me this chapter is okay intensity also good but the story telling isn't good

what u guys think

i want to see more lizana and homeless chapters moreee
I didn't read the chapter yet, but I am just reading the reviews. I share your opinion partially. It's just, the heat from chapter 1,2 and 2.5 are no longer to be seen. Even whole chapter 3 was good even though it was so damn long. And the flash back sex in chapter 5 was also good but not as good as the first ones.
 
It was fine up until the sex with the school teacher. The story progressed too quickly from the red-haired woman to the homeless. "Perseverance pays off," so I wanted it to be a more persistent domestic affair. I don't think it was necessary to make Lizana such a promiscuous woman.
 
Overall the chapter WAS BEAUTIFUL AND EROTIC 🤩
THE WAY LIZANA HAD HARDCORE SEX WITH THE PRISONER WAS UFFF
WELL THE CHAPTER AINT DONE YET
ig in the next chapter, many more prisoners are gonna fuck her and she'll become a CUMDUMP for the entire prison
 
for me this chapter is okay intensity also good but the story telling isn't good

what u guys think

i want to see more lizana and homeless chapters moreee
Yeah. Tbh, the cheating aspect of the story is what makes it hot since it's Liz's choice but now here is just blackmail and rape.

Well I'll just go on fully ntr brain mode that don't mind the story and just fap. 😂
 

Similar threads

Replies
0
Views
1K
Replies
17
Views
40K
Replies
4
Views
27K
Back
Top Bottom