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But why him ending was terrible it's was just cliche, old man wins the young wife from young husband then gets her pregnant. Unless your rich a woman ain't gonna let an old ass man pregnant her. There's no future, he'd be completely useless as a parent by the time the kid hit Jr.high. On top of that if she had to go some place she'd have to find someone to watch both of them. Plus the kid would be robbed of having a real dad in his life growing up, he'd never be able to keep up with the kid. If it's a boy and went to play catch the boy would out there having to shag all the one he couldn't catch. The boy would be so pissed off at his mom for being with a dude with one foot in the grave and the other one on a banana peel.
Which story are you talking about?
 
But why him ending was terrible it's was just cliche, old man wins the young wife from young husband then gets her pregnant. Unless your rich a woman ain't gonna let an old ass man pregnant her. There's no future, he'd be completely useless as a parent by the time the kid hit Jr.high. On top of that if she had to go some place she'd have to find someone to watch both of them. Plus the kid would be robbed of having a real dad in his life growing up, he'd never be able to keep up with the kid. If it's a boy and went to play catch the boy would out there having to shag all the one he couldn't catch. The boy would be so pissed off at his mom for being with a dude with one foot in the grave and the other one on a banana peel.
I haven't read it yet but it's a shame that WifeyFetish went with an NTR ending instead of voyeuristic wife sharing. The word "love" is tossed around too flippantly in this and there hasn't been enough time together to develop deep emotional ties. It's not love, it's lust. They have nothing in common other than the street they live on, enjoying sex with each other and his cooking. Wait until he wants to cuddle on the couch to watch reruns of shows he loved in the 80s and 90s.

Perhaps he'll rethink the ending and change it before it's official.

With the follow up being titled "Peeping Neighbor" I suspect that it's all part of his larger plan. David has been cucked (and abandoned?) but is still turned on by watching them fuck. Perhaps Paige and Hank realize they are a not a good fit and she goes back to David in time for part three of the series where they become an open throuple.

I'd have Paige move in with Hank, David is naturally depressed but eventually "saved" by a hotter admirer and moves on to have a better life. Series ends with Hank developing some age-related condition like dementia or Alzheimer's and Paige holding a young child watching through their front window as David directs movers packing a truck with his belongings. As the truck leaves, she sees some boxes left in the driveway, they have her name on them. Fetching the boxes, she finds their wedding album and all of the keepsakes and presents they ever exchanged.

Hank comes down the stairs, startled at the crying stranger in his house riffling through boxes, and asks "Who are you and what are you doing in my house?"
 
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And undercover blond might as well end now, all its gonna be for the next couple of chapters if her fucking Damien and the guilt she feels. But she will get over it and get over Joe. She'll end up all corrupted and in love with the lifestyle. The writing is on the wall already, but did anyone ever think is was gonna any other way.
A woman who makes money leaves a man who is financially inferior to her. I'll go further: she surpassed Joe the moment she accepted the mission and didn't tell her husband the truth. I hope Joe doesn't want anything from his prostitute wife, worse, and using drugs. She's become a different woman. I was a little worried that his best friend didn't say anything. The best way is for Joe to go to the nightclub and see her putting on a show, file for divorce on grounds of abandonment, and disappear to move on with his life.
 
With the follow up being titled "Peeping Neighbor" I suspect that it's all part of his larger plan. David has been cucked (and abandoned?) but is still turned on by watching them fuck. Perhaps Paige and Hank realize they are a not a good fit and she goes back to David in time for part three of the series where they become an open throuple.

Is Peeping Neighbor supposed to be a canon continuation of the series? Didn't Hank sell the house and move to south america and tell noone except a few friends like Shyla? I like your idea of their fortunes reversing over time, though. That would be a fun alternate universe that maybe another author could piggy back on.
 
Is Peeping Neighbor supposed to be a canon continuation of the series? Didn't Hank sell the house and move to south america and tell noone except a few friends like Shyla? I like your idea of their fortunes reversing over time, though. That would be a fun alternate universe that maybe another author could piggy back on.
no idea, just my theory considering how the story ended and the title for the next series. I didn't care for the ending of "But Why Him?" unless there's more story to tell.
 
I haven't read it yet but it's a shame that WifeyFetish went with an NTR ending instead of voyeuristic wife sharing. The word "love" is tossed around too flippantly in this and there hasn't been enough time together to develop deep emotional ties. It's not love, it's lust. They have nothing in common other than the street they live on, enjoying sex with each other and his cooking. Wait until he wants to cuddle on the couch to watch reruns of shows he loved in the 80s and 90s.

Perhaps he'll rethink the ending and change it before it's official.

With the follow up being titled "Peeping Neighbor" I suspect that it's all part of his larger plan. David has been cucked (and abandoned?) but is still turned on by watching them fuck. Perhaps Paige and Hank realize they are a not a good fit and she goes back to David in time for part three of the series where they become an open throuple.

I'd have Paige move in with Hank, David is naturally depressed but eventually "saved" by a hotter admirer and moves on to have a better life. Series ends with Hank developing some age-related condition like dementia or Alzheimer's and Paige holding a young child watching through their front window as David directs movers packing a truck with his belongings. As the truck leaves, she sees some boxes left in the driveway, they have her name on them. Fetching the boxes, she finds their wedding album and all of the keepsakes and presents they ever exchanged.

Hank comes down the stairs, startled at the crying stranger in his house riffling through boxes, and asks "Who are you and what are you doing in my house?"
That sounds like a realistic possibility
 
A woman who makes money leaves a man who is financially inferior to her. I'll go further: she surpassed Joe the moment she accepted the mission and didn't tell her husband the truth. I hope Joe doesn't want anything from his prostitute wife, worse, and using drugs. She's become a different woman. I was a little worried that his best friend didn't say anything. The best way is for Joe to go to the nightclub and see her putting on a show, file for divorce on grounds of abandonment, and disappear to move on with his life.
Exactly, I knew that this was gonna end like this when I read the title. I've read 3 or 4 of these undercover joints and the same thing and I mean it's the same thing is everyone of them. Same plot same troupes where the the bad guy has. 14" dick plus she gets off on how rough and demanding he is. How he just takes what he wants. And the always end with the bad guy coming out on top and the going undercover is for nothing because they never get busted or go to prison.
 
What I like about the hot wife/cuckold story is the wife waking up to the pleasure she can receive from another partner instead of her husband. Often due to his love and respect for her stops him from forcing anything or pushing her boundaries. unfortunately these stories often seem to involve some well endowed individual who's presence ends up consuming the wife who ends up not being able to think her self and humiliating her husband.

Now i can accept that there are all types out there and some may well enjoy or get off on that and if that's the case then good for them, but i would much prefer to see the husband stand up kick the interloper out and not just be the weak cuckold that his wife pushes him to become. The idea that she tries new things which she ends up loving but the husband doesn't get to enjoy any of it even though he had been suggesting and asking for years is pathetic and teh marriage is over you need to have respect and honesty for one to work with or wothout teh cuckolding.

A prime example I've just finished by Antarcita77 "my neighbor" which i started reading to see if i wanted to put the effort into the longer behind the neighbors door. https://www.literotica.com/series/se/493899819 first 8 chapters were good but then wife starts putting the neighbor first. so I jumped ahead to the last chapter (15) to see if might end well but after 5 pages all you get is 5 lines suggesting there might be a silver lining for the husband. The line that rings true is "You see? A wife should empower their partner. I can both humiliate you and worship you."

to that end one of my favs is "my fair slut"" https://www.literotica.com/s/my-fair-slut-ch-01 (noting it does have hypnosis but no incredible well endowed men.

the other is the "slipping into depravity" the start of which is found here https://www.literotica.com/series/se/494209119 .
Slipping into depravity has a married couple and the man is manoeuvred into trying cuckolding for his wife's pleasure not once but twice , but due to their love (and care for each other) they come through that.

maybe i should be looking for more of the stag and vixen mentioned in the contact.

Oh and finally if anyone has chapter 45 of slipping into depravity please share.
 
What I like about the hot wife/cuckold story is the wife waking up to the pleasure she can receive from another partner instead of her husband. Often due to his love and respect for her stops him from forcing anything or pushing her boundaries. unfortunately these stories often seem to involve some well endowed individual who's presence ends up consuming the wife who ends up not being able to think her self and humiliating her husband.

Now i can accept that there are all types out there and some may well enjoy or get off on that and if that's the case then good for them, but i would much prefer to see the husband stand up kick the interloper out and not just be the weak cuckold that his wife pushes him to become. The idea that she tries new things which she ends up loving but the husband doesn't get to enjoy any of it even though he had been suggesting and asking for years is pathetic and teh marriage is over you need to have respect and honesty for one to work with or wothout teh cuckolding.

A prime example I've just finished by Antarcita77 "my neighbor" which i started reading to see if i wanted to put the effort into the longer behind the neighbors door. https://www.literotica.com/series/se/493899819 first 8 chapters were good but then wife starts putting the neighbor first. so I jumped ahead to the last chapter (15) to see if might end well but after 5 pages all you get is 5 lines suggesting there might be a silver lining for the husband. The line that rings true is "You see? A wife should empower their partner. I can both humiliate you and worship you."

to that end one of my favs is "my fair slut"" https://www.literotica.com/s/my-fair-slut-ch-01 (noting it does have hypnosis but no incredible well endowed men.

the other is the "slipping into depravity" the start of which is found here https://www.literotica.com/series/se/494209119 .
Slipping into depravity has a married couple and the man is manoeuvred into trying cuckolding for his wife's pleasure not once but twice , but due to their love (and care for each other) they come through that.

maybe i should be looking for more of the stag and vixen mentioned in the contact.

Oh and finally if anyone has chapter 45 of slipping into depravity please share.
Old-school Stag/Vixen voyeurism of a shared journey is the sweet spot for me. Have the husband pulling his pud while sitting in his cuck chair, listening at the door or watching from a hidden camera. Most of the others tropes make me want them to turn into relationship dramas involving consequences or a hard road back to trust and reconciliation.

There's ways to have cheating wives, dub-con and non-con be hot, but most of the current crop of stories want the reader to go beyond arousal and angst to feel the pain.

ex. I enjoyed WifeyFetish's But Why Him? but the finale ruined the journey by ruining the marriage. Shame as the author's Unsatisfied, which involves a cheating woman becoming a devoted size queen to an ugly neighbour, was volcanic. Helps that Unsatisfied wasn't from the husband's POV and he's also not described favourably so the reader doesn't sympathise with him.

I don't have the continuation of slipping into depravity.
 
But why him ending was terrible it's was just cliche, old man wins the young wife from young husband then gets her pregnant. Unless your rich a woman ain't gonna let an old ass man pregnant her. There's no future, he'd be completely useless as a parent by the time the kid hit Jr.high. On top of that if she had to go some place she'd have to find someone to watch both of them. Plus the kid would be robbed of having a real dad in his life growing up, he'd never be able to keep up with the kid. If it's a boy and went to play catch the boy would out there having to shag all the one he couldn't catch. The boy would be so pissed off at his mom for being with a dude with one foot in the grave and the other one on a banana peel.

You know these are just stories right? Nothing has to "work out" 20 years down the road. I also had an older dad - don't worry; he was married to my mom - and it's not as bad as you think. He put in a real effort at being a dad, even though he was near the age of my friends' grandfathers, and I never felt "deprived" of a real dad.

I don't mind the ending of BWH? - not everything has to go to formula and RAAC but it was a bit jarring They're in bed and he's hitting it raw and suddenly they are in Costa Rica. I'd have liked to see more of a build up - her wondering if the child is Hank's or David's. Maybe David thinking it's his, but some telltale sign on the child (birthmark or Hank's eyes or whatever.) More of a twist.

I also wouldn't have cared if she had gone back to David, but not everything has to be wrapped up and a bow put on it. I just would have liked more exposition between "OMG! No condom!" and "Bienvenidos a Costa Rica!"
 
In chapter 42, Dom could have improved some things. If Dom had taken away some of Lester's resistance (the guy is a sex machine), it would have normalized the series. The fact that he's a freeloader (he has money but doesn't invest in his personal appearance because he doesn't want to) would have made Sarah stay with him (he provides financial security, something women value). The tragic ending would be Sarah leaving Dan, getting pregnant with twins but mostly girls, and then Dan getting Trisha pregnant and her having a boy. Why didn't he do the opposite? Why didn't Dan see the sex scene and Trisha appear? Or why didn't he get an erection, see Sarah and Lester talking badly about him, and then go knocking on Trisha's door at night? First, some rough sex, but then making love in the morning? Then Dom could have done a series about Lester (him with other women and things like that).
 
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