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[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

Sorry but even if quality of comics is on top is almost inacceptable these erotic situations that suddenly stop....and they back to normality as never happening...
Son had mouth in her pussy and then.......nothing, stop, they talk about job
Son put finger inside mom and.....stop they go home
A lot of iterruptions on topics moments and there are hundreds of pages!
We aren t at page 9 ,we are at page 300....
And as bonus a disagree among them just to take time and push away mom from son.....
So boring,useless long long long and frustrating
 
Sorry but even if quality of comics is on top is almost inacceptable these erotic situations that suddenly stop....and they back to normality as never happening...
Son had mouth in her pussy and then.......nothing, stop, they talk about job
Son put finger inside mom and.....stop they go home
A lot of iterruptions on topics moments and there are hundreds of pages!
We aren t at page 9 ,we are at page 300....
And as bonus a disagree among them just to take time and push away mom from son.....
So boring,useless long long long and frustrating
Hey,
everyone is free to share his opinions and I get that my stories should rather be considered erotic literature than straight up porn and if there are some updates following each other, where "nothing is happening" in the porn aspect then of course it“s not what one would expect to see considering how the works of other creators are more action packed. And if I would want to be more successfull I probably should do it also like this, but I won“t. Of course after the first time sex will happen more frequently but I“m not intending to put sex into the story just for the sake of it being sex there while serving no other purpose. I want it to have at least somewhat to have a meaning.

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy also the other aspects of the stories and the sex scenes (which aren“t far of here on the updates in this forum) even more so when they are here. Since when they are coming, I“ve tried to really make them count.
 
Hey,
everyone is free to share his opinions and I get that my stories should rather be considered erotic literature than straight up porn and if there are some updates following each other, where "nothing is happening" in the porn aspect then of course it“s not what one would expect to see considering how the works of other creators are more action packed. And if I would want to be more successfull I probably should do it also like this, but I won“t. Of course after the first time sex will happen more frequently but I“m not intending to put sex into the story just for the sake of it being sex there while serving no other purpose. I want it to have at least somewhat to have a meaning.

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy also the other aspects of the stories and the sex scenes (which aren“t far of here on the updates in this forum) even more so when they are here. Since when they are coming, I“ve tried to really make them count.
Hi, I think you do beautiful work, and the drawings are wonderful. As for "action", I think it's your trademark, and it's good that you stand out from the others, otherwise everyone would do the same things, and then it becomes monotonous. Keep doing your work, as it is, which is beautiful. If some people don't like it, they should read other things.
 
Hi
Sorry but ironically and respectfully but

Chapter 3

7 Pages for a kiss

Page 12 son is touching mom 's butt....page 15 he is sitting on coach waiting mom....

Page 64 son with face buried in mom s panties......page 69 he is sitting again on bed waiting mom....


From page 70 to page 104 34 pages of discussion,blaming,regretting,sadness ecc ecc

From 105 to 115 ten pages of kiss

Now everybody are waiting where the son will be sitted this time when frenching will be over and mom move away,on a chair??On floor????
Once more,with irony but I were one of your subscriber but I stopper months ago because your superb comics is slow in almost in irritating mode

IMHO
 
I don't read this comic until now , I just read chapter few chapters from beginning and I stopped it , because I already knew it has potential, so I am waiting for minimum chapters 5 then will start reading!
So , my fellow reader shared his thoughts and it is welcome, criticism are mostly welcome for better good! But , I want to say something! Mother & son doing sex it may be a very erotic gener for erotic comics but in reality it is a taboo, they did it with the heat but just think what would be the most normal reaction if it happens in reality, they will try to act normally and try as much as possible to forget it as a nightmare!
So , according to your comment I assume that happened!
It is normal, this act GIVES the story depth ! And for a good story need depth too , if there is only sex Sean would not it be boring??

Story development and depts of the story MAKES the story successful! So be there! I can assure you will get what you want, just let the story some breathing space for future development 😺
Well , this is my personal opinion thoug! If I hurts your sentiments then sorry but I just speak what I feel
 
Hi,
The next 21 Pages (45 incl Cover) of Chapter 4 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Skipping dessert for this... (Sneak Peek of chapter four page 43)

(With the now updated version of Isabella)

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Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages (113-132) of A Mothers Shame chapter 3. Finally...connected again.


Enjoy :)!

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Greetings,
I just wanted to show you guys, a little something. My subscribers got to vote on some little changes for Isi, since I wasn“t quite happy with how her skin looked in some of the renders and I wanted to try out some new things I learned while 3D modeling and make her look more realistic. Hence why Isabella looks a bit different with the start of the fourth chapter. Just for fun, I rendered one of the picture in the coming update of chapter four with the old Isabella just to see how much of a difference the update actually makes in such a scene. And in my opinion it“s crazy to see how much of a difference this update made and I think the scene looks way better with her new version in it.

What do you guys think? It“s still a moment until the fourth chapter also starts on here, but maybe it is something you guys can look forward to ;)

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You can do that. There are almost too many moles for me. And her skin still shines. Although not as much
Yeah, it was a close call in the poll regarding the moles. It's not for everyone but the majority was for them. Tweaking them to make the a bit more sparse is possible but would have taken more time, which I didn't had since this update of Isi was done on top of the regular updates. Which shouldn't "suffer" because of it. The light grazing in the scene is somewhat on purpose, since she is supposed to be so tense "just before sweating" so that aren't any droplets of sweat yet but her skin is already "damp".
 
I have a request an you guys atleast upload a single file for whole chapter after fully completed,
It would be very useful while someone try to browse this thread, to download the chapters without Hassel
 
I have a request an you guys atleast upload a single file for whole chapter after fully completed,
It would be very useful while someone try to browse this thread, to download the chapters without Hassel
"hassle"... not "Hassel" (proper noun). ;)
+ all the other errors
 
Yeah, much much better the new look, more realistic, more mature. See how the whole atmosphere changes, when the character, in this case mother, looks more mature, more "right for the role"? The same goes with plot, or dialogues, especially in this type of stories.
 

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