Lovely. My only preference would be more cock size stuff--specific inches, comparison to forearm, so much bigger than husband etc. But that's me. Ignore if it doesn't appeal.
Kinda the standard with any of these should have ended a long time ago stories no? Check the Don Silver Toxic Attraction thread. It gets and incredible amount of hate for how stupid it is now but of course the writer continues to churn out chapters because its his money maker. Or Pete Andrews...
I skip almost all the world building these days. Its their fault if they don't start the story with the line "I didn't know it yet but today was the day I found out she cheated". I feel completely free to skip over their entire romance most of the time. Sometimes (say "A Town Without Honor")...
For me it depends on how much the husband is a real character. If the book spends enough time building him up, giving his perspective and not making him seem like he's at fault then fuck no. If he's just a cardboard cutout and they don't give him much screen time, then I can enjoy him being...
The latest Cuckold Magazine, the eBook for Eliza Sharp 1-5 (not sure how its different from the individual releases), then Eliza Sharp 6, 10 and 11. She has not yet released 7-9 as apparently she has the idea for them and hasn't written them yet. Not sure why that matters since these jump around...
Key findings:
Version A has 11 chapters; Version B has 10.
Chapters 1–8 contain many sentence-level edits, ranging from punctuation/wording changes to larger passages.
Chapters 9 and 10 diverge substantially in content and structure, rather than being simple revisions of the same text...