Yes I don't really know where he want to go with this. The part on the beach is not necessary for stories so short. The part 5 could be good because all the premise is already pass. This is why I hope we will have more after story in this one. And the time to out the part 4 is perhaps he had...
Someone know a website where you can create a private money pot and refund automatically someone with the money he put if he come back on his decision?