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[sandalwoodie] Melissa's Diary 2

Thanks for that reminder, Zank! Max Smeagol is mentioned at the start of Melissa's Diary 1, but I overlooked doing that at the start of MD2. You will find this work and lots of his others in the Artwork section. He is also on Patreom, where those who enjoy his work can support him. His art is some of the best, so I hope everyone will check him out!!!
Melissa's diary is an offshoot from his story called Farewell, with the diary showing the artwork with no captions, but more "in depth" narrative. Max's art is so rich in detail and storyline that I thought it deserved more. So, here we have Diary 1 and 2 for Farewell 1 and 2.
We're working on Chapter 3 of Farewell, which will hopefully be out in a month or two. His current project is called Forsaken, which is a sequel to his work called Impulse.
And thanks again for the post, Zank. Hardly anyone ever comments here, even though I get a lot of likes and loves. Comments are always appreciated!
Sandalwoodie (formerly Sawyer321)
 
I trembled a little as his body settled down onto me……

Did Eli have any idea what he did to me? Did Nala?

Did they know how it made me feel to have that hard black body on top of me? All over me?

And now we’re going ALL THE WAY!.....!!! He is FUCKING me! It was ALL a SUCCESS! We were all at the top of the mountain!

Together!



My right hand squeezed the back of his head, encouraging him.

My mouth opened in a cry of pleasure as his penis went further inside me… He went… slowly……

His face was inches from mine…

He studied my expression as his erection went in and in and IN……

God! This was heaven… That’s right. Being screwed by Eli is heaven……

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Once the cockhead hit my stops, Eli paused for a moment.

We were ready……

Nala took my hand and held it as her husband began to pump……

I just lay there, still on the thin carpet, taking it.

I cried out softly with each stroke.

Nala squeezed my fingers with each cry.

I heard her whisper, “Is beautiful, Missy……”

The floor was so firm beneath us……

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Each time he retreated I sucked in air, filling my lungs with anticipation of his pushing back in.

Eli had my left arm pinned to the floor now, and I could feel the sense of purpose in his breathing, in his motion. I could feel his determination……

And I wanted this with every fiber of my being…

To be a woman for him… To be his girl… Even just one of his girls……

I wanted to submit. To give him my nakedness, my body…

With each stroke I was more and more his…

How could I NOT be?

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And with each inward thrust I gasped with relief, emptying my chest of air, feeling so complete as the enormous javelin filled me right to the bottom…

Again and again he pounded.

Hard and firm and right to the end each time.

It was so glorious….

“YES!!”

“ELI!!!!”

“Yes, give it to me! Give it to me, Eli!!!”

“OH, GOD!!!!

“YES!!!!”

And then I felt it… Just like that I was over the top…

“Oh, God, I’m gonna cum!!!!”

And he answered me!!!

“I cum too now!!!”

I cried out right away! I HAD to!

“Stay in, Eli! DON’T PULL OUT!!!! CUM INSIDE ME!!!!”

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It was a wail and a sob together as I felt his cockhead twitch and throb, while my tight little cunny squeezed and convulsed around that giant baby-maker….

And the jiz poured into me, jetting again and again, spurting into my depths… I could feel it, even as I came myself… The power of Eli’s spurting was enhancing my own release, adding to its strength….

My arms flailed and fluttered, hands grasping only the air as I spasmed and jerked with the throes of ecstasy. It was just as good as ever, and I knew it was the same for Eli as he spread his seed in my garden once again.

And Nala was right there watching……

Nothing could be more wonderful……

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And then Eli’s lips were on mine. He was still cumming, but he kissed me, and I kissed him back.

I could feel his gratitude. I was grateful myself. Thankful that we had found each other, finally. That we had taken this last big step. Happy that we had revealed our feelings for each other just in time.

And we had taken it even further! I was staying! Nala had joined us! It was all so surreal… Like a fantasy come true……

And my hands fisted as I felt the spurts, one, then another, then another, then another………

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Finally, all the seed was planted, and the deed was done. Our lips still lingered……



I noticed Nala watching, even as we kissed.

There was something going on. Somehow, I could just tell.

In Nala’s look, in Eli’s kiss…

There was going to be more. We were not finished yet…

I kissed Eli back…………….

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That’s when the impossible began to happen. At least I had thought it was impossible…

I was docile as they turned me, and before I knew it, I was on my elbows and knees, with Eli kneeling right behind me.

The sounds I heard could only be one thing. Nala was sucking Eli’s cock! That was definitely happening.

And with Eli’s hand on my ass, with his fingers exploring, I felt a quick flash of terror.

Eli was going to go for my ass!

I was a virgin back there……, but….. not for much longer……

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We had not done this yet, but had come close to it… And Eli would be the first one…



But somehow I wanted it… I wanted this to happen…

I buried my face in my hands, saying nothing for a moment.

Yes, I wanted it. I wanted it for Eli. I knew it would hurt. He was so BIG!!!

I could do it… I would do it… …let him do it……

I took a deep breath….

His thumb touched the tight little opening. Yes. That’s where he was going……

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Thanks for posting, Racoonteur! It's a labor of love, I assure you. But its inspiring to have the feedback, for sure!
 
I heard him speak to Nala… It was in their native tongue, and I couldn’t understand it. But his tone was gentle, and somehow definite. I could tell they were together on this. Eli wanted her with him. With us.

She replied softly, in words that I’m almost sure meant, “Yes, my husband.”

My chest flushed with their exchange, and the lust of their collaboration was a turn-on for me. I LIKED the way they spoke to each other…

I wanted to do this…… for both of them….

They were both so… so special….

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And then Eli turned to me…

Here we go……

Both his hands palmed my ass…

I felt the head of his cock slip along the valley between my buns…

He was quiet now, concentrating…

Then the knob was there, right against my tiny hole…

I held my breath…

I heard him exhale, and he pushed……

My eyes opened.

Oh my God oh my GOD!!!!!

The pressure!

My little ring began to spread!

The crown was HUGE!

My asshole began to spread!

More and more!

Oh, it hurt! It hurt so much!

I whimpered.

He kept going.

My little bung gave it up!

It stretched wider and wider!

My body trembled.

It was going in!!!

Oh my God, Ohhhhhh…

I made short, heavy breaths, but Eli kept going. The helmet was in, and I fought back tears as he split my butt with that giant penis. The rod was hard as steel, and so was his determination.

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My GOD! IT WAS IN THERE!!!!!

Eli’s erection was in my ASS!!! That big brown bone was halfway into my poop-chute!

My tender buns were skewered, split like a peach by that monster muscle that showed no mercy…

I thought of Mom and Dad and of Alan… Sorry, but it HAD to be this way……

I wanted this... I confess, I really did. I wanted to do it all! That’s how much this had changed me……

And I was getting it! That’s for SURE!!!

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It was the best hurt of my life…

I gasped breathlessly and my fingers spread out against the thin native carpet. I raised my head slightly as I gasped.

My body was flat on the floor and Eli was butt-fucking me!

This big brown native whom I had befriended, was hosing me up the ass. Right there in my hut. And his wife was with him!

I felt my mind grow dull with the magnitude of it…

All my bodily sensations peaked at my back door, but somehow my mind knew what was happening… And I was okay……

Yes…… I was okay………

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Even as that giant gargoyle entered me, even as I lost my last cherry forever, I could feel Eli trying to be gentle about it. I mean, he had to push hard to get it into me, and his hands held my ass with a very firm control, but I could still tell he was trying not to hurt me. He moved slowly, with love, with tough love, knowing it was important for us to do this. We had to complete the circle… He had to have every hole. We both wanted him to claim me in every way. It felt like destiny. Like it was meant to be this way. It was even meant for us to wait until the very end to do all this. That made it all the more momentous. It somehow underlined our union.

And I recognized that it would always be this way. Eli would always be my first back there. The first to fuck me up the ass…… HE had gotten the prize. There was no going back from that.

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I heard him bellow in a primal, gravelly voice… Like an animal instinct had taken over.



“ACCCHHHHHH!!!!! YOU TAKE IT!!!!!”



My ass in both his hands, he flexed those awesome legs, working himself deeper…. He rocked up and down carefully, his erect penis going in a little more each time, slowly making its way deeper and deeper. The giant hardness, the bulbous brown head, split my tender buttocks relentlessly, making their way down, down, down.

I pressed my face to the back of my hand, and took it, while Nala watched quietly from the side……

I mewed helplessly, fighting back the tears, knowing he had to do this. The hurt was there, and it was big, but the satisfaction of being penetrated this way was off the charts for me.

I didn’t know why, but it was……

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Eli’s power would not be denied… He was gentle but determined as the knob penetrated further and further.

I squeezed my eyes shut, and my fingers dug in as I tried and tried to relax my body for him, tried to make it as easy as possible to go as far as he wanted.

I cried out quietly, mewing and moaning, willing my anatomy to take him……

And finally, it did……

I felt his scrotum against my taint! He was ALL THE WAY IN!!!!!



My breasts mashed tightly against the floor…

“Ohh! Ohhhhh!” I cried helplessly against the floor…..

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