[ds1000] TG / Feminization

[Elaine]

Make more

I guess that means you enjoyed that one

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

I guess that means you enjoyed that one

Indeed only thing it was missing was some sex images

 

[MessyMaid]

any comments?

Excellent and I love the pictures interspersed throughout making the whole thing even better. And I agree with the other comment you should post more on here as some of your other work is great too on FM

 

[Elaine]

Excellent and I love the pictures interspersed throughout making the whole thing even better. And I agree with the other comment you should post more on here as some of your other work is great too on FM

thanks I would like to collaborate with somone who could take my stories and bring them to life

 

[larten]

any comments?

You did a great job of continuing the narrative, and the writing was very good. I find it an interesting continuation as I understood why the original ended where it did. Often I would think I wanted more from a story but when j write my own I lose interest very quickly once the transformation is complete and relatively accepted. However, I thought you did a great job keeping it interesting

 

[Elaine]

You did a great job of continuing the narrative, and the writing was very good. I find it an interesting continuation as I understood why the original ended where it did. Often I would think I wanted more from a story but when j write my own I lose interest very quickly once the transformation is complete and relatively accepted. However, I thought you did a great job keeping it interesting

yes I just thought it would make sense for the new Amy to struggle back to her old life. Then I had fun writing it as I didnt need to write the transformation as DS1000 had already done that part.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

Does anyone have the new story ? The patreon keeps giving me issues and can't buy it

 

[Ggggh]

Hat jemand die neue Geschichte? Ich habe ständig Probleme mit Patreon und kann sie nicht kaufen.

 

[Elaine]

I like DS1000's attention to detail but the story falls down in a few places. Is there likely to be a deep pool deep enough for a man to fall into right next to a road? Then he left his frozen clothes by the roadside along with his phone and wallet. Then when he sets off walking he decides to keep his feet in the platform heeled boots rather than rescue his existing shoes that while frozen could have been warmed up along with his clothes in the car. Then he falls asleep in the salon and even the pain of having his eyebrows and facial hair waxed isnt enough to wake him. That would be enough to waken the dead, then there is snow and ice on the ground and they insist that he goes out wearing shoes that could lead to serious injury as the original katie suffered.

 

[Themamba81]

10-12

 

[Kara2420]

Can someone update ds's Kemono?

 

[Natsu23619]

Does anyone have what are the odds pdf?

 

[Scooter69]

Second that, what are the odds looked like a good story

 

[Scooter69]

Does anyone have any updated stories please?

 

[Wugg]

And the last one: there are 2 versions for each of these (all done by the same author). Up to you to choose which one you prefer the most!

Thanks for these and in PDF as well.

 

[Elaine]

where are they?

 

[khaledb]

Does anyone have anything new