[Slider4545] The Song

[ghostbeetle]

Oh, very nice! Love the cute-friend-of-my-little-sis-wants-to-hang-out aspect. I can definitely see a PJ-party with big brother as the "responsible adult" in the house in the future! Maybe...
Question: would you consider some sleeping-action, maybe just some POV-fondling and fingering, to help the resting ladies have some more exciting dreams (as long as that doesn't violate any TOS stuff, at least)?
And thank you, kindly, for the new chapter!

 

[Slider4545]

Oh, very nice! Love the cute-friend-of-my-little-sis-wants-to-hang-out aspect. I can definitely see a PJ-party with big brother as the "responsible adult" in the house in the future! Maybe...
Question: would you consider some sleeping-action, maybe just some POV-fondling and fingering, to help the resting ladies have some more exciting dreams (as long as that doesn't violate any TOS stuff, at least)?
And thank you, kindly, for the new chapter!

interesting ideas...I will take them under advisement

 

[Slider4545]

Ch 12 part 1

 

[Slider4545]

Ch 12 part 2

 

[ghostbeetle]

Oh, awesome double-wham! Thank you!
Also: looks like you have ambitious plans! I'll get the popcorn.

 

[ghostbeetle]

Really loving the line-up for future thralls in Chapter 12 here!
Couple more small suggestions (if you're interested): 1) would love to see a bit more of the MC fondling/playing with sleeping/passive girls - maybe MC could visit his mom/sister when they're asleep in their beds at night, maybe playing the song for them without waking them up?
And 2) what do you think of the MC instructing his slaves to wear specific sexy getups for him at home, like naked apron, or see-through babydolls, or just telling them not to wear underwear when at home? Or just walking around naked all the time? And then using them freeuse-style?

Oh, one more idea: it feels like the MC is not super comfortable with calling the girls his "slaves". That name came from the girls themselves and their song-programming". It might be cool if the MC decided to tell the girls to consider themselves his "wives" or "girlfriends" instead. Maybe that could lead to some unexpected interactions with their programming? I could easily imagine his sister and mom reacting all overcome with happiness, "you mean, you're asking us to marry you?! We would literally be your complete slaves, we want to belong to you completely!" - kind of thing. And his mom/sister calling themselves his girlfriends/wives and wanting to have his children... FUDGE me!

 

[Slider4545]

Ch 13

 

[ghostbeetle]

Very nice. Thanks for the chapter!

 

[Slider4545]

Really loving the line-up for future thralls in Chapter 12 here!
Couple more small suggestions (if you're interested): 1) would love to see a bit more of the MC fondling/playing with sleeping/passive girls - maybe MC could visit his mom/sister when they're asleep in their beds at night, maybe playing the song for them without waking them up?
And 2) what do you think of the MC instructing his slaves to wear specific sexy getups for him at home, like naked apron, or see-through babydolls, or just telling them not to wear underwear when at home? Or just walking around naked all the time? And then using them freeuse-style?

Oh, one more idea: it feels like the MC is not super comfortable with calling the girls his "slaves". That name came from the girls themselves and their song-programming". It might be cool if the MC decided to tell the girls to consider themselves his "wives" or "girlfriends" instead. Maybe that could lead to some unexpected interactions with their programming? I could easily imagine his sister and mom reacting all overcome with happiness, "you mean, you're asking us to marry you?! We would literally be your complete slaves, we want to belong to you completely!" - kind of thing. And his mom/sister calling themselves his girlfriends/wives and wanting to have his children... FUDGE me!

interesting suggestions. I will think on it. Marriage and pregnancy are not my thing though

 

[ghostbeetle]

interesting suggestions. I will think on it. Marriage and pregnancy are not my thing though

Completely fine, you don't need to actually go there, as that would detract from the fun sexy times. I was just thinking that having them express a desire for that kind of thing would be really hot. But you're already doing just fine, and it's "inspiring" me. If any of my suggestions make sense to you that'd be awesome, but I'm completely fine with what you're already putting down. Just stay awesome.

 

[TheDude4694]

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I don't know if you're the one setting the text in these, but whoever is should work on resizing some of them so the text doesn't go out of the speech bubbles, making parts of it hard to read.

 

[Slider4545]

I don't know if you're the one setting the text in these, but whoever is should work on resizing some of them so the text doesn't go out of the speech bubbles, making parts of it hard to read.

I am. I try to fit them to be easy to read but a few do get to the edge

 

[TheDude4694]

I am. I try to fit them to be easy to read but a few do get to the edge

That's why you shrink the text boxes just a little more when it does.

 

[Slider4545]

That's why you shrink the text boxes just a little more when it does.

Using free 3rd party app. Options are limited. Still working to refine. I appreciate your feedback!