pincho
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This story is good, it has cohesion but it doesn't seem like a direct continuation, it seems more like a spin-off, it doesn't have a satisfactory ending between Shellby and Diane, it's rushed and without emotional strength.Here is part 2 of Passport to Femininity. Unfortunately I had to cut out chunks of the story because it had characters that were below 18. So it might seem a bit disjointed.
Thank you very much for another translation.