Ive been rewriting the scripts of a number of these cartoons myself and doing similar, expanding on or tweaking the story to Improve it to my liking. Just for my own consumption so far.
Sometimes thereās a sameness or very basic dialogue in the scripts so fleshing them out has been a bit of...
Cool, this is one of my favourites, another being the Pakistani Taxi Man. The one thing about Illustrated Interracial thatās always bugged me is the quality of the artwork, so be interested to see how this one pans out.
Hilarious, his name starts off as Jarvis, then Ben, then Mike, then she doesn't know his name even though she asked him what it was on the second page and in the end it finishes up as John, all in the space of 9 pages... haha classic.