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I have my own epilog for the Bet. Claire and Dan divorce, Zane persuades Claire to let him knock her up on film. Claire continues as a porn star destroys her reputation. She tries to guilt Dan into taking her back telling him this was all his fault he asks if she likes fast cars and sex? She...

Is that the final chapter of the Bet?

I agree with all that I liked it from the original standpoint he took a different approach to most authors. But sadly he fell into the trap that nearly all erotic authors fall into listening TOO much to his readers. Agreed he needs to to keep them interested but in the end $ became the real reason.

What plot? It's been repeating itself over and over for the last 20 chapters. At first it was a reasonably good story having to work away and how it affects a family. It's now become as repetitive as Sex and the City or as I have said before it's like groundhog day meets fifty shades of grey. He...

If it was real life divorce her and shoot Lester.

I agree I've already said it a few times. TA has become 50 shades of grey meets groundhog day. Yes it was good to start with but I think Don fell into the trap that most writers that write long stories fall into. They repeat themselves over and over again but I also think he's not sure where to...

Not confused just too repetitive. When you read the shorter stories they keep the 'promise' of the story. The problem particularly with TA it has gone on too long he's writing himself into a corner.

I think it started out well it held promise of being something different. But sadly Don fell into the same trap a lot of writers do. The story became too long he took too much notice of what people requested. I don't think that's always a bad thing but he lost sight of what he intended it to be...