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Looking for [antarctica77] chapters of My Neighbor

RDW

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Hey there,

As the title says, I'm looking for chapters from antarctica77 - specifically, the "My Neighbor" story. I'm hoping it doesn't go off the rails like "The New Tenant" did.

I have read as far as chapter four. I understand that he has posted 5 (in two parts, for some reason), 6, and 7.

Thanks!
 
My Neighbor - Part 16
Novidade
17 de fevereiro

Hey there. Just wanted to apologize for taking so long. While it certainly isn't the longest part of the series(it is the 3rd longest at 35k..
 
Unfortunately, the ending was a bit complicated, right? I didn't like that Emily didn't talk about the changes in Jhon's wife's work environment, or take pictures of her as she is in the work environment. It would be cool to redo some parts and make a final part. A part where Jhon calls his wife and Tony doesn't allow her to answer her husband and she obeys. Also, the ending should have had a conversation with the wife asking Tony to leave his son with her, all that dirty talk. Jhon should have taken off his ring saying that it was all over. (Jhon hears all the dirty talk coming from the second floor, his wife telling her lover to get her pregnant), he goes up and sees Tony cumming in his wife's vagina, Jhon stands there for a few minutes, Tony gives a mischievous smile and says, "See, you not answering his messages made him show up", he pulls Jhon's wife into the bathroom and slams the door, you pervert, give us some privacy, the couple bursts out laughing. Jhon starts packing his bags realizing that it's all over.... When he finishes packing, Tony says that her husband must be masturbating listening to them both. Loise tells Tony not to be so mean and to add Jhon. To Luise's surprise, when the door opens, she sees the rest of her husband's clothes in 2 large bags and 2 suitcases. Jhon is leaving. Loise comes after him asking, and when he finishes going down the stairs with everything he owns, he takes a brown envelope and a wedding ring out of his pocket and says he's going to France. It ends with the police arriving...
 
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