[Syrinx313] What if?

[Syrinx313]

I very recently started playing around with AI gen and ended up with a very short comic/play scene. I'm an absolute novice, so this is full of inconsistencies but I just wanted to share my small project in case anyone enjoys it.

 

[Stokkafilipo]

Welcome to the forum. For a newbie your work seems good to me. Some things to improve (imho):
1) Balloon layout. Try to arrange them so that the speech is easy to follow. Theoretically the layout is always from left to right. It helps readability.
2) Dialogues: Try to avoid repetitions and don't forget punctuation.
3) Story. Working with AI forces you to use good images. Consequently the story (and dialogues) must be modulated on the images (usually it's the other way around). This is understandable, but always try to maximize the material you have.
4) Be strict. Choose only the best images you need for the story. It's not said that all of them have to be used, you can put the good ones at the end as a a bonus gallery. This, and a little bit of graphic editing, can help with stylistic coherence which is one of the big problems of images made with AI.

I'm curious to see your next work, this is very hard-core and I have to say it's an interesting style.

 

[Syrinx313]

Thank you so much for your feedback!

It was really just a project I kinda needed to get out of my system so I do agree that it could have been a lot better in a lot of areas.
I plan to learn my way around Clip Studio so I can do proper and artsy editing, as well as learning to work with Stable Diffusion. I don't know anything about either yet, so for this one I had to rely on Canva.
I will keep your feedback in mind for my next project.