[Tal3s of Debauchery] Focus on Desire

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

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Hey there,
here we now also are with my third longer story, which I will now start publishing in this forum for free. It´s called "Focus on Desire".

It´s a story about our Main Protagonist Tyler, who comes back home after a failed college stint and even worse a broken up relationship with his former long time girlfriend. Back home he finds himself in a bit of a turmoil with the many different ladies in his life.

I guess since there are so many love interests, it´s not your usual type of these kind of stories. I think it´s more like some visual novels where you´re able to progress your relationship with many different characters based on your choices and depending on how the relationship between the protagonist and the lady starts of there are different kinds of speed on how fast and in which way they are progressing. So if you´re down to see how the story between him and the many ladies develop, each in their unique way, from your kind of like "wild or innocent teenage romance" to a more tricky and "shame" driven development with his more closely related interests than feel free to stick around . If you´re into a more focused one on one relationship, then I guess this story isn´t the one for you.

Oh and btw, if you like this one you might also like my other two stories which I publish on here: Forbidden Fruits and A Mothers Shame.

With that said, I hope you guys enjoy the first update consisting of the first 41 pages of Focus on Desire chapter one: "I´ll bet he fucks"!

 

[Nippur]

Hey there,
here we now also are with my third longer story, which I will now start publishing in this forum for free. It´s called "Focus on Desire".

It´s a story about our Main Protagonist Tyler, who comes back home after a failed college stint and even worse a broken up relationship with his former long time girlfriend. Back home he finds himself in a bit of a turmoil with the many different ladies in his life.

I guess since there are so many love interests, it´s not your usual type of these kind of stories. I think it´s more like some visual novels where you´re able to progress your relationship with many different characters based on your choices and depending on how the relationship between the protagonist and the lady starts of there are different kinds of speed on how fast and in which way they are progressing. So if you´re down to see how the story between him and the many ladies develop, each in their unique way, from your kind of like "wild or innocent teenage romance" to a more tricky and "shame" driven development with his more closely related interests than feel free to stick around . If you´re into a more focused one on one relationship, then I guess this story isn´t the one for you.

Oh and btw, if you like this one you might also like my other two stories which I publish on here: Forbidden Fruits and A Mothers Shame.

With that said, I hope you guys enjoy the first update consisting of the first 41 pages of Focus on Desire chapter one: "I´ll bet he fucks"!

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Uau Thank you!

 

[pazzdan]

Well...let me to explain as subscriber of Tal3s-of-debauchery . ...

This story ,just the first chapter has 393 pages....and the plot is so slow but not slow....very slow...too slow....too much slow in an almost frustrating mode.
Despite this, story is excellent because author is number one ,his stories and charachters are the closest possible to a real situation but,once more,too slow in development and in a useless mode,IMHO,and if you read will Know why....

LIGHT SPOILER...DO NOT READ IF YOU INTEND FOLLOW THE COMIC,PLEASE!!!!!


First ,boy has a sex rapport with a friend of his sister....a normal sex between 2 young adults, then he has an actraction for the sister but no contact with her,just flirting,then stare to sexy mom...almost no contact in 393 pages,just flirting,heavy but flirting and stop.
Next step is pointing the best friend of mom a kind of auntie,nice but mommy is much better and with "auntie" not only flirting....,in almost 500 pages of an incest comics ther isnt yet incest,but just a pair of sex situations among not related persone both adults.
Moreover isnt clear if boy needs more sister or mom

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Well...let me to explain as subscriber of Tal3s-of-debauchery . ...

This story ,just the first chapter has 393 pages....and the plot is so slow but not slow....very slow...too slow....too much slow in an almost frustrating mode.
Despite this, story is excellent because author is number one ,his stories and charachters are the closest possible to a real situation but,once more,too slow in development and in a useless mode,IMHO,and if you read will Know why....

LIGHT SPOILER...DO NOT READ IF YOU INTEND FOLLOW THE COMIC,PLEASE!!!!!


First ,boy has a sex rapport with a friend of his sister....a normal sex between 2 young adults, then he has an actraction for the sister but no contact with her,just flirting,then stare to sexy mom...almost no contact in 393 pages,just flirting,heavy but flirting and stop.
Next step is pointing the best friend of mom a kind of auntie,nice but mommy is much better and with "auntie" not only flirting....,in almost 500 pages of an incest comics ther isnt yet incest,but just a pair of sex situations among not related persone both adults.
Moreover isnt clear if boy needs more sister or mom

Hey friend, thanks for sharing your view and your praises for it, despite it not catering to your expectations like in a regular incest story . Hence, like I already mentioned in the initial post on here, if you´re looking for an incest only mom/son story, this one might not be one for you. Yes, Tyler is also romancing his mom and yes, it´s already happening to some extent in the first chapter but if you´re looking for some more typical very focused mom/son scenes, then the third chapter will be much more your cup of tea. So in the aspect of your kind of view that every interaction with the other girls besides his mom and/or sister is useless filler, then I would agree that the pacing is slow. But considering the majority of feedback from my subscribers, whom many think that this is their favorite story of mine and wanting two releases per week, I guess it can be quite enjoyable if you don´t think that the sexual interactions with the other girls are useless.

 

[NewtBlack]

The reason Fan of Tal3sofD's stories are the best is because he takes his time to flesh out his stories. You can't have your cake and eat it, too--that is, expect a great story, but want a perhaps quick, ill-advised insertion of sex where it doesn't fit, quite yet. One of the things I'm almost always certain to read in the commentary of other authors is that 'this is boring' because there's 'too much' sex between the main characters, which results in either wanting new characters to participate or wanting a complete overhaul. If you've trusted Fan of Tal3sofD this far, then have confidence that he knows what he's doing. The amount of pages shouldn't matter. I like 'A Mother's Shame' and I like 'Forbidden Fruits'; I have no doubt that I'll like this one, too.

 

[pazzdan]

Once more, author is excellent but simply extreme in slowliness.
I do not understand....isn t a classic incest comic but mom is involved and sister too ,this is a nonsense.
It seems a mix salade where cooker dosen t know exactly what to do and put random ingredients (mom s friend,sister s friend,undefined situations) and wait what happening .
Please,remember,almost one year and 450 pages in a story without a clear direction.
Sorry but at this rate, the third chapter will come out end of next year."

My opinion,off course, but now I download the stories of this artist just once a month in one shoot

 

[NewtBlack]

Take a look at this:

Original Post

['Hey all,
since my new story "Focus on Desire" just started yesterday, I wanted to share with you guys the character introduction for the main protagonists of the story.

"Focus on Desire" is an erotic story where our protagonist Tyler is finding himself back home after a failed try on studying law and is now trying to find his foot again. Though he for sure didn´t had in mind the changes in relationship which are in store for him.

But to simply do some expectation management, Focus on Desire is, as it is with FF/AMS, an erotic story and not a strictly porn story. Yes, there will be sex (and not too little) and the main part of the story will be erotic content but it won´t be a simple chaining of sex scenes after another straight of the box. The relationships Tyler has with his many female peers will develop at different speeds/ways and I try to make each of these feel unique fitting to their charackter. So if you into stories where you expect Tyler to fuck everyone straight away, then this one probably isn´t something for you but if you´re following my stories for a while, you probably already know what you can tend to expect from my stories and that is charackter development/a somewhat realistic approach to the stories/ a gradual build up in tension to achieve an even bigger gratification when it comes spicy scenes. So if that is something you´re into then I think Focus on Desire will be right up your ally . The visuals should also take another step with this one since I switched to the newest model generation with this one, which results in a better representation of emotions, more realistic visuals and more detailed private parts .

Let me know what you think and feel free to ask if you have any questions.

']

Fan of Tal3sofD pretty much outlined his intentions with this comic over a year ago, so I don't think it's a fair assessment, or even accurate, to suggest that there's no 'clear direction' or that it's a 'mixed salad' of 'random ingredients' when from the offset, Fan of Tal3sofD gave a detailed prologue intended to manage expectations. I can understand the frustration in waiting sometimes, but if I've learned anything from following Fan of Tal3sofD's work is that he rewards patience. If narratives don't drive your interests, and poses and angles are all that do it for you, then there's no shame in that I suppose, but in my honest opinion, it does the payoff a disservice.

Personally speaking, a lot of these other authors flood their content with random sex scenes where my attention span can scarcely keep up, so I like when set ups are paced, and I'm given time to consider the reason I should invest in one story over another.