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[Daval3D] VIP Madness: Together

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Oblivion said:
Frustration and hornyness at the same time leads to do stupid shit , I think on night is when it will get interesting maybe Uncle Pete will be key in this situation manipulating David Aaron even Alice, very interesting plot.
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peter peter peter in your language or for some reason peter is called penis or why don't you take it out of your mouth
 
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When it began (together), Daval said that this comic was about sharing, considering that at the beginning it was only Alice, Arón, David, and Sara. It was logical that this comic had 2 male protagonists, but since it started with David, everyone thought he was the only protagonist, which seems silly to me, since if that were the case, instead of Sara not having a son, she would have a daughter, 3 women and 1 man. David as a character is flat, he generates nothing in his scenes with Sara. If I were to ask them which scene they like the most, one of David and Sara from the many they had or the only scene Piter had with Sara, which would they choose? And even though I didn't like that Piter81 paid to get into the comic, I admit it was one of the best scenes. Now compare the development of Arón with that of David; which one is more developed? And I don't say this to belittle David, it’s just that he has no development, and he had 3 chapters just for him. Why do you think Daniel is so popular? In just 3 chapters he won over the subscribers, and Arón, in just 1 chapter, is having great development, compared to David who is being sought after by Sara and Alice. Arón has to come up with plans; he is a hunter. Doesn’t that seem familiar? It’s the same thing Daniel did with Lana.
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grk said:
When it began (together), Daval said that this comic was about sharing, considering that at the beginning it was only Alice, Arón, David, and Sara. It was logical that this comic had 2 male protagonists, but since it started with David, everyone thought he was the only protagonist, which seems silly to me, since if that were the case, instead of Sara not having a son, she would have a daughter, 3 women and 1 man. David as a character is flat, he generates nothing in his scenes with Sara. If I were to ask them which scene they like the most, one of David and Sara from the many they had or the only scene Piter had with Sara, which would they choose? And even though I didn't like that Piter81 paid to get into the comic, I admit it was one of the best scenes. Now compare the development of Arón with that of David; which one is more developed? And I don't say this to belittle David, it’s just that he has no development, and he had 3 chapters just for him. Why do you think Daniel Daval absolutely killed itis so popular? In just 3 chapters he won over the subscribers, and Arón, in just 1 chapter, is having great development, compared to David who is being sought after by Sara and Alice. Arón has to come up with plans; he is a hunter. Doesn’t that seem familiar? It’s the same thing Daniel did with Lana.View attachment 1221276
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Not a doubt Uncle Pete and Sarah sex scene was the best of the comic to date , even a lot of Peter haters agrees, Daval absolutely killed it.
 
grk said:
When it began (together), Daval said that this comic was about sharing, considering that at the beginning it was only Alice, Arón, David, and Sara. It was logical that this comic had 2 male protagonists, but since it started with David, everyone thought he was the only protagonist, which seems silly to me, since if that were the case, instead of Sara not having a son, she would have a daughter, 3 women and 1 man. David as a character is flat, he generates nothing in his scenes with Sara. If I were to ask them which scene they like the most, one of David and Sara from the many they had or the only scene Piter had with Sara, which would they choose? And even though I didn't like that Piter81 paid to get into the comic, I admit it was one of the best scenes. Now compare the development of Arón with that of David; which one is more developed? And I don't say this to belittle David, it’s just that he has no development, and he had 3 chapters just for him. Why do you think Daniel is so popular? In just 3 chapters he won over the subscribers, and Arón, in just 1 chapter, is having great development, compared to David who is being sought after by Sara and Alice. Arón has to come up with plans; he is a hunter. Doesn’t that seem familiar? It’s the same thing Daniel did with Lana.View attachment 1221276
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You can't argue against the fact that David is the more popular character, otherwise why would Daval3D kowtow to his ardent fans and make plans, I'm assuming, to get rid of Sarah's uncle, Peter? I don't disagree with your sentiments, especially as it concerns the intentions of this series when it first started out, which was to have the primary characters "share" each other. I'm on board for that, by the way. I think Sarah's uncle's popularity is primarily stemmed from NTR fans who just like seeing a wrench thrown in an otherwise "vanilla" story. I should also mention that I don't dislike Sarah's uncle at all, but I think many of his fans overestimate his impact on Madness' plot, even more so with his sexual impact on Sarah. The first three chapters, and the three chapters which followed weren't that different except for some inexplicable reason, Peter started acting like a dick to his niece--pun intended--toward the end. I like for different characters to have different personalities, but I don't think Aaron has to be a Peter 2.0. Aaron is angry, and justifiably so, but he's not an asshole. He still cares about his mom, which is clearly evident in page 15 of this chapter before that oddly placed spanking.
 
NewtBlack said:
You can't argue against the fact that David is the more popular character, otherwise why would Daval3D kowtow to his ardent fans and make plans, I'm assuming, to get rid of Sarah's uncle, Peter? I don't disagree with your sentiments, especially as it concerns the intentions of this series when it first started out, which was to have the primary characters "share" each other. I'm on board for that, by the way. I think Sarah's uncle's popularity is primarily stemmed from NTR fans who just like seeing a wrench thrown in an otherwise "vanilla" story. I should also mention that I don't dislike Sarah's uncle at all, but I think many of his fans overestimate his impact on Madness' plot, even more so with his sexual impact on Sarah. The first three chapters, and the three chapters which followed weren't that different except for some inexplicable reason, Peter started acting like a dick to his niece--pun intended--toward the end. I like for different characters to have different personalities, but I don't think Aaron has to be a Peter 2.0. Aaron is angry, and justifiably so, but he's not an asshole. He still cares about his mom, which is clearly evident in page 15 of this chapter before that oddly placed spanking.
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Don't get me wrong, I don't hate David, it's just that he didn't have any development. Literally, in the first chapter, without doing anything, Sara gave herself to David; he was just in the right place at the right time. The same happened with Lian and Amanda; there was no resistance or obstacles. Daniel is a well-developed character; it took him more time to be with Lana. All that time he was planning, he was moving the plot forward. If he did nothing, the plot wouldn’t advance, and who knows, maybe one of those kids from the beginning would end up with her because Lana was dissatisfied, and her friends weren't very good at giving advice. They would probably introduce her to one of the kids from the beginning. That's my problem with David; everything is handed to him. Alice wants something with him; he just has to accept it, and that's it; Sara is already secured. Now they just need to wait for her mom to come back, and she will be the one looking for him. Aron, on the other hand, reminds me of Daniel when he saw Lana in the kitchen and started looking for ways to create situations. Aron is in the same situation; after seeing David and Sara, he had a little development, and now he's moving the plot with Alice and Sara. If he does nothing, the plot stagnates, and we still need to see what he will do, what his plan is, because I don't think he'll just stand by watching David pursue Sara and Alice preferring David. Aron will have to find a way to have his share. Leaving that aside, Aron is having very good development; I hope he gains followers.
 
Oblivion said:
Not a doubt Uncle Pete and Sarah sex scene was the best of the comic to date , even a lot of Peter haters agrees, Daval absolutely killed it.
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Uncle is goat..far more intersting than david..aaron is good too tbt..pair of uncle and aaron in this story must be very promising..
 
grk said:
Don't get me wrong, I don't hate David, it's just that he didn't have any development. Literally, in the first chapter, without doing anything, Sara gave herself to David; he was just in the right place at the right time. The same happened with Lian and Amanda; there was no resistance or obstacles. Daniel is a well-developed character; it took him more time to be with Lana. All that time he was planning, he was moving the plot forward. If he did nothing, the plot wouldn’t advance, and who knows, maybe one of those kids from the beginning would end up with her because Lana was dissatisfied, and her friends weren't very good at giving advice. They would probably introduce her to one of the kids from the beginning. That's my problem with David; everything is handed to him. Alice wants something with him; he just has to accept it, and that's it; Sara is already secured. Now they just need to wait for her mom to come back, and she will be the one looking for him. Aron, on the other hand, reminds me of Daniel when he saw Lana in the kitchen and started looking for ways to create situations. Aron is in the same situation; after seeing David and Sara, he had a little development, and now he's moving the plot with Alice and Sara. If he does nothing, the plot stagnates, and we still need to see what he will do, what his plan is, because I don't think he'll just stand by watching David pursue Sara and Alice preferring David. Aron will have to find a way to have his share. Leaving that aside, Aron is having very good development; I hope he gains followers.
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Valid points. My thoughts on this is that there seems to be a misplaced responsibility on a fictional character to develop himself/herself in this story. That lies squarely on the writers shoulders for me, I personally think he got comfortable and dropped the ball with David. The same argument used to justify Aron's sudden change in personality can also be used to revamp David but that's the writer's job. Personally I think most of not all storylines like this hit a deadend after the the first sex scene because there is little room for any future relationships like that in the environment they are set up in. That's when the author needs to get creative to evolve the story. There are many tools available for that but it requires creativity, eg Debts from the past come back, danger of some sort, time lapse where development occured and the story picks back up after with a small brief as to what happened, etc. For me the story seems to have been jumbled a bit and it's now just a patch work of many conflicting plots that are not pieced together properly. My thoughts.
 
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It's a great pleasure to see many and long texts but what is the reason? I understand that there is competition in porn comics and especially in incest porn comics. But every time such discussions happen when daval leaves miles away from the competition. His three comics have been alone, far from any competition for a long time, I can tell from real people I talk to on discord and not just usernames that his subs, despite all the leaks, do not abandon him, let's not forget the posts from sexcomik2 after each update, let's not forget the posts with the sexcomik2 logo removed, let's not forget the upscale posts, let's not forget the posts with google translation, let's not forget the recent posts with original pages. An artist who maintains his subs after such a war deserves to be No. 1. Personally, I maintain a huge archive of screens that I look through every time I'm looking for something.
as his sub I am not forced to agree with his stories, anytime I can unsubscribe. but I love to stay.
I feel sorry for those I tired.
 
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dykan29 said:
It's a great pleasure to see many and long texts but what is the reason? I understand that there is competition in porn comics and especially in incest porn comics. But every time such discussions happen when daval leaves miles away from the competition. His three comics have been alone, far from any competition for a long time, I can tell from real people I talk to on discord and not just usernames that his subs, despite all the leaks, do not abandon him, let's not forget the posts from sexcomik2 after each update, let's not forget the posts with the sexcomik2 logo removed, let's not forget the upscale posts, let's not forget the posts with google translation, let's not forget the recent posts with original pages. An artist who maintains his subs after such a war deserves to be No. 1. Personally, I maintain a huge archive of screens that I look through every time I'm looking for something.
as his sub I am not forced to agree with his stories, anytime I can unsubscribe. but I love to stay.
I feel sorry for those I tired.
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I don't think anyone is disagreeing with you on the fact that daval3d is the best out there when compared to others but as everyone said before you, daval3d doesn't stay committed to the plot. David and Alice were gone and back again within 50 pages. Uncle Peter was the all seeing since his introduction but now he is nowhere. I mean what does daval3d want to do?
 
dwalsh said:
Valid points. My thoughts on this is that there seems to be a misplaced responsibility on a fictional character to develop himself/herself in this story. That lies squarely on the writers shoulders for me, I personally think he got comfortable and dropped the ball with David. The same argument used to justify Aron's sudden change in personality can also be used to revamp David but that's the writer's job. Personally I think most of not all storylines like this hit a deadend after the the first sex scene because there is little room for any future relationships like that in the environment they are set up in. That's when the author needs to get creative to evolve the story. There are many tools available for that but it requires creativity, eg Debts from the past come back, danger of some sort, time lapse where development occured and the story picks back up after with a small brief as to what happened, etc. For me the story seems to have been jumbled a bit and it's now just a patch work of many conflicting plots that are not pieced together properly. My thoughts.
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I wholeheartedly agree with you. It's like he is unsure about the plot or gasping trying to control the characters he has created. I hope he gets a grip and we get terrific chapter like MT 1- 6
 
daval unleashed peter on that beautiful innocent nurse..........
for me daval listen the audience and create a comic with peter. since daval continue to upload his work it's fine by me to wait a little more for the updates
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llermito said:
Surprise!!!! Your friend Llermito has found the first of Uncle PETER, please, those of you who don't like the character would appreciate it if you didn't dislike him because getting this material costs a lot and we have to respect everyone's tastes.
Thank you:love::love:
(sorry for the shit quality and translation)
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Woww, interesting comic, hope we get updates of it.
Thanks for sharing.
 
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