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Gnaparelli
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Very good and exciting, as almost all your work. Only thing that's missing in your art are dialogues, but hey... I imagine this as daughter/father/his friend threesome. Hope you will post lots of your other artwork, especially age-difference works (which works great for me for "family sex" fantasies.
Gnaparelli
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Oh man, i love it, simply spectacular , for me. Beside the fact that characters reminds of real people i used to know, but they are really good and believable as somewhat around 30 yrs old married (or divorced, it doesn't change a lot...) daughter who passes more and more time in company of her around-60 yrs old father (i chose guy with little bit of hair) , maybe there's this other guy (one completely bald, older, skinnier) who is either her father-in-law, or her father's friend, or boss or whatever. Step by step, they starts passing time together, joking, having fun... maybe they go out together... Then two men starts flirting with her, then they (probably father is first manipulated by "other guy") two men starts to openly try to convince woman to have sex-based conversations, then convince her to do more and more, ending with both of men fucking her, father practically becoming her surrogate husband... Yeah, just one of possible plots, but again, i really love your characters and overall atmosphere. Only thing, yeah, maybe the environment is kind of too poor, but that's a marginal problem. Good job man.
Gnaparelli
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Great image, i like how the faces of two men are more realistic, i love her negligee/nightgown , love overall feel... it just soldifies my fantasy roles for them and the plot: guy with checked shirt (first from left) is father , she's daughter, bald guy in tanktop is either her husband's father, or neighbor or whatever. He's kind of the key character because it's him who slowly push her father (and her) toward taboo/incest path... and obviously he fucks her too. She's around 30 and generally disappointed and bored. Almost perfect characters for this type of story.
Gnaparelli
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Uhh, nice, believable, realistic father/daughter dialogue, and fantastic, great characters, difficult to make them better and more believable. I guess you decided to make her mom dead, as well as her husband? Hm, well, that's something i wouldn't have done - i think it would have been more exciting if they both were married , but in crisis, bored, kind of disappointed in their marriages and lives generally, and simply finding in their company first fun, some laughter and good time, and after , she founds in him a real man, more and more passionate, and sexually really good, hard lover... So we would have both cheating and incest, which is the best possible combination. But hey, it's your story, let's see where it will go. And obviously, the main thing here, is belivable , realistic build-up and most of all, good hard , visually hot sex scenes. But for now, i love, it, these first pages are great for me.
PS - I really hope you won't make her accept everything easily, right away, not to mention her beeing initiator, that would be completely wrong and not that realistic. We will hopefully see her being convinced and seduced by her father and other older man (whichever role he will be playing ,her husband's father, neighbour, former colleague, friend or relative - i personally think in-law would be the option).
PS - I really hope you won't make her accept everything easily, right away, not to mention her beeing initiator, that would be completely wrong and not that realistic. We will hopefully see her being convinced and seduced by her father and other older man (whichever role he will be playing ,her husband's father, neighbour, former colleague, friend or relative - i personally think in-law would be the option).
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Stokkafilipo
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forester
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Forums got strange nowadays and I'm trying to find a decent place for my work, although, with the flood of AI stuff, well, the future is not bright...
Stokkafilipo
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You'll find a place. Your artistic style is recognizable and you have to count on that.
Gnaparelli
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Hope you'll continue with "Forever" man, or if you've somehow lost interest in creating long and elaborated story/comic, hopefully you'll make at least few nice sex scenes with those father/daughter characters.
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