Mrh69
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Awesome update, Garak3D. When I think you can't improve on what you already have, you bring us this. The end of Issue 2 and the beginning of Issue 3 (and what a start). I thought you would end Issue 2 with a surprise ending, but leaving us with the beginning of Issue 3 like this... You're a monster (in a good way lol).
As for the new images, let's go step by step:
1) The climax of the beginning of the relationship between Bruce and Martha has arrived. Carried away by passion and mutual desire, they no longer think of anything else. Martha's thoughts about what she's doing with her son are brilliant. A mix of guilt and desire. She no longer cares about cheating on Thomas, in fact, he has rejected her. And with an attentive and loving son, she knows she can aspire to more. I don't know how you will end the relationship between Bruce and Martha, but if it's like in the original story, with some different things, like this, it will surely be a farewell that will affect Bruce and make him become Batman.
2) Alfred, our dear Alfred. He always shows up at the worst possible time. Even though he's already caught them twice, instead of causing trouble he continues with his professionalism and concern for young Bruce. He offers to fix the whole mess that mother and son have left behind, even though it's a relationship that is frowned upon by society. Alfred wants to protect the Wayne family at any cost, even its own members. Although in my opinion, it's a bit cruel to make him cleanse the essences of both of them (not even my worst enemy would do that hahaha). But now Martha and Bruce know that they can count on his discretion. I imagine a scene in the future where they are both having sex and Alfred brings some appetizers, leaving them on a table while mother and son continue fucking calmly, instead of getting scared.
3) The cover of Issue 3 is, for me, the best thing so far. We finally get a father-daughter moment between Jim and Barbara. Even though we still have a ways to go before that moment comes, I know it will be worth the wait. What I didn't know is that you'd put Barbara as Batgirl in this story. I thought it would just be between Commissioner and daughter and nothing else. But it sounds great, Batgirl fighting alongside Batman and having to save her father at some point.
4) Speaking of the cover. So far, nothing you've shown on each cover has actually made it into the story. Do you plan to use them as a plot at some point? Because it would be great, with each cover having something that's going to happen in the future, even if it's a few Issues down the road. And since you know I pay attention to details, I really liked your Easter egg in the mirror, behind the Joker: "Garak3D was here!" LOL
5) And finally, the other main course, Vicki Vale and her son Matthew (although I don't know if she had any children in the comics). It's the perfect transition from Gotham being sexually degraded very quickly. Going from mothers and sons poisoned by a toxin in an alley to the TV presenter herself being licked in the pussy by her own naked son live on air is Machiavellianly perverse (I don't know how Vicki convinced the TV network lol). I imagine a scene in the future where the news starts with Vicki fucking directly or with Matthew coming out instead of his mother, like: "Welcome to Gotham tonight, Gothamites! Tonight I, Matthew Vale, will be your host. My mother, Vicki Vale, has had a last-minute personal problem. And by personal I mean that she will be giving me a blowjob during the entire news broadcast, as a gift to your loyalty as viewers" hahahahaha
Looking forward to the next pages, with street images of those protests.
"My son, my choice" (good way to laugh at feminists hahahaha)
Regards
As for the new images, let's go step by step:
1) The climax of the beginning of the relationship between Bruce and Martha has arrived. Carried away by passion and mutual desire, they no longer think of anything else. Martha's thoughts about what she's doing with her son are brilliant. A mix of guilt and desire. She no longer cares about cheating on Thomas, in fact, he has rejected her. And with an attentive and loving son, she knows she can aspire to more. I don't know how you will end the relationship between Bruce and Martha, but if it's like in the original story, with some different things, like this, it will surely be a farewell that will affect Bruce and make him become Batman.
2) Alfred, our dear Alfred. He always shows up at the worst possible time. Even though he's already caught them twice, instead of causing trouble he continues with his professionalism and concern for young Bruce. He offers to fix the whole mess that mother and son have left behind, even though it's a relationship that is frowned upon by society. Alfred wants to protect the Wayne family at any cost, even its own members. Although in my opinion, it's a bit cruel to make him cleanse the essences of both of them (not even my worst enemy would do that hahaha). But now Martha and Bruce know that they can count on his discretion. I imagine a scene in the future where they are both having sex and Alfred brings some appetizers, leaving them on a table while mother and son continue fucking calmly, instead of getting scared.
3) The cover of Issue 3 is, for me, the best thing so far. We finally get a father-daughter moment between Jim and Barbara. Even though we still have a ways to go before that moment comes, I know it will be worth the wait. What I didn't know is that you'd put Barbara as Batgirl in this story. I thought it would just be between Commissioner and daughter and nothing else. But it sounds great, Batgirl fighting alongside Batman and having to save her father at some point.
4) Speaking of the cover. So far, nothing you've shown on each cover has actually made it into the story. Do you plan to use them as a plot at some point? Because it would be great, with each cover having something that's going to happen in the future, even if it's a few Issues down the road. And since you know I pay attention to details, I really liked your Easter egg in the mirror, behind the Joker: "Garak3D was here!" LOL
5) And finally, the other main course, Vicki Vale and her son Matthew (although I don't know if she had any children in the comics). It's the perfect transition from Gotham being sexually degraded very quickly. Going from mothers and sons poisoned by a toxin in an alley to the TV presenter herself being licked in the pussy by her own naked son live on air is Machiavellianly perverse (I don't know how Vicki convinced the TV network lol). I imagine a scene in the future where the news starts with Vicki fucking directly or with Matthew coming out instead of his mother, like: "Welcome to Gotham tonight, Gothamites! Tonight I, Matthew Vale, will be your host. My mother, Vicki Vale, has had a last-minute personal problem. And by personal I mean that she will be giving me a blowjob during the entire news broadcast, as a gift to your loyalty as viewers" hahahahaha
Looking forward to the next pages, with street images of those protests.
"My son, my choice" (good way to laugh at feminists hahahaha)
Regards
Thanks for reading!
ha ha.
