[Sarah Sins] My Black Breeder (Interracial / Cuckold / Breeding / Hotwife)

[SarahSins]

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https://www.amazon.com/My-Black-Breeder-Couples-Submission-ebook/dp/B0DWTBDZC2?ref_=ast_author_mpb

This is my debut novella! 40 pages of a couple descending into interracial sex, cuckolding, debauchery and breeding. I'd love some feedback and input - especially what parts you enjoyed and what you didn't like. If you like it, I'd love a review on Kindle too (it's free for unlimited members).

Hope you enjoy!!

 

[sandalwoodie]

Hi Sarah, I got an error message when I tried to open this file. The explanation didn't make a lot of sense, but I thought you should know. That's why I just do a copy and paste with my work on this forum.

 

[SarahSins]

Hey Sandal,

Did you try and open it with an epub viewer? I'll attach a PDF for you to try

 

[sandalwoodie]

Ahh, yes! The pdf worked! Thank you so much! I'm about halfway through your story! Lovin' it!
Thanks again!
S

 

[SarahSins]

Ahh, yes! The pdf worked! Thank you so much! I'm about halfway through your story! Lovin' it!
Thanks again!
S

That's great to hear. I'm glad you like it!

 

[oxa4r5t]

That's great to hear. I'm glad you like it!

post the story on darkwanderer and literotica! It will help you to reach wider audience

 

[SarahSins]

post the story on darkwanderer and literotica! It will help you to reach wider audience

That's a good idea. I'll do that!

 

[O_P_T]

That's a good idea. I'll do that!

That's where I first found it. Good story!

One annoying thing about darkwanderer is that it substitutes **** for certain words. As far as I can tell, banned words include: family, dad, daughter, expose (and other variations on this word), drunk.

 

[SarahSins]

That's where I first found it. Good story!

One annoying thing about darkwanderer is that it substitutes **** for certain words. As far as I can tell, banned words include: family, dad, daughter, expose (and other variations on this word), drunk.

Thank you! Glad you liked it

And yeah, I saw that censorship. Kinda threw me, but I think people can use context clues to figure it out lol.

 

[O_P_T]

Thank you! Glad you liked it

And yeah, I saw that censorship. Kinda threw me, but I think people can use context clues to figure it out lol.

Especially since the # of *'s match the letters in the word and there seems to be a limited set of "banned" words.

BTW, if you are looking for other places to post the story, Lushstories is another popular place.

 

[fantafan]

Hits the spot for me. Got any more in you? My only comment would be that with all the porn out there "10 inches" isn't as big as I can imagine any more. You can easily go a lot bigger as far as I'm concerned. Or just use comparisons (above her navel, bigger than her forearm, fist sized, bigger than a tennis ball...) instead.

I put up a 5* review. Cuz, ya know, I want to see more.

 

[SarahSins]

Glad you liked it! I have been pretty busy with work lately, but I have a lot of ideas for the follow up.

 

[fantafan]

Okay, finally reading this now. Sorry for ignoring it for so long. Not sure you're even around anymore...

Pretty great. Only real comment is it should be longer. Yes the girl can be immediately unable to resist the huge cock when she sees it but the changes in her relationship etc should take longer. Even if the story doesn't take a lot of words to get there. "Over the next week..." rather than the same day, etc. When after one session she thinks about not allowing her boyfriend to cum inside her anymore, only Jamal... its too soon. Yes she's unable to resist the huge cock, but decisions like this should take longer. Slow burn. Angst remember?

But that's a minor gripe. Keep writing!