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[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

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tgComic said:
HI Guys, i have been work on few plots in last few months but could not able to complete any of this so i decided start from scratch basically so i will present some of my work. please give your valuable feedback i working on the comics as beginner with 1050Ti graphic card so basically renders took much time sometimes software gets crashed and it is hectic to work on so i have worked on few comics in past but all of them are scraped but i have started working on new Comic Recently As friends with Benefits will complete this comic in any situation so can you please help me with this now i need your valuable feedback on all comics which i uploaded and what should i do which tools should i use or which software should i choose.
also if you have any suggestion regarding how plots will try and work on them. just focusing on this comic right now need to complete it will complete this. but before that please give your valuable feed back
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Friends with benefits had been the most exciting for me! Keep it up.
 

A Latina in need Part 12​

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El Lunar said:

A Latina in need Part 12​

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Her boobs are hilariously large and nice detailing from Litkit showing corset underneath her nighty
 
El Lunar said:
Her boobs are hilariously large and nice detailing from Litkit showing corset underneath her nighty
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Yes , lilkit is expart when it comes to eye appealing! šŸ˜‰
By the way , hanna is also doing great this time ...
Hanna improve lots, but still ,I feel , his models face are still less feminine...maybe it is only for me
 
Jackjons said:
Hanna improve lots, but still ,I feel , his models face are still less feminine...maybe it is only for me
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Hannah has indeed improved a lot but I don't think her models faces are any less feminine. I actually prefer them over the generic bimbo style most of the other artists do.
 
El Lunar said:
Hannah has indeed improved a lot but I don't think her models faces are any less feminine. I actually prefer them over the generic bimbo style most of the other artists do.
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Well , if you put that way then yes it is , atleast they are not bimbo !
But , lilkit's bimbo is the best bimbo I ever seen
 
tgComic said:
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first complete Chapter for Friends with benefits please check it out just give feedback good or bad or any suggestion have processed with few improvements.
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tgComic said:
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Not bad at all. Story looks somethimes like shifthing self but I like yours. Just keep erin penis small as possible.
 
tgComic said:
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Not bad at all , I like Long stories, minimum 50-60 chapters must, if possible 100+ ,
But it is your first comics ,
And trust my word , for the first one , this is looking promising
Yea , you know make the size small , more feminine, and if story want you can just cut the rod and ass the lips down there too ...just saying
 
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