[Melissa N.] Collection

[Nuvolari]

Hi Guys, been working on small story for now this is my first try at comics and writing. but i have some wild fantasies. so i want to picturise them so please leave your feedback here and also i m working with very low end graphic card so adding details will be not easy also i m using daz studio for this if anyone has any suggestion about software and tools which are free and other techniques to optimism scenes and all please help me with that i m open for criticism . And For Lamars story have scrapped one story n which lamars was feminized but i m taking story with the suggestion so working on it will share it in few days or week.View attachment 1373731

Well, a few comments.
- Rendering is not bad, despite the limitations you are working with.
- Plot has a couple weak points but is workable so far. A few things could be solved in dialogue with no need for new renders. Like, for instance, if these two are such close friends, how come the single guy has never met the wife of the one who is being feminized? Oh, and give your characters names, please.
- Text has... issues. Mainly that obviously English is not your first language and you are not really fluent in it. There's all sorts of spelling mistakes (even in the story title) and weird turns of phrase. You might want to try using some computer assistance there. For instance, try writing the dialogue in your native language, run it through Google Translate or Bing Translate or Yandex Translate or Babelfish or whatever works better for you, and then take the output and tweak it if you don't like the result.
- Finally, a better choice of forum for your content might be https://forum.allporncomix.com/thre...issa-822-inspired-comics-stories-artwork.141/ . This one is intended for Melissa's work alone, the one I linked is for other creators who do work similar to hers.

 

[hobojoe22]

Sweet Change 17

 

[mihaluck]

Hi Guys, been working on small story for now this is my first try at comics and writing. but i have some wild fantasies. so i want to picturise them so please leave your feedback here and also i m working with very low end graphic card so adding details will be not easy also i m using daz studio for this if anyone has any suggestion about software and tools which are free and other techniques to optimism scenes and all please help me with that i m open for criticism . And For Lamars story have scrapped one story n which lamars was feminized but i m taking story with the suggestion so working on it will share it in few days or week.View attachment 1373731

You almost did what C_Black do about year in one chapter

 

[Elaine]

reality hits Molly

 

[KingGrim]

reality hits Molly

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I want Molly to get a win but this is a MelissaN story she'll capitulate and be thanking her boss by the end.

 

[Jackjons]

is always better to read a comics when it is complete
but if you are curious to see what happen in the story, start reading it

Yes , and for a long comics like Aphrodite Mirror , I think It is better to start reading after finish.
It is now close to finish, if I am not forgotten it will finish at chapter 28 ,... Or maybe one chapter more 29.....
So , in March end this will gonna be end as well
Then K pop will start.....

 

[Lena Sayers]

Yes , and for a long comics like Aphrodite Mirror , I think It is better to start reading after finish.
It is now close to finish, if I am not forgotten it will finish at chapter 28 ,... Or maybe one chapter more 29.....
So , in March end this will gonna be end as well
Then K pop will start.....

The new K pop didnt click with me, sadly. Melissa has played the race swap card too many times already and I also think that is too similar to the second part of her "Russian girl". I like Aphrodite Mirror a bit more but for me NewbeeTSF is doing currently a better job with their milf transformation story.

 

[hobojoe22]

The Aphrodite Mirror has 30 chapter

 

[mntna]

The new K pop didnt click with me, sadly. Melissa has played the race swap card too many times already and I also think that is too similar to the second part of her "Russian girl". I like Aphrodite Mirror a bit more but for me NewbeeTSF is doing currently a better job with their milf transformation story.

The problem with K-Pop Idol was the rushed race change
One moment he was an american guy pretending to be a younger korean girl, the next he is looking 100% like a real korean girl, not only physically but almost fully mentally (that's the part i hated, i love the slow mental race change)
Melissa did better race changes stories in the past, this one was rushed

one detail that i don't like about Aphrodite's Mirror is that we don't get reminded by Melissa or some of the characters when people are speaking in english or in greek. i wouldn't had minded a note on the bottom of an image where it is told that the characters are speaking english or greek.

The change of the language is one of the most important details in a race-change story.

 

[mntna]

reality hits Molly

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Twisting the victim's mind into making him realize that he wished deep down to be feminized, is a classic in Melissa's stories

instead i feel like, that in Aphrodite's Mirror, Andrew will accept his fate, not because he wished deep down to be a Older Woman, but that living as Elena will lead to a life of love from a Man that want Elena to be his Wife for Real and love from 2 Girls that have no problem accepting Elena as their Real Biological Mother.

 

[Jackjons]

Twisting the victim's mind into making him realize that he wished deep down to be feminized, is a classic in Melissa's stories

instead i feel like, that in Aphrodite's Mirros, Andrew will accept his fate, not because he wished deep down to be a Older Woman, but that living as Elena will lead to a life of love from a Man that want Elena to be his Wife for Real and love from 2 Girls that have no problem accepting Elena as their Real Biological Mother.

It seems that way ...

 

[SaraVega]

Twisting the victim's mind into making him realize that he wished deep down to be feminized, is a classic in Melissa's stories

instead i feel like, that in Aphrodite's Mirror, Andrew will accept his fate, not because he wished deep down to be a Older Woman, but that living as Elena will lead to a life of love from a Man that want Elena to be his Wife for Real and love from 2 Girls that have no problem accepting Elena as their Real Biological Mother.

I think he'll stay as Elena for sure
It's the same in all of her stories, the main character ends up living as the woman he transformed in and he also ends up liking men....

Same formula

 

[@lexx$]

I think he'll stay as Elena for sure
It's the same in all of her stories, the main character ends up living as the woman he transformed in and he also ends up liking men....

Same formula

That's true, I see that all the creators of the TG genre always follow this formula. But that leads me to wonder, is there any story where at least the protagonist manages to return to his old life, or at least where he doesn't change his initial sexual preferences?

 

[Lena Sayers]

That's true, I see that all the creators of the TG genre always follow this formula. But that leads me to wonder, is there any story where at least the protagonist manages to return to his old life, or at least where he doesn't change his initial sexual preferences?

From Melissa, I can only can recall "The Adventures of a Reluctant E-Girl" and "All He Wants For Christmas (whether he knows it or not)" where the main characters keep liking girls at least. Regarding stories where the protagonist get back their old life, most Saphire Foxx stories have the protagonist going back to be a man, but is because there is magic involved.

 

[Jackjons]

From Melissa, I can only can recall "The Adventures of a Reluctant E-Girl" and "All He Wants For Christmas (whether he knows it or not)" where the main characters keep liking girls at least. Regarding stories where the protagonist get back their old life, most Saphire Foxx stories have the protagonist going back to be a man, but is because there is magic involved.

Do you that "ADVENTURE OF RELUCTANT E-GIRL"if you have share it please

 

[cognos]

The Adventures of a Reluctant E-Girl

NOTE: The original files (at E-Hentai.org) are ALL 5.51 MB - a FULL, UNCOMPRESSED 24 bits per pixel. Applying LOSSLESS compression reduces file size by ~80% with NO degradation of the original image

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[Jackjons]

The Adventures of a Reluctant E-Girl

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NOTE: The original files (at E-Hentai.org) are ALL 5.51 MB - a FULL, UNCOMPRESSED 24 bits per pixel. Applying LOSSLESS compression reduces file size by ~80% with NO degradation of the original image

original EGIRL01.png = 5.51 MB - compressed EGIRL01.png = 971 KB

Thank you

 

[mntna]

almost 1 month since the last part of Aphrodite's Mirror
i'm dying to know who the mysterious woman in the bar at the end of the last part was

 

[Jackjons]

I heard that , it is carnival Time in Brazil,
So , it might be the reason, it is festival time afterall.... But I am not sure though.

 

[transmorpho]

Yes, it is Carnival time in Brazil, for some it is a time of celebration, for others it is a reason to have a long weekend.