And the art sucks
Like square heads, too skinny yet huge asses on the women, the girl’s bikini not fitting I suppose it intentional for the perv factor, just weird
Uh, I would. If we can forgive all his underage content, I think we can forgive a woman with a exaggerated female proportions.
People forget Jab's background is rooted in Disney style character design, which is what this looks like to me. The body designs almost remind me of a 2D Incredible's-style piece. But I will agree the story is the problem. It has an essence, but it lacks finesse. That's the case with most of his work, sadly. He gets so amped up with the initial concept, but then the story is quickly reduced to barely tangible reasons for characters to do anything. Except for a few extraordinary cases (looking at you, Dat Ass).