[MrFoxx] Broken

[Gnaparelli]

The son is an asshole, and it ruins the story for me. I hope he has a real nice friend, who the mother takes a liking to, and lets the nice, kind, boy get her instead.

Are you completely crazy? The main theme in this story is incest, taboo sex, so no friends, nephews and similar bullshit. C'mon man... if you don't like incest stories, i can understand, otherwise you shouldn't never ever bring no goddamn "friends" between mom and son, or father and daughter in incest themed stories. Extremely irritating. It's obvious that you have problems with this type of theme, otherwise you would ask for another story , with kind and nice son as main character seducing his mom... no friends.

 

[MONSTER-bater]

Are you completely crazy? The main theme in this story is incest, taboo sex, so no friends, nephews and similar bullshit. C'mon man... if you don't like incest stories, i can understand, otherwise you shouldn't never ever bring no goddamn "friends" between mom and son, or fahter and daughter in incest themed stories. Extremely irritating. It's obvious that you have problems with this type of theme, otherwise you would ask for another story , with kind and nice son as main character seducing his mom... no friends.

I said the son is an asshole, not the incest concept. The incest concept is the most important piece here, but the fact that the son is a dickhead, ruins the story for me. It's beyond cliche' already. I said previously, that I would prefer a nicer son to get the goodies from Mommy, not this asshole. If you like assholes getting the goods, just for the sake of incest, then more power to you.

 

[Blackwell]

I love this one and am curiuous which way it goes

 

[MrSpock]

Pages 35 to 42 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

 

[robobob]

Pages 35 to 42 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

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Thanks for sharing

 

[llermito]

Pages 35 to 42 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

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Thanks for give us some joy!!!

 

[Gnaparelli]

Hm, maybe it was kind of rushed, there should have been some more realistic convincing, like this it proceeds too rapidly. And that "sexy-shop style" lingerie is stupid, vulgar, not exciting, just too much.

 

[MONSTER-bater]

YAWN. It's even worse than I thought it would be.

 

[Blackwell]

Thank you..

 

[Lord Xanatos]

In other Breaking News...

 

[Blackwell]

To bad, thouht it was a nice storyline. Even as things went fast and the son was indeed an ahole. But as I know understand it was on commision. So maybe thats why. Well lets see if there is a future for this story.. And even if there's non then we have our own fantasy

 

[MONSTER-bater]

Maybe 'Marce' was reading our overall comments, and felt his characterizations were wrong, and felt the need to abandon his story ?

 

[Blackwell]

Maybe.. but I think the story went to fast.. mom sees sons jerking off. She fantasies. Son knows and shows his dick.. And the next thing mom is nakes dressed in lingery. Think it needs some TLC and rework but the storyline can be a great one. Well to bad we wont know.. but still its fun .

 

[Lord Xanatos]

No, he wanted the son and the Mother that way.

The characterizations were based on his outline and our conversations.

I don't think he was reading the overall comments, considering He doesn't speak English that well or fluently. He wouldn't translate most comments to know what's being said.

He wanted more commissions, but, strangely, he just ceased communications.

 

[Blackwell]

To bad..

 

[MrSpock]

Pages 43 to 53 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

 

[MrSpock]

Pages 54 to 64 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

 

[robobob]

Pages 54 to 64 in FHD resolution (1080p - AIupscaled2x), no watermarks, translated from russian.

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Thnaks for sharing

 

[Nippur]

The mother likes her son treats her like a piece of shit, It is not my cup of tea but It is a great graphic work though

 

[Falzonito]

thanks for your sharing, il love very much the M.Foxx storys