[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

prabhas said:
To be frank

Not up to the mark

Totally disappointed

I'm expecting more interesting storyline
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It's because he slept with her quickly and we didn't see who she is and why she wanted to sleep with him, because we don't know anything about her, she's not like the delivery guy who gave us an idea of who she was and we already knew her intentions.
 
But it's better to encourage Zetto, so that he can deliver a better story and not demand too much of him, because if we continue like this the story will only fall further.
 
Thank you for sharing and uploading, shana 🙏

On topic: I do agree with some of the comments, the story and plot in this one was a bit lacking. Some things seemed a bit random/rushed and I think the amazing art "saved" the chapter.

Personally, it felt like this one was a Special instead of an actual chapter. Don't get me wrong, I still enjoyed it - mainly because of the amazing art. And to be honest, my expectations weren't very high considering I'm more looking forward to the Homeless chapter and I hope we'll be able to see that one soon.

Ultimately, the art was great as usual. The officer turned out hotter than I thought and Lizana looked extremely sexy as always. And to defend Zetto, not every chapter can be a 10/10. Most of us can enjoy these stories for free and I still think the author is one of the best that are currently out there. Finally - and repeating myself once more, here's to hoping the Homeless chapter is finished soon and we can get our hands on it 😁
 
Can someone please help in rearrange the chapter 6 I am all shuffled 🥲 , cause I wanted to make pdf of it and upload it here
 
hmm, everyone in this story is consumed by desire, that why the title is Sinful Lust. The officer blushed when she heard old man describe daily noises, perhaps she's also unfulfilled like Liz, I don't know. But the officer only blushed, and after that we have sex scene, Zetto rush too fast.
Liz and Zetto's art is reason i decided to stay here. 🥴
 
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