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srajat11rs
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You have made your spot in heaven, we all bless you my friend.
writerinabox
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Toxic Attraction 31 (Alternate Universe)
Hi everyone, this is Writerinabox. I have been following the crazy journey of Dan and Sarah like all of you and admire Don Silverās work. I just got a crazy idea after reading chapter 30. Just want to let you guys know, I do not intend to write any further chapters; this just seemed like a fun plotline to explore, and all of you might enjoy it. I might not get permission to publish this anywhere else. So, Iām only posting this here. Feel free to share it with anyone or anywhere you think might enjoy reading it. Please do share your thoughts and comments below. Would love to hear your feedback. ([email protected]) I wrote an alternate universe plot forNeighbour Chronicles. Do check it out. I have pasted the link below.
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Hi everyone, this is Writerinabox. I have been following the crazy journey of Dan and Sarah like all of you and admire Don Silverās work. I just got a crazy idea after reading chapter 30. Just want to let you guys know, I do not intend to write any further chapters; this just seemed like a fun plotline to explore, and all of you might enjoy it. I might not get permission to publish this anywhere else. So, Iām only posting this here. Feel free to share it with anyone or anywhere you think might enjoy reading it. Please do share your thoughts and comments below. Would love to hear your feedback. ([email protected]) I wrote an alternate universe plot forNeighbour Chronicles. Do check it out. I have pasted the link below.
Neighborly Chronicles AU - Pt. 11 - Loving Wives - Literotica.com
Amber and Bill's journey continues...
RDW
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Man, Toxic Attraction is just sucking.
I get it, Don has a ton of subscribers hanging on every word, so he's going to drag it out forever for the money. But this is just so... excessive.
And wtf is it with the pregnancy risk stuff? It's like Don has forgotten what he has written and just keeps making new shit up.
First - Lester lies about his vasectomy. Don teases us with the sabotaged condoms, then no condom. Sarah goes along, but it's oh so risky... good thing Lester is fixed! Haha, sneaky Lester is inseminating her and she's going to end up pregnant.
Lester inseminates her about two thousand times. Oh, wait... Sarah is on birth control. But that's okay, Lester is commissioning someone to custom-produce identical birth control packaging with placebos to trick her into getting pregnant. Right.
Now, Lester is going to get his vasectomy "reversed".
Is she on birth control or not? If so, why all of the nonsense acting like she's risking anything? Why the whole fake vasectomy reversal stuff... she just fucked Otis bare, with him talking about knocking her up.
Just. Stop.
The sex scenes are hot. The "Lester can do anything he wants to anyone" stuff is so old and tired. And the random appearances of this shadowy organization who for some reason give a shit about a midlevel nobody like Dan - but they of course only appear every now and then - are jarring and nonsensical.
Dude. Wrap up the plot, start a new story. Quit making up new shit that doesn't fit. This is getting close to "somehow, Palpatine returned".
I get it, Don has a ton of subscribers hanging on every word, so he's going to drag it out forever for the money. But this is just so... excessive.
And wtf is it with the pregnancy risk stuff? It's like Don has forgotten what he has written and just keeps making new shit up.
First - Lester lies about his vasectomy. Don teases us with the sabotaged condoms, then no condom. Sarah goes along, but it's oh so risky... good thing Lester is fixed! Haha, sneaky Lester is inseminating her and she's going to end up pregnant.
Lester inseminates her about two thousand times. Oh, wait... Sarah is on birth control. But that's okay, Lester is commissioning someone to custom-produce identical birth control packaging with placebos to trick her into getting pregnant. Right.
Now, Lester is going to get his vasectomy "reversed".
Is she on birth control or not? If so, why all of the nonsense acting like she's risking anything? Why the whole fake vasectomy reversal stuff... she just fucked Otis bare, with him talking about knocking her up.
Just. Stop.
The sex scenes are hot. The "Lester can do anything he wants to anyone" stuff is so old and tired. And the random appearances of this shadowy organization who for some reason give a shit about a midlevel nobody like Dan - but they of course only appear every now and then - are jarring and nonsensical.
Dude. Wrap up the plot, start a new story. Quit making up new shit that doesn't fit. This is getting close to "somehow, Palpatine returned".
john_doe6711
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Thank you for this..been wanting to read this since it came out..
john_doe6711
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Anyone got the later chapters of SOMETHING'S OFFby get bugged..?
Dante2024
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Couldnāt agree more. And now itās just repeating the earlier chapters where Dan got fired and they needed Lester for money. This time itās her getting fired..
I get it. Itās a huge cash cow for him but you gotta give the other characters some wins now and again. Itās just Lester wins every chapter itās getting tired.