[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

[Danuta]

Well,, it's a well-written scene but... it's kind of too long for a porn-comic build-up, i think. Or better, if a reader had at least 100 pages to read in one update, with a lots of (incestuous) sex after this, it would be ok, like this it's kind of frustrating. Even though, the fact everything feels like a "mainstream" comic/story/movie actually could make everything even much more exciting once we'll have actual hardcore sex scenes , especially with detective and her son... really can't wait. This whole idea is great, the problem is that with current technology artist needs a loooots of time to transform idea to finished product. So i'm afraid we will have to wait another month at least to see this great mom/son couple finally fuck. Yeah, i would try to add more sexuality in this comic, whether with words, thoughts, dialogues or obviously images. The overall , morbid, uncomfortable tension is still there, and i like it. Now you should increase it.

Don't you ever get tired? How often will you keep reposting that? You've made your point, and by now you must have realized that:
-This style of storytelling doesn't satisfy you.
-Garak will stay true to his storytelling (bless him)

This is not your style of comic -deal with it and move on to comics you like!

[PS] don't write "we" because the majority in this thread absolutely loves Garak's works. Including myself.

 

[Scorpius]

lol, love it. Garak turns all that business of the loudmouths and weirdos into a plot point. It’s so funny watching these anonymous crazies get frustrated at an artist posting a free comic

 

[robobob]

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Thank you for sharing

 

[Steelsword40]

One the problems of a lot 3d artist in my opinion is endless sex scene's with out a story, characters , motivation, human feelings . Just an endless loop of different sex positions. Now a lot of these guys do great 3d art. and if that's what you want, that's fine. But I want something more human related. Garak keeps me interested to the end, Right now he's building up to something that's hopefully going to be great. Also I'm not as hard on Gnaparelli as you guys, I think his heart is in the right place he just needs to learn patience, I've always like his input since the day's of 8 forum. Now unto Garak3d's current 19 images the art as usual is excellent. Jace bringing the package to Gordons office took me off balance. I'm intrigued. The stuff with this new character Pipe, has me very suspicious, could this ?... Naw. I gotta stop guessing at stuff. Great Job Garak3d , stellar stuff.

 

[Bellerophon]

One the problems of a lot 3d artist in my opinion is endless sex scene's with out a story, characters , motivation, human feelings . Just an endless loop of different sex positions. Now a lot of these guys do great 3d art. and if that's what you want, that's fine. But I want something more human related. Garak keeps me interested to the end, Right now he's building up to something that's hopefully going to be great. Also I'm not as hard on Gnaparelli as you guys, I think his heart is in the right place he just needs to learn patience, I've always like his input since the day's of 8 forum. Now unto Garak3d's current 19 images the art as usual is excellent. Jace bringing the package to Gordons office took me off balance. I'm intrigued. The stuff with this new character Pipe, has me very suspicious, could this ?... Naw. I gotta stop guessing at stuff. Great Job Garak3d , stellar stuff.

Garak could remove the sex scenes and it would be a good super hero story. He understands the genre better than some professional writers. Garak FTW!

 

[Mrh69]

Hi Garak3D and everyone.

Another update that brings us ever closer to the decisive moments of this story. Nerves, tension, low morale, and now the media provocation is added. You're an expert at bringing the world of Batman into these types of comics, Garak3D. And your attention to the little details, like Jace's shirt you mentioned yesterday, is always a highlight of your work.

On another note, we can see what's obvious: Jace is completely obsessed with the "mysterious milf" whose "mysterious friend" keeps sending him pictures of her. So obsessed that he hasn't even stopped to check the bed she's in. He's thinking with the wrong head, and that's going to lead him to the wrong hands. I think his mom will have to come and rescue him

You're enjoying taking detective Kendrick to the breaking point, aren't you? With everything on her mind and everything she's been through, and now she's facing the worst of tabloid journalism, it's clear that at some point she'll break mentally and do something she'd never have dreamed of, something several people in Gotham have already done.

We have two new characters: Tom Pipe and his camerawoman. It was just what was missing: a media activist eager for the limelight and only here to provoke. I hope Kendrick lands a couple of good punches (he has a very punchable face). Although I don't know if that will make her look bad with Gordon. The people who shout and criticize the most are usually the ones who have the most to keep quiet and hide. And I hope we get to see more of the camerawoman; I'm sure she has an interesting backstory.

About the box, it still raises my doubts and I'm eager to know what's inside. I have two theories:

-It's said to be a "gift from his daughter". So, it's not a bomb as such, but something more for Commissioner Gordon. Perhaps a message or even images from Barbara. We haven't heard from either of them in quite some time.

-It could actually be something that affects the entire GCPD. Remember, Poison Ivy works with the Joker. So it could be a weapon of some kind.

Finally, regarding how Jace's "mysterious friend" obtained those images, I think I have an idea how he did it. But I'd rather leave the suspense for when the time comes for the reveal.

Best regards, everyone

 

[Garak3D]

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[Mrh69]

Good morning, Garak3D.

Interesting new footage.

I was expecting Kendrick to knock Tom down with a punch and a tooth or two flying around, but I guess that'll come later.

I love the camerawoman's attitude (who already has a name). I don't know if she's acting this way because it's her usual attitude or because she's in the mood for action. Time will tell.

Kendrick loses her temper again and starts complaining about it. Something tells me Gordon won't be too happy about this when it's released to the public, and it will worsen his relationship with Kendrick (further affecting her mental state).

I think Tom has given Kendrick the key to getting closer to the Joker (mothers and sons lol).

We finally see Barbara again, who seems quite relaxed and cheerful. That collision with Jace looked more like a headbutt than anything else . I thought Gordon would appear first, but it looks like Barbara will be the first to see what's inside the box.

Let's see how Jace gets out of this situation.

PS: Will Taylor Swift appear in this story?

Best regards

 

[robobob]

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Thanks for sharing .

 

[Steelsword40]

Good morning, Garak3D.

Interesting new footage.

I was expecting Kendrick to knock Tom down with a punch and a tooth or two flying around, but I guess that'll come later.

I love the camerawoman's attitude (who already has a name). I don't know if she's acting this way because it's her usual attitude or because she's in the mood for action. Time will tell.

Kendrick loses her temper again and starts complaining about it. Something tells me Gordon won't be too happy about this when it's released to the public, and it will worsen his relationship with Kendrick (further affecting her mental state).

I think Tom has given Kendrick the key to getting closer to the Joker (mothers and sons lol).

We finally see Barbara again, who seems quite relaxed and cheerful. That collision with Jace looked more like a headbutt than anything else . I thought Gordon would appear first, but it looks like Barbara will be the first to see what's inside the box.

Let's see how Jace gets out of this situation.

PS: Will Taylor Swift appear in this story?

Best regards

Taylor Swift... What the heck ???.

 

[chulathul]

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Thankyou for these new pages Garak3D

 

[cooldude2324]

The camera lady is kinda hot, would be nice if she had a son at home.

 

[Mrh69]

Taylor Swift... What the heck ???.

It's just a tongue-in-cheek question. Since Garak3D has put so much effort into a shirt Jace has been wearing since he first appeared... Though Taylor is also likely to appear, I think

 

[Garak3D]

It's just a tongue-in-cheek question. Since Garak3D has put so much effort into a shirt Jace has been wearing since he first appeared... Though Taylor is also likely to appear, I think

Ha ha ha, honestly I put that on his shirt because I think I heard Taylor Swift hated it. But since I think it was just that she hated all AI images of her. Just me being a dink more than anything … although I do have a model that resembles Taylor Swift

 

[Mrh69]

Ha ha ha, honestly I put that on his shirt because I think I heard Taylor Swift hated it. But since I think it was just that she hated all AI images of her. Just me being a dink more than anything … although I do have a model that resembles Taylor Swift

As you see fit. The truth is, I find the image on the T-shirt hilarious. It's these crazy things that just make you laugh

 

[Yeah_Right...]

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This made my day.

The stuff with this new character Pipe, has me very suspicious, could this ?... Naw. I gotta stop guessing at stuff.

Hehe, imagining him with a greasepaint face?

 

[Steelsword40]

Shush !

 

[Steelsword40]

I like Barbara Gordons design, cute and sexy hot, very demure.

 

[Mrh69]

By the way, now that Batman and Wonder Woman have had a moment of relaxation, I wouldn't be surprised, with the progressive situation in Gotham, if something like this happened (It's a photo, not a video)

 

[brotech11]

Garak, give us a pre-Labor day gift or a teaser for My Mummy 2. BTW, is there a plan for another, new comic? What do you feel about a Jurassic Park theme?