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[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

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just those great HD pages..
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brown_playboy said:
Plot: Daniel drugs his dad and bangs Lana. Peter bangs the two girls in a separate comic. Alex wakes up and discovers Lana and Daniel since the drug wasn't 100% potent, disappointed goes to Martha and Sophia and bangs them and gets discovered by Lana. Daniel blames him and Lana serves him divorce papers. Disappointed Alex goes on a drive drunk and ends up in an accident dying instantly. After his funeral Lana and Daniel move to a place where no one knows them with Alex's huge life insurance money. During all these events Lana and Daniel are fucking each other at every chance presented even on the day of Alex's funeral. In the new place Daniel marries Lana by forging documents, bribing government officials. Lana decides she wants to be knocked up and stops her pills. They have a hot honeymoon and continuous fucking sessions at their new home as husband and wife. Eventually three months into their marriage Lana discovers she's pregnant. Fast forward few years Lana has entered menopause but gets fucked by Daniel multiple times a day. They live happily together with their three kids each born 2 years apart.
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Well It is a good option in order to move on the history and get out from this repeatitive cuckolding circle, Mischievous Daniel drugs or get rid of Alex someway, fuck Lana, Alex don't realise anything besides being drugged or being drunk, etc, At least Daval should get rid of Alex divorce, dead, etc.
 
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Gnaparelli said:
This is a really great example why artists should end their stories at some point and start something new, before comic/story becomes like this, no sense whatsoever. Crazy plots like this just make everything kind of sad, and make readers who are interested in good incest plots really frustrated. Most stupid thing is that artists , in my opinion , would actually gain more subscribers and members by starting new plots, new stories, people get curious, want to see that first sex encounters (especially in incest theme). Like this, they are only losing. Absurd.
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It’s the same circle jerk of carpers hating on the stupidity of the argument on a pirate site.

Don’t like it? Stop watching. Want to change the story buy the artist or make your own.

All this is clog.
 
Pascal68 said:
I always thought that Daval3D should partner with a real writer rather than listen to his fans who are leading him in the wrong direction.
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His fans are destroying his comics one by one I'm saying this since forever but that makes me a hater by some stupid retards lmao I knew time would give me the reason.
 
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jackryan said:
I am not in favour of stopping id
It has a lot of potential just daval should be willing to take some risks.
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Risks like using Sofia Martha and Rose in sex scenes? problem is Daval is such a puppet coward cuck towards his subs so no wonder why his comics arent the same anymore.
 
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idkman said:
Damn, not only is the story super boring with the same old shit as always, but now it's bordeline criminal and Daniel has gone completely insane. First he robs kiara's dress, gives it to his mom but somehow she's in the wrong for doing the same to him with his money. MAKE IT MAKE SENSE FFS
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This is what happens when an artist let his subs gatekeep his work , disgusting to see
 
brown_playboy said:
Plot: Daniel drugs his dad and bangs Lana. Peter bangs the two girls in a separate comic. Alex wakes up and discovers Lana and Daniel since the drug wasn't 100% potent, disappointed goes to Martha and Sophia and bangs them and gets discovered by Lana. Daniel blames him and Lana serves him divorce papers. Disappointed Alex goes on a drive drunk and ends up in an accident dying instantly. After his funeral Lana and Daniel move to a place where no one knows them with Alex's huge life insurance money. During all these events Lana and Daniel are fucking each other at every chance presented even on the day of Alex's funeral. In the new place Daniel marries Lana by forging documents, bribing government officials. Lana decides she wants to be knocked up and stops her pills. They have a hot honeymoon and continuous fucking sessions at their new home as husband and wife. Eventually three months into their marriage Lana discovers she's pregnant. Fast forward few years Lana has entered menopause but gets fucked by Daniel multiple times a day. They live happily together with their three kids each born 2 years apart.
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Pascal68 said:
I always thought that Daval3D should partner with a real writer rather than listen to his fans who are leading him in the wrong direction.
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Spot on.
I like Rawly Rawls as a writer and he does partner with artists for most stories, but he has sooo many problems with them and it takes sooo long for an illustrated story to get finished (if it even does) ......I mean I'm talking one 12-15 page chapter every 2-3 months on average - we're talking years and years for an illustrated story to be completed......it's fucking nuts.
I wish Rawls and Daval would team up, I'd be pretty confident that they could crank out at least a couple great stories every year.....now that is something my tight ass would pay for!
 
jackittard said:
Spot on.
I like Rawly Rawls as a writer and he does partner with artists for most stories, but he has sooo many problems with them and it takes sooo long for an illustrated story to get finished (if it even does) ......I mean I'm talking one 12-15 page chapter every 2-3 months on average - we're talking years and years for an illustrated story to be completed......it's fucking nuts.
I wish Rawls and Daval would team up, I'd be pretty confident that they could crank out at least a couple great stories every year.....now that is something my tight ass would pay for!
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It won't work rawly writes in novel style while daval makes comics
 
jackryan said:
It won't work rawly writes in novel style while daval makes comics
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I disagree, they are interchangeable styles, with a little work.....and don't forget in my dream scenario, Daval is only engaged as the artist, he would just need to capture the vibe of the scene as written by Rawls.....easy, peasy. JD Seal has done it one way for Rawls and the other for himself.
 
jackittard said:
I disagree, they are interchangeable styles, with a little work.....and don't forget in my dream scenario, Daval is only engaged as the artist, he would just need to capture the vibe of the scene as written by Rawls.....easy, peasy. JD Seal has done it one way for Rawls and the other for himself.
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She fired JDseal. So, I’m not sure that’s really working.

Rawly is okay, but I think she gets caught in a formulaic rut and oftentimes believes she’s a better writer than she really is. However, she’s writing erotica and generally better than most by far.
 
jibraun said:
How did Alex open the door without making the bottle fall? Does the bottle take a step back when Alex opens the door, only to approach Alex to introduce itself? It must be, because Alex drinks it later without suspicion.
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This is not the first mistake Daval has made. They are several in his comics. I've already pointed them out to him. He doesn't care.
 
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