[JL78] Valentina's choice

[JL78]

Part 7 (Page 140-149)

 

[dogg2w2w]

Cool stories... Thanks for the uploads...

 

[JL78]

Cool stories... Thanks for the uploads...

Thanks for your kind words

 

[TChamb]

Uhhh…sorry. Just saw you are the creator who posted here. Usually, one don’t get pat on the back… so I will do it now.

Nice work! The story is not my cup of tea, but it’s well-crafted with patients and it creates tension. Nice!
Also: DForce! Nice thing with the blanked (yeah, I saw that). Usually, people don’t put in that much effort. Thanks!
Lighting is nice. Could be more shadows/contrast for me, but this is just my taste. You seem to “pull all the stings” like Page_034 with motion blur. Good effort!
On the other hand, you might want to look into camera work, like "12 standard camera shots" (many youtube videos) and the “rule of third”. Because the right side of Page_103…it’s just wrong :--)

Really like the quality! Keep up the good work!

 

[JL78]

Part 8 (Page 150-159)

 

[JL78]

Part 8 (Page 160-169)

 

[JL78]

Part 9 (Page 170-179)

 

[JL78]

Part 9 (Page 180-188)

 

[JL78]

Part 10 (Page 190-203)
Page 189 does not exist; it has been skipped in the numbering. Sorry.

 

[Falzonito]

Thanks for this update, the story is very good.
But isn't page 189 missing?

 

[JL78]

Thanks for this update, the story is very good.
But isn't page 189 missing?

You're right, I've added a note about that.

Thanks for pointing it out.

 

[JL78]

Part 10 (Page 204-216)

 

[SilverDawn]

Did we skip 217-224? Or is it jut numbering issue?

 

[Falzonito]

thanks a lot for this update.
But where are the pages 217-224 ?
Thanks for your answer

 

[JL78]

Part 11 (Page 217-228)

 

[JL78]

thanks a lot for this update.
But where are the pages 217-224 ?
Thanks for your answer

Thanks for pointing that out. It was my mistake in manual numbering.

In future comics, I'll use automatic numbering and it should be better...

 

[JL78]

Part 11 (Page 229-240)

 

[Professor Sinister]

@JL78, what is The Rizzi Family about? Is it also NTR? What about the son and daughter? How do they fit in?

 

[JL78]

@JL78, what is The Rizzi Family about? Is it also NTR? What about the son and daughter? How do they fit in?

Thank you, Professor, for the question about "The Rizzi Family".
The story won't be NTR based and will follow a choral progression, that is, with multiple "stories within a story."
How will the twins interact? They will be the protagonists of two exciting but separate stories. However, we're only at the beginning, and this will be a rather long comic, and who knows what might happen...

 

[Professor Sinister]

@JL78 Page 189 is missing. Is this a numbering error or is that page missing?

Also, the comic ends with Page 368 but the epilogue starts with Page 377. Are there missing pages?