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Sur_GalaChad
Active member
It's fiction lol this happens all the time
Anna Shapard
Member
that is not the point, it is an insult to intelligence! "Fiction" is NOT an excuse for a plot not to make sense!
Otherwise you could easily save yourself the Effort with Sci Fi series and films too!
Sur_GalaChad
Active member
But this is a common plot device in this medium all artists do it
Jackjons
Well-known member
This type of situation save a lot of effort for the author for creating scenario for the acceptance of the patient, it is a lot of work . So for skipping all those Hard work and brain works, just make it like this ...... Save the hard work with some illogical shit and vola ... Here we are 
Anna Shapard
Member
and when everyone jumps off the bridge, do you follow them?
If "everyone's doing it," that's one more reason to do things DIFFERENTLY! Otherwise, you'll just get lost in a sea of mediocrity!
Jackjons
Well-known member
Comon, it is a common in gender change comics, what are you expecting from a porn and fetish is logic, realistic. People read it because of fetish and become horny, not for logic, science etc etc . If you are finding logic & science in a gender change porn comics, then you are in a wrong place.
If you don't like or having problems,you can ignore it , or read other comics which suits your test, but please do not start arguing here .
Let others enjoy it peacefully.
Thank you
Nuvolari
Active member
Funny thing I have noticed...
I read a lot of Internet fiction. Some are so well written to rival big-name professional authors, some would need a lot of creative writing classes to achieve the heightened status of "mediocrity."
And some, frankly, is wank fiction.
The thing I have noticed, is that when going for the wank, some of my favourites end up being stories which have a lot of problems otherwise... bad dialogue, lack of verisimilitude, plot holes you could drive a Death Star through...
But they do the wank part quite well. So I tolerate a lot more from these stories than I would from my nonwank stories.
You can see that in the porn movie industry. They rely on quite old and tired clichés and plots that make no sense whatsoever... but they still make a lot of money, because their customers are focusing on the wank part and frankly, they don't want to be distracted by witty dialogue and complex plots.
I read a lot of Internet fiction. Some are so well written to rival big-name professional authors, some would need a lot of creative writing classes to achieve the heightened status of "mediocrity."
And some, frankly, is wank fiction.
The thing I have noticed, is that when going for the wank, some of my favourites end up being stories which have a lot of problems otherwise... bad dialogue, lack of verisimilitude, plot holes you could drive a Death Star through...
But they do the wank part quite well. So I tolerate a lot more from these stories than I would from my nonwank stories.
You can see that in the porn movie industry. They rely on quite old and tired clichés and plots that make no sense whatsoever... but they still make a lot of money, because their customers are focusing on the wank part and frankly, they don't want to be distracted by witty dialogue and complex plots.
Jackjons
Well-known member
Facts.
Now i will give you an example for your explanation
For best story with no wanky stuff is currently "Aphrodite mirror".
With that great story with perfect suspense and most realistic as much as possible with almost zero plot hole , mellissa tried hard for making explanation for each & everyone move , which might looks like a plot hole at the beginning but later explained it well for creating a proper plot.
But , people really not like it much, because there is less "fun" stuff and more complex explanation.
On the other hand for wanky stuff with a lot of plot holes - lilkit ( almost every story) and many more , but people are liking it , why ? People want to see that , no one wants to read 100 chapters of boring explanation and then see only a" kiss"
SO , if you add proper explanation in a comic, it would be less interesting, and authors knows that very well, they can create those proper well explained story but subscribe will drop, and they have to make some money from it ,
Mellissa like author can bare it , mellissa has her own cult followers, they will stick with her no matter what , she earned those subscriber with her Hard work for many years, so she has the liberty to experiment, but new author don't have that foundation, so they need to feed viewrs what they want to feed .
That is it , ..... After all at the end of the day Money matters more
KingGrim
Member
I've never cared for the 'wank' literally take or leave it is my response, I'm in it for the transformation and drama from said transformation. and if the story is good then great! but with the sheer amount of TG transformation fiction i've consumed repeated tropes and plotholes stand out.
I love and loath 'Like father, like daughter' by Littlekit, great transformations enjoyable art, but it completely sidesteps, to the point of exclusion the Titular daughter that David started on the path that led to Daisy,
Jackjons
Well-known member
Lol
don't talk about "like father like daughter" I bet it is a Mistry for lilkit herself
as a transformation story it is good enjoyable but where is the daughter lol , it should be like that husband & daughter become friends, go to college together, party together and dates together or similar and sex together, their bond should be like bff or sister or something similar, but someone "daughter " was not there , The title should be like " husbend to wife " or "husbend to college girl" or " second life "
snow10
New member
While I agree that the daughter you first learn about going absent in the story should have been addressed somehow, have you both thought that maybe the "titular daughter" you speak of is not her, but the daughter from the past that he didn't know he had, who also happens to be his new best friend?Lol
I bet it is a Mistry for lilkit herself
The title should be like " husbend to wife " or "husbend to college girl" or " second life "
Jackjons
Well-known member
You have a nice theory here ,TBH , i never thought about it , and i guess no one thought about it
Jackjons
Well-known member
Thank you
yano2mch
Professional Geeky Perv
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Ronald was given a bra and a dress and soon was looking like a slutty emo, with big breasts not well hidden in low-cut body tight dress. He was hungry, so he ate and asked Dianne.
“What else did he do?”
“He gave you some sort of implant I think as well as a tummy tuck.”
“My smooth skin?”
“Oh, that was me, I waxed you after the treatment, can’t have a hairy woman.”
“What’s happening today?”
“Nothing, you need to recover, tomorrow, we'll take you out and test your new look by returning to the mall, there is a shop that will have the last part of the disguise.”
Ronald rested and tried to adjust to the different shape and weight of his body. He struggled but with some help he managed to learn how to work around it. He went to sleep wearing nothing and woke up hoping it was a dream only to see the female body he had. After breakfast, Dianne drove Ronald back to the mall and walked right through. Extra security was walking around but no one gave Ronald who was dressed in a tight, scoop- neck maroon top that barely covered her belly and a mid-thigh length black pleather skirt that went high up her torso - that showed his long smooth legs. He was also forced to put on black 3-inch heels with side buckles and open toes. Yesterday he was told to practice. Dianne led Ronald towards a shop, and he felt his heart increase. Dianne walked right past the mall security that chased him at the beginning of the week and into a body shop.
“Hey Teagan, this is Veronica I was talking about, you able to do your thing.”
“Of course, Di, nice to meet you Veronica.”
“Hi, what thing?”
“Don’t be silly, Ronnie, Teagan here is going to give you a couple of studs, some hoop earrings and a temp tattoo.”
“Tattoo.”
“Oh, that was meant to be a surprise, come on, take a seat.”
Ronald was about to run out the door when one of the security guards entered.
“Excuse me ladies, I recognized a voice... who is it the one we spoke to on Monday.”
“That would be me?” Dianne said before looking at Teagan and Ronald.
“Can we have a word with you in our office, Miss you can resume your work.”
Ronald felt relieved for a second before looking at Teagan
“What type of studs and where is the tattoo
“The tattoo is temporary and it will be on your collarbone.”
“Very well, let’s get it over with, my lift is being questioned.”
“Yeah, on Monday, some little thief stole a whole lot of jewelry, the reward for it’s find has gone up since the shop discovered that one of the items was actually a display piece donated by some wealthy estate.”
Ronald listened as Teagan put big loop earrings in his ears, a stud at the top.
“Okay, now for the next stud.”
Ronald gasped, as the stud was put into his nose and then then another in his belly button. They were all black opals, except for the false gold loops. Then Teagan worked on the tattoo, until Ronald was shown the outline of the small black heart.
“That’s pretty good, how long will it last?”
“It can be removed, but I suggest you leave it for at least a month.”
“Okay. I don’t really want it for that long, but I can cover it up with makeup.”
Ronald stood up and was checking out the belly button stud when he heard Dianne.
“Veronica that’s you, wow nice heart, listen, the security guard had footage of the man running into the shop and heading for the changing room, they also have footage of that girl with the wig. I have to describe her to the police, so I have to go to the station, Veronica, are you happy to stay at the mall until I get back, I am taking you to the train station tonight.”
“That should be fine.”
“Great, I will be back in two hours. Buy that new phone and message me, also don’t forget to have your picture taken in the booth.”
---- something missing ----
girl with the wig. I have to describe her to the police, so I have to go to the station, Veronica, are you happy to stay at the mall until I get back, I am taking you to the train station tonight.”
“That should be fine.”
“Great, I will be back in two hours. Buy that new phone and message me, also don’t forget to have your picture taken in the booth.”
Ronald walked out and watched as Dianne headed for the carpark.
“What am I going to do for two hours?”
“What else did he do?”
“He gave you some sort of implant I think as well as a tummy tuck.”
“My smooth skin?”
“Oh, that was me, I waxed you after the treatment, can’t have a hairy woman.”
“What’s happening today?”
“Nothing, you need to recover, tomorrow, we'll take you out and test your new look by returning to the mall, there is a shop that will have the last part of the disguise.”
Ronald rested and tried to adjust to the different shape and weight of his body. He struggled but with some help he managed to learn how to work around it. He went to sleep wearing nothing and woke up hoping it was a dream only to see the female body he had. After breakfast, Dianne drove Ronald back to the mall and walked right through. Extra security was walking around but no one gave Ronald who was dressed in a tight, scoop- neck maroon top that barely covered her belly and a mid-thigh length black pleather skirt that went high up her torso - that showed his long smooth legs. He was also forced to put on black 3-inch heels with side buckles and open toes. Yesterday he was told to practice. Dianne led Ronald towards a shop, and he felt his heart increase. Dianne walked right past the mall security that chased him at the beginning of the week and into a body shop.
“Hey Teagan, this is Veronica I was talking about, you able to do your thing.”
“Of course, Di, nice to meet you Veronica.”
“Hi, what thing?”
“Don’t be silly, Ronnie, Teagan here is going to give you a couple of studs, some hoop earrings and a temp tattoo.”
“Tattoo.”
“Oh, that was meant to be a surprise, come on, take a seat.”
Ronald was about to run out the door when one of the security guards entered.
“Excuse me ladies, I recognized a voice... who is it the one we spoke to on Monday.”
“That would be me?” Dianne said before looking at Teagan and Ronald.
“Can we have a word with you in our office, Miss you can resume your work.”
Ronald felt relieved for a second before looking at Teagan
“What type of studs and where is the tattoo
“The tattoo is temporary and it will be on your collarbone.”
“Very well, let’s get it over with, my lift is being questioned.”
“Yeah, on Monday, some little thief stole a whole lot of jewelry, the reward for it’s find has gone up since the shop discovered that one of the items was actually a display piece donated by some wealthy estate.”
Ronald listened as Teagan put big loop earrings in his ears, a stud at the top.
“Okay, now for the next stud.”
Ronald gasped, as the stud was put into his nose and then then another in his belly button. They were all black opals, except for the false gold loops. Then Teagan worked on the tattoo, until Ronald was shown the outline of the small black heart.
“That’s pretty good, how long will it last?”
“It can be removed, but I suggest you leave it for at least a month.”
“Okay. I don’t really want it for that long, but I can cover it up with makeup.”
Ronald stood up and was checking out the belly button stud when he heard Dianne.
“Veronica that’s you, wow nice heart, listen, the security guard had footage of the man running into the shop and heading for the changing room, they also have footage of that girl with the wig. I have to describe her to the police, so I have to go to the station, Veronica, are you happy to stay at the mall until I get back, I am taking you to the train station tonight.”
“That should be fine.”
“Great, I will be back in two hours. Buy that new phone and message me, also don’t forget to have your picture taken in the booth.”
---- something missing ----
girl with the wig. I have to describe her to the police, so I have to go to the station, Veronica, are you happy to stay at the mall until I get back, I am taking you to the train station tonight.”
“That should be fine.”
“Great, I will be back in two hours. Buy that new phone and message me, also don’t forget to have your picture taken in the booth.”
Ronald walked out and watched as Dianne headed for the carpark.
“What am I going to do for two hours?”
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