[Mr.Foxx] Commissions - Requests - Pinups - Short Stories

Professor Sinister said:
That first speech bubble makes zero sense
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Mr.Foxx said:
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Better but still... She asks for more money, then says she is just kidding. And then says she needs money.

Would have been better with:

Uncle Bob, your home is a complete mess!
I may have to charge you extra for cleaning this whole area...
Hehe, I'm just kidding Uncle Bob...
But, I do need some extra pocket money so if there is anything else I could do to earn more, I am open to whatever *wink*
 
Professor Sinister said:
Better but still... She asks for more money, then says she is just kidding. And then says she needs money.
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The second time she states that she 'needed' the pocket money. I believe Mr. Foxx is employing a subtlety in this conversation expressing that her uncle's place is such a mess, that it would demand more money to clean up. But she then interjects with a 'just kidding.' Thus, insinuating that she's willing to provide the service for just the 'pocket money she needed.' The uncle then ramps up the stakes by offering her more money to allow him to take nude pictures of her, and she calls his bid, and raises him a prospect of sexual intercourse with her. It makes sense, even if the implied prostitution is mildly distasteful. At least, that's how I interpret it.
 
Professor Sinister said:
No worries... You can interpret it any way you want, but that doesn't mean it is proper phrasing or proper structure.
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Never said it was 'proper' phrasing or structure, whatever you interpret that to mean. It's just been my experience that many of these 3D artists speak English as a second language, and rather than hold their feet to the fire over something inconsequential as syntax or semantics, especially when the 'gist' of the sentiment was conveyed fairly clear, I'm attempting to communicate to you what should at least be rudimentary and obvious. Didn't mean any offense by it. Just thought you should know.
 
Why the hell goddamn "uncle" man? C'mon, it should have been "dad" obviously... aunts, uncles, nephews , nieces and all types of "steps" just ruin incest fantasy... so , for me she was helping her mature father, and getting seduced and fucked. "Uncle" is just a total turn-off.
 
 
Mr. Foxx. I really like your work, but I can't subscribe from my country. Could you please post your comics for free access at least after a month?
 
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