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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

What the hell is this chapter? Every chapter has a missing piece of page like this one. How lizana comes up with that outfit? Where that guy come from? What is that place? Why fred comes first not the other characters on the past chapters that actually has a first appearance on the story? what is that? Rush story was boring
 
What the hell is this chapter? Every chapter has a missing piece of page like this one. How lizana comes up with that outfit? Where that guy come from? What is that place? Why fred comes first not the other characters on the past chapters that actually has a first appearance on the story? what is that? Rush story was boring
U should learn to appreciate the writer and his work so that he does more good the next time
Complaining won't do anything sir
Thank you 😊
 
for me this chapter is okay intensity also good but the story telling isn't good

what u guys think

i want to see more lizana and homeless chapters moreee
Actually Zetto fucked the storyline...I would expect at least a good story from Sinful lust...but now that is gone...The chapter title must be like Sinful lust Chapter 7 ("What the FUCK")
 
Actually the main story line is kind of going off the road. Zetto could have made it even better with just Ramon. This punishing part is not really appreciative. It would have gone with Yuki's friend, Yuki's bully and some action with Ramon in a family outing or their traditional home in their Hometown. But Zetto Introduced punishing sequence which I don't see any future scope in the story line. Honestly I'm really waiting for Homeless Series which is going in a better direction in terms of story and continuation. Please comment your opinions guys.
 
The truth is, the main series it's kinda lost. All this blackmail arc it's no sense, the motivation of police woman to hate Lizana are complete stupid, she only hate her because Lizana it was more popular in school. The threesome it was fun and hot and could ending in a good way, whit Ramon, Lizana and the police woman happy and been a friends and fuck every once in a while because in that way the story could continue in a organic way whit Lizana fuck Yuki, Yuki's friend, Yuki's bully and the janitor but now everything looks so forced and whit Lizana been blackmailed. Maybe, only maybe if in the next chapter the police woman forgive Lizana after forced her to fuck whit other criminals and zetto put an end to police woman blackmail arc the story can go on in a organic way
 
U should learn to appreciate the writer and his work so that he does more good the next time
Complaining won't do anything sir
Thank you 😊
If You don't demand a Quality job You can recive crap like Lizana and the homeless 2. It was because the fans demand a good jod zetto realse the chapter 3.
 
In Algeria, there's a 7-hour time difference, so it will be published at 1 AM Algerian time.
Now we can sey everything You said it was a LIE, nothing happened like You said, no realse the nov 28, not relese in Algeria time, and Lizana do not fuck in the story whit 3 guys and the police woman like You said.
 
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Just vote for the homeless chapter guys not the main story, its not the same as it starts the storyline its super different and super disappointed.
 
In comparison to sinful chapter 1,2,3 the art style and drawing of lizana was best and that's what made me fan of sinful lust series...But now I am seeing from past chapter that drawing of lizana is getting worse and face is different...her body is way too much big which makes her not real and sensual..big dip in zetto drawing of character and positioning of doing sex...all we can see now very close up shots and drawing lines of lizana are not upto the mark which was used in initial chapter
 

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