you're right. In this story he does have those moments but it happens in one line, he says he's a man and he doesn't like men and then he talks and talks about how hot men are and how he would want to be with them.... so it's not really something that is an inner conflict, he's gone along with everything including dressing and dancing like a stripper, so that internal turmoil is not really there
I do think this is a good story but I think most of the people that read this they are looking for a sexual experience, they want sex scenes so that's what they are complaining about
Also the change is too extreme, he's a complete different person
So the story is not bad but there are some parts that people don't like, some dont like the complete change of the character, some wsnt mpre sex, some want more struggle to change....