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Protagonist of Little Tokyo is kind of a pussy and gets gaslighted, detailed mid-section over the changes, extremelly rushed towards the end where we barely see how the final form is. Obligatory "can't speak english anymore" plot point. The final form will also have personality traits that never came up during the process of transformation. Protagonist will try to act like an anime gilr, despite Joe clearly not knowing much about anime. Then a Boomer tier "horror story" plot twist in the end.
I swear, Joe keeps using horror stry tropes in the end of his books, andd they always suck. Pic related.
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A good transformation story works better if you go full romance or comedy, attaching these kinds of tropes doesn't highlight the hotness, just makes you look pretentious.