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Unless she starts losing subscribers, nothing’s going to change.
I stopped subscribing a while back. I preferred when the stories were just a simple render of the main character with minimalist backgrounds, it's a storytelling model that has worked really well for other TG artists.
I wish I could keep supporting here because Tug of War, A Lesson for the Teacher and A(not so) Temporary Roommate were really great but the current two stories are just dragging on.
 
In fact, it looks as if the time is not just being dragged out, but as if they want to test how long their subscribers can endure without adequate story updates.
And it doesn't matter what the background of the images are.
The author initially says in one story that there was no narcotic or hypnotic influence on the main character, although according to the story, this influence was more than once. The moment of some kind of perception is systematically missed, because 2 pictures with three statements are clearly not enough. Nevertheless, it is easy to stretch one scene with shoes on a "lock" for 20 pages, especially considering that it did not affect the plot at all )))))
What am I saying, the author's approach to writing and visualization has been very strange lately ..... especially with the character of a pensioner on the outside, but a young man at heart ))
 
In fact, it looks as if the time is not just being dragged out, but as if they want to test how long their subscribers can endure without adequate story updates.
And it doesn't matter what the background of the images are.
The author initially says in one story that there was no narcotic or hypnotic influence on the main character, although according to the story, this influence was more than once. The moment of some kind of perception is systematically missed, because 2 pictures with three statements are clearly not enough. Nevertheless, it is easy to stretch one scene with shoes on a "lock" for 20 pages, especially considering that it did not affect the plot at all )))))
What am I saying, the author's approach to writing and visualization has been very strange lately ..... especially with the character of a pensioner on the outside, but a young man at heart ))
I agree ! And that is why droped it , MelissaN mention, she is a big fan of "Sir Conan Doyle"
So , you understand the suspense going is totally the influence from Conan Doyle.
I don't like this story . I like a k pop idol more then Thai shit ....
 
Aphrodite's Mirror - Chapter 22 - Part 3 (single-click download - below right)

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so misses his appointment - comes dressed in a skirt suit and sky high heels and is going to try and convince the doctor he isnt trans? then even puts on some lip gloss in the taxi and doesnt try to remove the in ears - Unnie will do the talking too he hasnt got a chance of getting out of this situation
 
just when you hoped that things might get a little clearer it gets muddier - did anyone notice the engagement ring is on the right hand not the left?
Melissa is just winging it on this story now. She said months ago we would be getting answers and closure but all we are getting is just more fluff to bloat the alreated bloated story .. sigh
 
just when you hoped that things might get a little clearer it gets muddier - did anyone notice the engagement ring is on the right hand not the left?
FYI, In many eastern cultures and some select countries throughout Europe, the engagement ring and wedding band are worn on the right hand ring finger. Not every culture wears it on the left.
 
unfortunately, again there is a lot of text with pictures that could fit in 3-4 pictures, and then show at least part of the plot.
Because there is a break in the plot, then there is a break, and there is a break..... It seems that the story is already added by force, squeezing progress out of itself by leaps and bounds. ))
Чи то мені так здається можливо ))
 
I'm so confused with wherever Aphrodite's mirror is even going. There is no cohesion in this story what so ever and every time it starts to get some traction she adds more unnecessary plot. What is even happening with this.... Where is this story even going anymore the end of this chapter just ads even more questions... Didn't she promise answers like 6 months ago but she is still just adding more and more bloat to the plot
 
I’ve never bothered reading the text for Aphrodite, I just treat it as a transformation sequence rather than a story. This way I don’t care where the story is going.
 
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