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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

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Diana is clearly bisexual, and she was consistently portrayed as having a sexual relationship with her young nephew in the early stages of the story. She also has a beautiful daughter, which is quite intriguing. I suspect Zetto introduced her to rekindle attention to the Sinful main storyline; otherwise, the main story would never win the poll against the homeless.
The current consideration is the relationship between the new main storyline and the Tramp arc. The Ranta arc has decoupled the two stories from parallel universes, and I suspect characters from both stories will intersect. However, characters like the deliveryman, Old Ford, and the policewoman will no longer appear
 
If he puts a poll now, after this post, I feel like the majority would now vote for the remake. And I agree with woyuefang, but I think the delivery man was well handled. The Janitor would also be fine. But the police woman should have come much later in the story or in a more meaningful way. Chapter 6 was the only way Zetto could give the fans a threesome which was long asked for.
 
The only thing he needs to change in the remake is simply to completely redo chapter 6 and introduce the beginning of an incestuous relationship with Yuki. Lizana and Yuki could be developed in chapters 6 (new), 7, and 8. In chapter 9, Ramon could seduce Yuki's sister (I forgot her name), and then in chapter 10, we would finally see her with Ramon.
 
The only thing he needs to change in the remake is simply to completely redo chapter 6 and introduce the beginning of an incestuous relationship with Yuki. Lizana and Yuki could be developed in chapters 6 (new), 7, and 8. In chapter 9, Ramon could seduce Yuki's sister (I forgot her name), and then in chapter 10, we would finally see her with Ramon.
No. The only thing Zetto needs to change is the final of the chapter 6, the threesome was hot but the plot twist in the end and the motivation of the police woman to hate Lizana was very stupid, so if Zetto change that the story can continue in a organic way whit Ramon, Lizana and the police woman being friends and talk about repeating in the future. Imagine Yuki push Lizana to fuck and Lizana ask the police woman help to fuck Yuki and take his virginity because Lizana don't want to cross that line and Lizana hear them in the nex room and Ramón and her fucks to and a couple chapters later they can do an orgy or something like that
 
Hope she isn't crying here because this will imply she's being forced again, which will make the "remake" just as disturbing as the last SL chapter. The original story started going downhill precisely after Lizana started being forced to have sex against her will. Zetto is still awesome but dude needs to read the room for once.
I agree it would feel like rape , rather than actual cheating , I would always take willing slut character who is enjoying rather forced rapey scene. Also which chapter you are referring, is this the delivery guy one??
 
Hope she isn't crying here because this will imply she's being forced again, which will make the "remake" just as disturbing as the last SL chapter. The original story started going downhill precisely after Lizana started being forced to have sex against her will. Zetto is still awesome but dude needs to read the room for once.
She's not crying but looks like she is trying not to enjoy it. looks more like a mix of pleasure and shame.
 
I agree it would feel like rape , rather than actual cheating , I would always take willing slut character who is enjoying rather forced rapey scene. Also which chapter you are referring, is this the delivery guy one??
I meant the last chapter when she was tied up and raped by both the neighbor and the prisoner afterwards. I forgot the delivery guy but that was in a Special chapter and since those are not usually referenced in the main chapters, I thought they were not necessarily canon.
 
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