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[trap.lust1]

Love the story. Can I give some remarks. Her/his tongue is strangly long. Perhaps you can let someone correct the txt. Bring more light. I could barely see her face/body while doing this bJ.

thanks for your suggestion i need this to improve the pictures. thanks

 

[shemaleNL]

thanks for your suggestion i need this to improve the pictures. thanks

Yes I would like to see them with a normal tongue. The hot story deserves that. Perhaps you could also let her clean his top. She did loose the bet.

 

[timmydg]

Holly Molly! This thread is still active. I am lovin it as Ronald Mcdonald would say of fine work done by Monseur Trap Lust bravo...

 

[trap.lust1]

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[shemaleNL]

Great work.

 

[Nippur]

Great work I think the prince was ambushed and Mrujunga knows his identity.

 

[popexxx]

I like it a lot too! Although I'm one of those who would like to see the story slower to enjoy it better! And then see some hot sex with lots of precum and cum ;D

 

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I wasn't familiar with the author.
I discovered him through the story “The Eleven Prince,” which I actually really enjoyed, even though it only has two chapters. “The Eleven Prince” was the first story I read by this author, and I can say that he's now on my list and that I've become a fan.
I'm going to keep up with the author's new stories and read his older ones as well.

 

[Jackjons]

Support the Author if you like his work. He is doing great and working Hard. Starting as one of us like a normal reader & stepup as a author later, he is doing great & his quality has been improved a lot .... There is still a lot room for improvement , but , he is improving & will improve much more .

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Support the Author if you like his work. He is doing great and working Hard. Starting as one of us like a normal reader & stepup as a author later, he is doing great & his quality has been improved a lot .... There is still a lot room for improvement , but , he is improving & will improve much more .

So , if you like, support him if you can , it might help him to upgrade his pc and might motivate him .

I signed up and became a supporter of the author on his website: https://subscribestar.adult/tgcomic
I've already read two of the author's completed works.

Family Debt
Friends With Benefit

I really liked the illustrations and the story in “Friends With Benefits.”
I especially liked the character development—from Eric to Erin, her best friend Jake, and how they fell in love. It was my favorite of the two.

I became a supporter of your website because of your work on “The Elven Prince,” which is by far the author's best work in terms of illustration quality.
And what really piques my interest is its great potential to become a good story.

I plan to start reading “The Bet.”

 

[trap.lust1]

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[shemaleNL]

Great work,

 

[timmydg]

Great work,

hey mate you're everywhere...pleasant to see you here- are you like omnipresent entity of this forum or something?

 

[shemaleNL]

hey mate you're everywhere...pleasant to see you here- are you like omnipresent entity of this forum or something?

and yet I ignore so much

 

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Hi trap.lust1! Great job, I love stories with orcs and elves. But I'm here to give you some constructive criticism. Before continuing, I'd like to tell you that if you create a yearly solution, I'll support you straight away; monthly ones stress me out! Back to us, the problem, in my opinion and personal taste, is that you go too fast. You have to get the blood boiling hot like lava before triggering situations like that romantic kiss the orc gives the elf prince on the ass! Beautiful, but too fast (in that scene, I would have drawn the elf's penis in a relaxed state, but as the orc made out with his ass, I showed both the elf's face trying not to show any emotion and his penis getting hard until precum leaked out, those beautiful translucent threads that are one of the most powerful feedback loops an alpha can ever get!). Back to the story. The mindbreak should, in my opinion, always be slower. The reader must savor the moment, they must feel it coming, and when it arrives, it must be an explosion. Now I'll tell you how I would have seen this scene from the third chapter. We're still talking about how I would like to see it, and of course everyone has their own way of visualizing it. But I'm also writing this to give you some input from my point of view as a femboy enthusiast! So, I would have let the ogre believe it was a female elf! (Maybe, as Nippur says, he knows it's the prince, but I like my version better.) I was saying, I would have let the ogre believe it was a female, and speaking to the madam of the house, he insisted that if this elf didn't satisfy him, he would screw the queen of the elves, his prisoner. Hearing this, the prince, to vent his anger, decides to give the ogre a blowjob! After kissing him, the ogre lets him do it, but when he feels him up, he realizes it's not a female but a male elf! Obviously the ogre can't believe it and tries to dominate him by forcing a HJ (Handjob). The elf tries to fight and this excites the ogre even more who eventually dominates him (thanks also to the fact that the madam with an herbal tea had weakened the elf prince in the days before). I'll explain the scene to you. They fight but in the end the ogre dominates him and drags him onto the bed. He blocks his arms by bringing them behind his back and with his chest and blocks them under pressure, with one hand he covers the elf's mouth who starts to scream, then the ogre sitting behind the elf brings his legs forward between the elf's legs, spreading them. At that point he forces a HJ which obviously ends in a very copious happy ending! With the elf moaning and groaning in the same way. But then a guard arrives and interrupts everything which means that the ogre has to leave immediately and urgently leaving the reader with blood boiling but that's it. And we have the first piece of the mindbreak. Obviously, the next panels will feature all the elf's second thoughts, who isn't gay and does it to kill him, which disgusts him, but who accepts the situation because it's the best way to kill him. I hope I've been clear, and I apologize if I haven't been. English isn't my language. Precum is essential, please!

 

[trap.lust1]

Hi trap.lust1! Great job, I love stories with orcs and elves. But I'm here to give you some constructive criticism. Before continuing, I'd like to tell you that if you create a yearly solution, I'll support you straight away; monthly ones stress me out! Back to us, the problem, in my opinion and personal taste, is that you go too fast. You have to get the blood boiling hot like lava before triggering situations like that romantic kiss the orc gives the elf prince on the ass! Beautiful, but too fast (in that scene, I would have drawn the elf's penis in a relaxed state, but as the orc made out with his ass, I showed both the elf's face trying not to show any emotion and his penis getting hard until precum leaked out, those beautiful translucent threads that are one of the most powerful feedback loops an alpha can ever get!). Back to the story. The mindbreak should, in my opinion, always be slower. The reader must savor the moment, they must feel it coming, and when it arrives, it must be an explosion. Now I'll tell you how I would have seen this scene from the third chapter. We're still talking about how I would like to see it, and of course everyone has their own way of visualizing it. But I'm also writing this to give you some input from my point of view as a femboy enthusiast! So, I would have let the ogre believe it was a female elf! (Maybe, as Nippur says, he knows it's the prince, but I like my version better.) I was saying, I would have let the ogre believe it was a female, and speaking to the madam of the house, he insisted that if this elf didn't satisfy him, he would screw the queen of the elves, his prisoner. Hearing this, the prince, to vent his anger, decides to give the ogre a blowjob! After kissing him, the ogre lets him do it, but when he feels him up, he realizes it's not a female but a male elf! Obviously the ogre can't believe it and tries to dominate him by forcing a HJ (Handjob). The elf tries to fight and this excites the ogre even more who eventually dominates him (thanks also to the fact that the madam with an herbal tea had weakened the elf prince in the days before). I'll explain the scene to you. They fight but in the end the ogre dominates him and drags him onto the bed. He blocks his arms by bringing them behind his back and with his chest and blocks them under pressure, with one hand he covers the elf's mouth who starts to scream, then the ogre sitting behind the elf brings his legs forward between the elf's legs, spreading them. At that point he forces a HJ which obviously ends in a very copious happy ending! With the elf moaning and groaning in the same way. But then a guard arrives and interrupts everything which means that the ogre has to leave immediately and urgently leaving the reader with blood boiling but that's it. And we have the first piece of the mindbreak. Obviously, the next panels will feature all the elf's second thoughts, who isn't gay and does it to kill him, which disgusts him, but who accepts the situation because it's the best way to kill him. I hope I've been clear, and I apologize if I haven't been. English isn't my language. Precum is essential, please!

Hi thanks for your feedback i had some motives that kept streatching stories. let me explain my point first.
1. i want comics that should be easy. i mean in terms of long comics do no good as we have other threads like The Arrangement, Lating In Need, Aphrodites mirror. this comic took so much time to complete personally after some point i was just checking the update if there is any sex scene i was not interested in story.
so basically i started story wrtitting and comics creation due to this. i wanted to get my ideas to the world. and in that process to keep it small. in which way the story will be last for some months and around 10-11 max around 15 chapters. and it stops there no new business nothing which makes way to new story line and new comic. this way i get to impliment more stories and give audience the full comics.
2. i mentioned earlier i will keep the comics realistic not cutting manhood nothing just some pills and crossdressing not more drastic feminisation. so i will trying to stick to that.
3. i know sometime i move on from moments to moments very quickly as you pointed. it will be my pleasure to know the story through your poiint of view and will impliment this things in upcoming stories. but the motive is to get done with story with giving proper sex scenes.
4. i gathered some feedbacks around sex scenes also they might feel fast. i will slow the speed in future stories. but as i promised there will be no unnecessary streatching of stories as you said it should boil the blood of readars - i will focus on such parts in future as you have mentioned. i will keep that in mind. also there is some more things will improve the speed of sex, quality of images, grammer and language, story point of story should not looked like forced, and also as you have mentioned there should be scenarios which will keep details of the story as well as make the readers go crazy.

the thing is i didn't get enough time for creating stories it is around 12 days max so it just need be rendered quickly with writing and all with post processing and all accounted. so i will try my best.

also one more suggestion i'll complete the story for elven prince. and you can give me the basic story details and we can release the version of that also.
how you intended.

honestlty i will check if there is any way to get yearly basis subscription thing on subscribe star.

also Thank you for the feedback, at some time i feel losts i dont have the idea how to proceed. in those moments such feedbacks helps with guidence.