[Melissa N.] Collection

[Vroomvroom]

Melissa shops at one boutique

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Honestly one the few reasons I actually enjoy Melissa's current K-pop story is because since it is going for the "idol" aesthetic the MC's outfits tend to lean on the cute/girly side compared to the usual tight/bimbo side that most Melissa stories follow.

 

[pincho]

One of the best stories to date is Tug of War... And I repeat, the model of text and illustrations is much better than that of comic books.

 

[Kobboldpot]

Honestly one the few reasons I actually enjoy Melissa's current K-pop story is because since it is going for the "idol" aesthetic the MC's outfits tend to lean on the cute/girly side compared to the usual tight/bimbo side that most Melissa stories follow.

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It feels like each slide depicts a different character. Not like stages of transformation, but rather completely different people.

And between 4th and 5th, the phenotypes are completely different – a different body type, height, build, age, skull shape. I understand that this is essentially what almost all trans stories suffer from, where a 6'1" athlete transforms into a 5'5" fragile cheerleader.

But here's another question: This kind of variation is normal for AI generators, but in this case, it seems like Daz3D (or something similar) is being used, where you can manually adjust the details.

 

[moonmite84]

Melissa shops at one boutique

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Which story was this image from?

What's "An Innocent Game"? I don't remember that one from Melissa?

Same, I don't think I am familiar with "An Innocent Game". Anyone have a copy of that?

 

[Nuvolari]

"An Innocent Game" is a very early story by Melissa, before she went 3D. It used images from some game, like the ones in the first version of K-Pop. I think it might still be in her DeviantArt page... let me see...
...yeah, here it is:

https://www.deviantart.com/melissa822/gallery/47639141/an-innocent-game

 

[Kobboldpot]

Which story was this image from?

School Daze

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[Coracal422]

"An Innocent Game" is a very early story by Melissa, before she went 3D. It used images from some game, like the ones in the first version of K-Pop. I think it might still be in her DeviantArt page... let me see...
...yeah, here it is:

https://www.deviantart.com/melissa822/gallery/47639141/an-innocent-game

I like stories like this one where the motives are clearly explained and so is the process even if unrealistic. Not like in Aphrodite's where "there's no hypnosis" she just hypnotized herself by method acting, and somehow that changed her entire sense of self, and her sexuality?!
Or like Bestie where she's just changing her husband into her BFF for the lolz?
It doesn't matter if they deserved it or not, I wanna know why they're doing that to them.

 

[BriannatheMage]

The first story I ever read from Melissa was Barbie's Life on fictionmania and then I found tug of war years later and those were some of my favorite TG fiction stories despite their flaws. They tap into a melodramatic flair that I think the combination of the patreon model and visual based storytelling exacerbates rather than highlights. rendering 8 somewhat similar poses and slapping some text on it that has minimal progression is lazy in comparison to the richness of her previous works. She'll probably never go back to those text heavy stories.

I think there is a sweet spot between the glacial pace of Melissa N and the rapid, often off-screen transformation that someone like Cassie Rose Watson paces her work with.

 

[Just Another User]

One of Melissa’s big problems is that she’s unable to shift tone and genre.

Aphrodite’s Mirror should be a claustrophobic body horror story about a man losing his body and mind (instead it’s like a bad mystery that abandoned the TG element years ago because the main char is completely okay with what happened). A Bestie in the Making should be a romantic comedy about a couple getting into low stakes escapades as they expand their boundaries *together* (instead because its tg tropes are played so straight the wife will almost certainly whore her unwilling husband out at some point (at which point the husband will realize he loved cock all along)).

 

[Kobboldpot]

When I was Melissa's Patreon subscriber and she was soliciting requests for future stories, I suggested she create a synopsis that would tie together all of her (then not very numerous) short stories.

If forum visitors are interested in getting creative, I suggest we brainstorm what kind of story it could be, what the plot would be, and who the key character would be.

We have:
- A nerdy schoolgirl dating a bully.
- A sex slave for some eccentric, influential person with a thing for Christmas.
- A women's clothing saleswoman (who is actively being pushed into a relationship).
- A rock singer (supposedly the lead singer's girlfriend, but I think she might have a career in her own right).
- A waitress with a shady drug-dealing past.
- Some horny student (and somewhere in there was a theme of "social justice" and social activism)
- A plump gym administrator.
- An Instagram model with some sort of gaming past.
- A flight attendant with some pilot skills.
- A stripper and the wife of a crime boss (with murky mafia debts).
- (A bit unclear and a noticeable cringe) a young queen who is looking for a prince. (I don't even know how seriously this can be taken)

I also have two nearly identical office dominatrixes, two nearly identical MILF wives of corporate bosses (but I'm not really into MILFs), and two black stories that I would avoid due to the potential for inappropriateness with these themes.

 

[@lexx$]

A Bestie in the Making 35
Enjoy

 

[Nippur]

A Bestie in the Making 35
Enjoy

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I will give you Task to get enough points to get rid of that cage for one night, this is not a story of TG but a story of humilliation and submission with an ending as as slutty trophy wife and you wonder what he did to deserve it. Amy is literally a psychopath

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

I will give you Task to get enough points to get rid of that cage for one night, this is not a story of TG but a story of humilliation and submission with an ending as as slutty trophy wife and you wonder what he did to deserve it. Amy is literally a psychopath

Melissa hasn't made a quality TG story in years

Mirror is just a convoluted crime drana

Kpop is humiliation story that lost the plot and embarrasses the original

Bestie another bimbo humiliation romp that makes no sense anymore and is prob one of the worst transformations she's ever done

None of these are even fetish story anymore they are just over milked filler content that lack any substance what do ever ... It's really unfortunate

 

[Just Another User]

This is what I mean when I say the tone is all wrong. The wife is right that her husband is turned on by everything, it is typical dom/sub stuff, she is not a “psychopath”. But the writing is done in such a way that it comes off as cruel instead of exciting.

Note how nobody has accused the girlfriend in Catfish of being a psychopath yet even though she has much more forcefully transformed her boyfriend into a latina milf for personal gain. And that is because the tone of the story is comedic and silly.

 

[Sur_GalaChad]

This is what I mean when I say the tone is all wrong. The wife is right that her husband is turned on by everything, it is typical dom/sub stuff, she is not a “psychopath”. But the writing is done in such a way that it comes off as cruel instead of exciting.

Note how nobody has accused the girlfriend in Catfish of being a psychopath yet even though she has much more forcefully transformed her boyfriend into a latina milf for personal gain. And that is because the tone of the story is comedic and silly.

But it also helps that catfish sticks to the fetish and knows it's a fetish story so the motives of the girlfriend are lucky for the kink and it doesn't take itself seriously l. It's rher eoureky to be erotic so we don't have to question it we just go with it because this story understands exactly what it is. This is something lit kit is really good with too.

 

[Lena Sayers]

I will give you Task to get enough points to get rid of that cage for one night, this is not a story of TG but a story of humilliation and submission with an ending as as slutty trophy wife and you wonder what he did to deserve it. Amy is literally a psychopath

This is just a rip-off of the father route from CassieRoseWatson's Curse of Destiny.

 

[Kobboldpot]

Fan art based on the stage personas of "Natasha" from Never Meet Your Heroes

 

[Kobboldpot]

When I was Melissa's Patreon subscriber and she was soliciting requests for future stories, I suggested she create a synopsis that would tie together all of her (then not very numerous) short stories.

If forum visitors are interested in getting creative, I suggest we brainstorm what kind of story it could be, what the plot would be, and who the key character would be.

We have:
- A nerdy schoolgirl dating a bully.
- A sex slave for some eccentric, influential person with a thing for Christmas.
- A women's clothing saleswoman (who is actively being pushed into a relationship).
- A rock singer (supposedly the lead singer's girlfriend, but I think she might have a career in her own right).
- A waitress with a shady drug-dealing past.
- Some horny student (and somewhere in there was a theme of "social justice" and social activism)
- A plump gym administrator.
- An Instagram model with some sort of gaming past.
- A flight attendant with some pilot skills.
- A stripper and the wife of a crime boss (with murky mafia debts).
- (A bit unclear and a noticeable cringe) a young queen who is looking for a prince. (I don't even know how seriously this can be taken)

I also have two nearly identical office dominatrixes, two nearly identical MILF wives of corporate bosses (but I'm not really into MILFs), and two black stories that I would avoid due to the potential for inappropriateness with these themes.

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The idea is that the cafe from "Customer is Always Right" should be located in a central location in a reputable business district, so that characters somehow connected to this world could drop in there and become well acquainted with the waitress.
- Blah-blah-blah (about business plans and quotes and six-figure sums).
- "Wow, what money?! Maybe if I'm nice enough, they'll want to hire me as their secretary?" - "Forget it! I can't escape this pervert..."

- Your coffee!
- Oh! Sorry, I didn't notice. I'm a little nervous...
- First day or interview?
- Interview, and I don't even know... I've never held a position like this.
- Well, if you're applying for a position in the building across the street, there's always the backup plan of getting a waitress job here and trying to seduce their top managers. They often hang out here for coffee.

- As usual, your cake! Why aren't you looking so cheerful today?
- Yes, I think... Isn't it time I lost weight?
- Oh, come on! You have a gorgeous figure!
- Really?
- That's right. And without your tips, things will get really tough.
- Well... Then just for you.

- Isn't it too hot for a coat?
- Well, yes. Not because of the weather, but... Oh, forget it, you don't understand.
- Excuse me?!...
- I didn't mean to offend you, it's just... Oh... At some point, I no longer have control over how I look. And my appearance obeys the whims of another person.
- You have no idea how I understand you!

 

[Kobboldpot]

The idea is that the cafe from "Customer is Always Right" should be located in a central location in a reputable business district, so that characters somehow connected to this world could drop in there and become well acquainted with the waitress.
- Blah-blah-blah (about business plans and quotes and six-figure sums).
- "Wow, what money?! Maybe if I'm nice enough, they'll want to hire me as their secretary?" - "Forget it! I can't escape this pervert..."

- Your coffee!
- Oh! Sorry, I didn't notice. I'm a little nervous...
- First day or interview?
- Interview, and I don't even know... I've never held a position like this.
- Well, if you're applying for a position in the building across the street, there's always the backup plan of getting a waitress job here and trying to seduce their top managers. They often hang out here for coffee.

- As usual, your cake! Why aren't you looking so cheerful today?
- Yes, I think... Isn't it time I lost weight?
- Oh, come on! You have a gorgeous figure!
- Really?
- That's right. And without your tips, things will get really tough.
- Well... Then just for you.

- Isn't it too hot for a coat?
- Well, yes. Not because of the weather, but... Oh, forget it, you don't understand.
- Excuse me?!...
- I didn't mean to offend you, it's just... Oh... At some point, I no longer have control over how I look. And my appearance obeys the whims of another person.
- You have no idea how I understand you!

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Fan art of outfits for theme days from "Customer is Always Right."
P.S. If you have any other ideas for theme days, feel free to suggest them – I'll try to implement them.

 

[ginger_anagram]

What model do you use?