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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

Yeah you can tell this wasn't meant to be a main chapter. Not only it doesn't pick up where the last one left off when Liz's kids came back right as she was fucking Ricky, but none of that is even mentioned at all. I guess we won't learn how she got away from that situation, it's just another day for her.

I'm mixed on this. The first half is amazing. The second half is where they lose me because it seems like Zetto just can't help himself but have a rapist-type character in every story. Yoti's sudden heel turn is nonsensical since anytime we've seen him before he was never shown to be jealous of Berto, he was even rooting for him and teasing him about Lizana in a friendly way. Now suddenly he's the jealous antagonist who assaults Lizana, which I hate because until now the Homeless story made sure to avoid this kind of shit. Lizana was never forced to have sex with anyone in this story, whether Berto, Ricky or even Arturo who she willingly let piss in her mouth. This should've just remained a Special chapter since those are not necessarily treated as canon, but now we have yet another rape plot when I thought Zetto had learned from his past mistakes. Or maybe he doesn't see it as a mistake since it's a different continuity and he thinks doing something like this fits this story better than Sinful Lust? Either way, if this fails too, is he going to do a Homeless Remake too? lol

Art still looks a bit rushed but I enjoyed it at lot overall. If not for the rape, this chapter would've been perfect but it is what it is.
 
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Yeah you can tell this wasn't meant to be a main chapter. Not only it doesn't pick up where the last one left off when Liz's kids came back right as she was fucking Ricky, but none of that is even mentioned at all. I guess we won't learn how she got away from that situation, it's just another day for her.

I'm mixed on this. The first half is amazing. The second half is where they lose me because it seems like Zetto just can't help himself but have a rapist-type character in every story. Yoti's sudden heel turn is nonsensical since anytime we've seen him before he was never shown to be jealous of Berto, he was even rooting for him and teasing him about Lizana in a friendly way. Now suddenly he's the jealous antagonist who assaults Lizana, which I hate because until now the Homeless story made sure to avoid this kind of shit. Liz was never forced to have sex with anyone in this story, whether Berto, Ricky or even Arturo who she willingly let piss in her mouth. This should've remained a Special chapter since those are not necessarily treated as canon, but now we have yet another rape plot when I thought Zetto had learned from his past mistakes. Or maybe he doesn't see it as a mistake since it's a different continuity and he thinks doing something like this fits this story better than Sinful Lust? Either way, if this fails too, is he going to do a Homeless Remake too? lol

Art still looks a bit rushed but I enjoyed it at lot overall. If not for the rape, this chapter would've been perfect but it is what it is.
Damn bro you should be a professional critic 😳, you summed it up so well
 
Damn bro you should be a professional critic 😳, you summed it up so well
lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.

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lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.

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The pressure has got to him unfortunately 🥺, you could probably make an entire 100 page chapter out of the stuff he omitted out of his releases and honestly? If Lizana wasn't there, a lot of people wouldn't care about it as much, she's.... something else
 
This special episode should take place after Liz and Berto first time having sex, and before Liz and Ricky have sex.
Most of the sketches were probably completed by 2024 or 2025 at the earliest; it's just that Zetto didn't know how to incorporate these stories into the main story.Furthermore, the style is different from the current one. It's clear that after the remake caused
dissatisfaction among fans, Zetto hastily released this special episode, and the big guy doesn't even have a name.
On the bright side, Homeless 6 is still something to look forward to. How will Liz explain ricky in the bathroom ? Will Naewoo also make his official debut in the story of the homeless?
As for rape, since Homeless is a dark story, such a plot was bound to happen sooner or later. Even if Yoti didn't do it, his big brother would have. In the first chapter of the Homeless , Yoti made it quite clear that he was a disguised sex offender. It was only in other situations, with Berto and his wife present, that he didn't act, and that Liz lowered his guard against him.
 
lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.
This sketch will probably be part of a future chapter in which Lizana will continue having sex with Yoti (I wonder if Zetto will also introduce Yoti's wife into the action).
 
lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.

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It's probably in the upcoming chapters
Don't jump into conclusions
We all enjoyed the chapter
Even though we all have different opinions
We have to respect zettos work
😊✨
 
It's probably in the upcoming chapters
Don't jump into conclusions
We all enjoyed the chapter
Even though we all have different opinions
We have to respect zettos work
😊✨
I respect his work, I just don't agree with everything he does with the story. And seems like others don't either since that's what led to the Sinful Lust Remake.

And yeah it could be from an upcoming chapter, but the NTR trope where the female character starts loving her rapist's dick is so outdated. And Zetto did that already with the last chapter of OG Sinful Lust.
 
I respect his work, I just don't agree with everything he does with the story. And seems like others don't either since that's what led to the Sinful Lust Remake.

And yeah it could be from an upcoming chapter, but the NTR trope where the female character starts loving her rapist's dick is so outdated. And Zetto did that already with the last chapter of OG Sinful Lust.
Yeah you can respect him while offering some constructive criticism
 
In the first chapter of the Homeless , Yoti made it quite clear that he was a disguised sex offender. It was only in other situations, with Berto and his wife present, that he didn't act, and that Liz lowered his guard against him.
I looked it up and damn, this is true. Yoti does say "jokingly" that if it was him he'd take advantage of Liz and Berto replies he's not that kind of man. I just thought that conversation wasn't actually meant to imply anything serious. But yeah, seems like Zetto was really teasing this from the get go. Eh.
 
I looked it up and damn, this is true. Yoti does say "jokingly" that if it was him he'd take advantage of Liz and Berto replies he's not that kind of man. I just thought that conversation wasn't actually meant to imply anything serious. But yeah, seems like Zetto was really teasing this from the get go. Eh.
Nevertheless, her encounter with yoti was rushed af like he was late for a meeting or something 😶
 
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