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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

So what happen to that ricky? He used the art type last year so many overdraw and less color and pages hahah 1 MONTH PREP is a joke.
 
This chapter its gonna be a special one, and then Zetto change his mind and Made it canon and delay the date of release, ok, but, what happens whit Ricky? How Lizana hide him from her family? Who was come to their Home? Naewo? Yuki? Her Husband? Zetto forgot about all that and this new chapter Start like if sex whit Ricky in Lizana's house never happens. Zetto really needs advisors in his work
 
Yeah you can tell this wasn't meant to be a main chapter. Not only it doesn't pick up where the last one left off when Liz's kids came back right as she was fucking Ricky, but none of that is even mentioned at all. I guess we won't learn how she got away from that situation, it's just another day for her.

I'm mixed on this. The first half is amazing. The second half is where they lose me because it seems like Zetto just can't help himself but have a rapist-type character in every story. Yoti's sudden heel turn is nonsensical since anytime we've seen him before he was never shown to be jealous of Berto, he was even rooting for him and teasing him about Lizana in a friendly way. Now suddenly he's the jealous antagonist who assaults Lizana, which I hate because until now the Homeless story made sure to avoid this kind of shit. Lizana was never forced to have sex with anyone in this story, whether Berto, Ricky or even Arturo who she willingly let piss in her mouth. This should've just remained a Special chapter since those are not necessarily treated as canon, but now we have yet another rape plot when I thought Zetto had learned from his past mistakes. Or maybe he doesn't see it as a mistake since it's a different continuity and he thinks doing something like this fits this story better than Sinful Lust? Either way, if this fails too, is he going to do a Homeless Remake too? lol

Art still looks a bit rushed but I enjoyed it at lot overall. If not for the rape, this chapter would've been perfect but it is what it is.
 
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Ellis said:
Yeah you can tell this wasn't meant to be a main chapter. Not only it doesn't pick up where the last one left off when Liz's kids came back right as she was fucking Ricky, but none of that is even mentioned at all. I guess we won't learn how she got away from that situation, it's just another day for her.

I'm mixed on this. The first half is amazing. The second half is where they lose me because it seems like Zetto just can't help himself but have a rapist-type character in every story. Yoti's sudden heel turn is nonsensical since anytime we've seen him before he was never shown to be jealous of Berto, he was even rooting for him and teasing him about Lizana in a friendly way. Now suddenly he's the jealous antagonist who assaults Lizana, which I hate because until now the Homeless story made sure to avoid this kind of shit. Liz was never forced to have sex with anyone in this story, whether Berto, Ricky or even Arturo who she willingly let piss in her mouth. This should've remained a Special chapter since those are not necessarily treated as canon, but now we have yet another rape plot when I thought Zetto had learned from his past mistakes. Or maybe he doesn't see it as a mistake since it's a different continuity and he thinks doing something like this fits this story better than Sinful Lust? Either way, if this fails too, is he going to do a Homeless Remake too? lol

Art still looks a bit rushed but I enjoyed it at lot overall. If not for the rape, this chapter would've been perfect but it is what it is.
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Damn bro you should be a professional critic 😳, you summed it up so well
 
thickdick6969 said:
Damn bro you should be a professional critic 😳, you summed it up so well
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lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.

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Ellis said:
lol I know it's silly because it's just NSFW comic but I'm not a fan when Zetto does stuff like this.

I mean, look at some of Yoti's early sketches, does it look like Liz was being raped here? She seems to be enjoying herself a lot until they got interrupted.

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The pressure has got to him unfortunately 🥺, you could probably make an entire 100 page chapter out of the stuff he omitted out of his releases and honestly? If Lizana wasn't there, a lot of people wouldn't care about it as much, she's.... something else
 
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