[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

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Lizana is being held hostage — tied up in the slum and groped by two filthy homeless old men

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Furthermore, the video states who created it; he didn't remove the creator. You have to read. I'm not defending him; I'm just observing what's happening.
 
I'm afraid that the Daughter-in-Law manga will be 40 or 50% filler, what I mean is that it will have a lot of foreplay scenes and very few action scenes. We know how Zetto is: he either makes the preamble too long or goes to the other extreme where he doesn't do any foreplay and the scene feels a bit empty or without context.
 
I just don't care about the Daughter In Law story. I don't find Gianna very likable either, it's like Zetto is trying so hard to make her different from Lizana by giving her this "bad girl" spin, but it comes off really forced and doesn't make her a compelling character at all. I always thought he was saving the "femme fatale" role for someone like Diana instead, which would be a great contrast to her sister, but here it just doesn't work. If Diana ends up being just like Gianna, I'm gonna be so disappointed.
 
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I just don't care about the Daughter In Law story. I don't find Gianna very likable either, it's like Zetto is trying so hard to make her different from Lizana by giving her this "bad girl" spin, but it comes off really forced and doesn't make her a compelling character at all. I always thought he was saving the "femme fatale" role for someone like Diana instead, which would be a great contrast to her sister, but here it just doesn't work. If Diana ends up being just like Gianna, I'm gonna be so disappointed.
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I like to think Zetto ended up Made a croossover in some point whit the Main saga of sinful lust and daugther in law, tell us Lizana and Gianna are cousins or Friends and they swap partners or something like that. Zetto never listen his fans but also have a problems whit writing and he don't know how to tell the story sometimes. I'm going to give him the benefit of the doubt whit this story
 
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