trap.lust1
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working on it stay tunedWhat happened to "The Bet"?
working on it stay tunedWhat happened to "The Bet"?
Nice story. The way the talk and think. Just one thing. The dick of Liam has grown a lot since the last time. For me it becomes a bit funny this big. I love the one in previous pictures. ( Could imagine clearly how Ariana loved sucking it). Perhaps you should make the dick of Ariana smaller instead.Hi guys
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I was rereading the entire *Elf Prince* series and would like to ask a question and share some ideas.Please Subscribe And Support
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thank for the suggestions... i was not planning the comics it as universe but different setting but as you have started the wheel with this ideas will pick one of this for next comics again thank you for giving ideas and brainstorming. this kinda support i needed much. thanksI was rereading the entire *Elf Prince* series and would like to ask a question and share some ideas.
But first, I'd like to say that you write very well, @trap.lust1.
There are very few works of feminization with a medieval theme.
So I feel a bit deprived of stories featuring protagonists who were transformed into femboys or who underwent a process of feminization in medieval times.
I'd like to ask, based on page 3, which explains the universe you created. Do you plan to write more medieval stories set in the same universe as the story “THE ELVEN PRINCE”?
If the answer is “yes,” I have a few ideas:
1 - The hero loses the decisive battle against the demon king and becomes his sex slave. But then the hero realizes that the demon king only wants peace and ends up falling in love with him, discovering that he is happier in his new life as the demon king’s wife.
2 - A wealthy, stingy, and arrogant nobleman loses all his wealth and power.
3 - A slave makes a comeback and gets his revenge on the nobleman who exploited him.
4 - An adventurer encounters two effeminate companions on his journey, or he causes his fellow adventurers to undergo a process of feminization!
5 - A human man and an elf prince. The elf prince is going to be turned into a femboy. For example, the human saves the elf prince, or the two of them are adventurers, or the human takes revenge on the elf prince.
That said, good job and good luck.
thanks for your input will improve the things you have mentionedI'm not trying to be mean I enjoy your stuff but better English would help you grown for sure. I do think you have gotten better since the early stuff but even your recent stories read clunky or just have straight up misspelled / used words. I can understand what you are trying to say but ya know. If I remember right Melissa and a few other authors also used to have really clunky English also but as they grew it got a lot better where now you often can't tell at all.
This one I would have to go back and look at I'm not as sure on but if I remember right sometimes I feel like you really jump from scene to scene abruptly and maybe working on the flow could help.
Overall as other artists have shown kinda if you make really good stories that look nice people will find you and your base will grow as long as you share some / the older works for free on some of the main public sites like e-hentai or deviant art etc. Just working on improving your work is the best marketing you can do imo.
yes working on it account is under verification will share it sooncan you move or open one in patreon?
it may be slow, but once in more can get access to your content and your reach.patron has blocked my account over age verification i verified account but they had some error so they suspended account in process with patron support to review the account