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I've been writing sex stories since 1999 and reading a lot longer. I have to say, I think "The Contact" may be one of the best stories I've ever read in all those years. It's not perfect, there's a lot of the couple discussing things that we already read about that could be cut drastically and there's a scene where she's texting with her "husband" only it's actually Ray only Ray isn't on his phone while pretending to be her husband, but the rest is pretty amazing and the anal sex scene is the best I've ever read. The Hustle is pretty damned good too. Again, it has some flaws. Part 2 has her putting the black man's cock in her mouth, but he doesn't cum. There should have been some sexual climax such as all men jerking off on her, but still it's good and the twist is clever.
 
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Stormbringer said:
I've been writing sex stories since 1999 and reading a lot longer. I have to say, I think "The Contact" may be one of the best stories I've ever read in all those years. It's not perfect, there's a lot of the couple discussing things that we already read about that could be cut drastically and there's a scene where she's texting with her "husband" only it's actually Ray only Ray isn't on his phone while pretending to be her husband, but the rest is pretty amazing and the anal sex scene is the best I've ever read. The Hustle is pretty damned good too. Again, it has some flaws. Part 2 has her putting the black man's cock in her mouth, but he doesn't cum. There should have been some sexual climax such as all men jerking off on her, but still it's good and the twist is clever.
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In terms of style, flow, structure and the depiction of events, this work is of particularly outstanding quality. The author, Sire Rickenbach, therefore deserves praise and recognition, as she has succeeded in crafting a remarkable story.
We are in complete agreement on this!

I hope that she will refrain from this course of action (if she intends to continue disparaging James and take it even further) and instead focus on a substantive confrontation between James and Ray, so that James can showcase his true virtues – amongst other things – as a steadfast, reliable, intelligent and, above all, caring husband and friend.

I am firmly convinced that James is significantly superior to Ray in a wide range of aspects, such as his human nature, his personality, his sincerity and his social skills.

-- PC
 
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The Contact is really good, although a bit fluffy and he's done the arc fairly quickly - some may like that. It's a lot of AI content though, which sort of annoys me, although it's been refined much better than most AI I've seen. You can tell which parts the author has spent a fair amount of time polishing and which parts he just left the AI alone.
 
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Powerconti said:
In terms of style, flow, structure and the depiction of events, this work is of particularly outstanding quality. The author, Sire Rickenbach, therefore deserves praise and recognition, as she has succeeded in crafting a remarkable story.
We are in complete agreement on this!

I hope that she will refrain from this course of action (if she intends to continue disparaging James and take it even further) and instead focus on a substantive confrontation between James and Ray, so that James can showcase his true virtues – amongst other things – as a steadfast, reliable, intelligent and, above all, caring husband and friend.

I am firmly convinced that James is significantly superior to Ray in a wide range of aspects, such as his human nature, his personality, his sincerity and his social skills.

-- PC
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Why create a real rivalry, a real confrontation, between the husband and the bull?

Why does the wife lose interest in her husband?

Stories are always written using this pattern... it's one possibility, but there are others...

Basically, the cuckold dynamic is a game, a fantasy. For some, it gets out of hand, but for other couples, it can remain JUST a game, a fantasy.

There might be a rivalry between James and Ray, but it remains a game. Perhaps less so for Ray, but especially for the couple. They're playing a game, so it's part of the fantasy to have a rivalry, for the bull to be dominant... but it's still just a game.

Even humiliation can be a game.

When I say it's a "game," I mean that we pretend it's real, and it might even be a little real, but only because it creates excitement, and that's the point! Excitement!

But ultimately, if everyone understands that it's just for fun, that it's a fantasy, despite everything that might happen, the woman doesn't lose her love and respect for her husband, because it's just a game.

And it's even more erotic that way: the woman continues to love and respect her husband, but at the same time she's doing taboo things! The contradiction is exciting!

And the further a couple who are truly in love delves into the taboo/forbidden aspects, the more exciting it becomes.

If the wife loses her respect for her husband, it becomes infidelity, and the eroticism of the cuckold dynamic is lost...
 
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user322 said:
Why create a real rivalry, a real confrontation, between the husband and the bull?

Why does the wife lose interest in her husband?

Stories are always written using this pattern... it's one possibility, but there are others...

Basically, the cuckold dynamic is a game, a fantasy. For some, it gets out of hand, but for other couples, it can remain JUST a game, a fantasy.

There might be a rivalry between James and Ray, but it remains a game. Perhaps less so for Ray, but especially for the couple. They're playing a game, so it's part of the fantasy to have a rivalry, for the bull to be dominant... but it's still just a game.

Even humiliation can be a game.

When I say it's a "game," I mean that we pretend it's real, and it might even be a little real, but only because it creates excitement, and that's the point! Excitement!

But ultimately, if everyone understands that it's just for fun, that it's a fantasy, despite everything that might happen, the woman doesn't lose her love and respect for her husband, because it's just a game.

And it's even more erotic that way: the woman continues to love and respect her husband, but at the same time she's doing taboo things! The contradiction is exciting!

And the further a couple who are truly in love delves into the taboo/forbidden aspects, the more exciting it becomes.

If the wife loses her respect for her husband, it becomes infidelity, and the eroticism of the cuckold dynamic is lost...
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thanks for sharing that perspective it makes sense, just to be clear do you think in the contact that Jenna still has or has ever had respect for her husband. the reason I question if she ever had is the number of years they had been married , awareness of her cycle and not once did she let James enter her bare.

I can understand that denying something to the husband can be exciting but always denying while giving to someone else becomes cruel.
 
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All things including writing and creating tension etc has been great in "The Contact". I believe writer has to delve into something taboo or titilating to create a story in hotwife/cuck genre. Otherwise we can always read romantic novels/husnand-wife dramas.

But one thing which is too far from reality is that she hasn't allowed her husband bare once in 10+ yrs of marriage. That's just not possible if there is love and respect between the couple. Women too like intimacy. Now, if she is actually avert to this raw sex, she wouldn't have allowed Rey too. This contradiction may suit well in the cuck genre smut, but it takes realism of the story (and real angst that readers get and correlate with characters) outside the equation.
 
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* THE COCNTACT *

I have often pondered the question of what marriage means to many people.
Or is the yardstick for marriage defined solely by sex?
Where exactly do the boundaries of this so-called ‘game’ lie?
Can it still be regarded as a game when the wife (Jenna) calls her husband (James) a good-for-nothing and a piece of shit in the presence of her lover?
Does she feel a sense of strength and superiority when she implies that James must ask Ray's for permission to kiss or have sex with her? Is this still a game?
Is it still a game when she tells Ray with ‘pride’ that she will never allow James to have sex with her without a condom, and that only he (Ray) can fuck her ‘without a condom’ and come inside her?

After such statements, the question arises as to where respect ends and hypocrisy begins.

Boundless arrogance, underhandness, humiliation and deceit are no game – even if they occur in a ‘fantasy’!

When I speak of ‘rivalry’ between James and Ray, I mean that James is freeing himself from these ‘invisible’ shackles that Jenna has imposed on him and is confronting Ray to hold him to account.
Should Jenna continue to play her so-called ‘game’ according to her own, specially devised rules, it would be James’s duty to show her the door and shut it behind her for good. After that, she can continue her game with her lover and fuck buddy Ray to her heart’s content, as there are plenty of options available, with the first candidates – her boss and the safety engineer – being well-placed to fill the gap left by James.

-- PC
 
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user322 said:
Why create a real rivalry, a real confrontation, between the husband and the bull?

Why does the wife lose interest in her husband?

Stories are always written using this pattern... it's one possibility, but there are others...

Basically, the cuckold dynamic is a game, a fantasy. For some, it gets out of hand, but for other couples, it can remain JUST a game, a fantasy.

There might be a rivalry between James and Ray, but it remains a game. Perhaps less so for Ray, but especially for the couple. They're playing a game, so it's part of the fantasy to have a rivalry, for the bull to be dominant... but it's still just a game.

Even humiliation can be a game.

When I say it's a "game," I mean that we pretend it's real, and it might even be a little real, but only because it creates excitement, and that's the point! Excitement!

But ultimately, if everyone understands that it's just for fun, that it's a fantasy, despite everything that might happen, the woman doesn't lose her love and respect for her husband, because it's just a game.

And it's even more erotic that way: the woman continues to love and respect her husband, but at the same time she's doing taboo things! The contradiction is exciting!

And the further a couple who are truly in love delves into the taboo/forbidden aspects, the more exciting it becomes.

If the wife loses her respect for her husband, it becomes infidelity, and the eroticism of the cuckold dynamic is lost...
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Another thing that always happens is no matter how far off the rails the wife goes the husband never says anything. Then we have to read his inner thoughts about how he's worried that things may be going to far or something he has concerns about but never says anything. Even the wife will ask if she went to far, but he'll say something stupid like how hot she looked. I've wondered if they would say anything if it happened over Thanksgiving dinner. Like in faithless wife(I think it's the name) by him not saying anything the wife fell in love wit Paul, by that point it's to late.

I know it posed to add to the story but it just kills the character development were the husband is posed to be smart, or have an important job. But if you lose wrong wife how do you feed the kink.
 
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Powerconti said:
* THE COCNTACT *

I have often pondered the question of what marriage means to many people.
Or is the yardstick for marriage defined solely by sex?
Where exactly do the boundaries of this so-called ‘game’ lie?
Can it still be regarded as a game when the wife (Jenna) calls her husband (James) a good-for-nothing and a piece of shit in the presence of her lover?
Does she feel a sense of strength and superiority when she implies that James must ask Ray's for permission to kiss or have sex with her? Is this still a game?
Is it still a game when she tells Ray with ‘pride’ that she will never allow James to have sex with her without a condom, and that only he (Ray) can fuck her ‘without a condom’ and come inside her?

After such statements, the question arises as to where respect ends and hypocrisy begins.

Boundless arrogance, underhandness, humiliation and deceit are no game – even if they occur in a ‘fantasy’!

When I speak of ‘rivalry’ between James and Ray, I mean that James is freeing himself from these ‘invisible’ shackles that Jenna has imposed on him and is confronting Ray to hold him to account.
Should Jenna continue to play her so-called ‘game’ according to her own, specially devised rules, it would be James’s duty to show her the door and shut it behind her for good. After that, she can continue her game with her lover and fuck buddy Ray to her heart’s content, as there are plenty of options available, with the first candidates – her boss and the safety engineer – being well-placed to fill the gap left by James.

-- PC
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Where to find all the parts of contact, just started reading it
 
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