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I've been writing sex stories since 1999 and reading a lot longer. I have to say, I think "The Contact" may be one of the best stories I've ever read in all those years. It's not perfect, there's a lot of the couple discussing things that we already read about that could be cut drastically and there's a scene where she's texting with her "husband" only it's actually Ray only Ray isn't on his phone while pretending to be her husband, but the rest is pretty amazing and the anal sex scene is the best I've ever read. The Hustle is pretty damned good too. Again, it has some flaws. Part 2 has her putting the black man's cock in her mouth, but he doesn't cum. There should have been some sexual climax such as all men jerking off on her, but still it's good and the twist is clever.
 
I've been writing sex stories since 1999 and reading a lot longer. I have to say, I think "The Contact" may be one of the best stories I've ever read in all those years. It's not perfect, there's a lot of the couple discussing things that we already read about that could be cut drastically and there's a scene where she's texting with her "husband" only it's actually Ray only Ray isn't on his phone while pretending to be her husband, but the rest is pretty amazing and the anal sex scene is the best I've ever read. The Hustle is pretty damned good too. Again, it has some flaws. Part 2 has her putting the black man's cock in her mouth, but he doesn't cum. There should have been some sexual climax such as all men jerking off on her, but still it's good and the twist is clever.

In terms of style, flow, structure and the depiction of events, this work is of particularly outstanding quality. The author, Sire Rickenbach, therefore deserves praise and recognition, as she has succeeded in crafting a remarkable story.
We are in complete agreement on this!

I hope that she will refrain from this course of action (if she intends to continue disparaging James and take it even further) and instead focus on a substantive confrontation between James and Ray, so that James can showcase his true virtues – amongst other things – as a steadfast, reliable, intelligent and, above all, caring husband and friend.

I am firmly convinced that James is significantly superior to Ray in a wide range of aspects, such as his human nature, his personality, his sincerity and his social skills.

-- PC
 
The Contact is really good, although a bit fluffy and he's done the arc fairly quickly - some may like that. It's a lot of AI content though, which sort of annoys me, although it's been refined much better than most AI I've seen. You can tell which parts the author has spent a fair amount of time polishing and which parts he just left the AI alone.
 
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