[Pegasus Smith] Timmy Strikes Back

I was total agree with you all..may be PenisuS are now in Girls book club and make just drama shits
He loves to waste time in drama nonsense and he's surrounded by yes men simps on discord and subscribestar, no wonder why his work decreased in quality...
 
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Waiting for the new pages to see how the story unfolds and form an opinion.

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Because he drags all of his 3 active comics with unwanted drama
Now… when you say “drags it,” do you mean in terms of the storytelling, or the release date?

Because, in terms of storytelling, I feel like Pegasus Smith has dragged it perfectly. It explains everything nicely and smoothly, with both emotional depth and reasoning.

It also incorporates a time element, which is explained through the narrative boxes, and I think the timing is perfect as well, especially with the whole grooming of Timmy into being a stud and all…

Now, as for the release date… I can’t say I disagree.

Regardless, best of luck, Pegasus Smith🍀
 
Now… when you say “drags it,” do you mean in terms of the storytelling, or the release date?

Because, in terms of storytelling, I feel like Pegasus Smith has dragged it perfectly. It explains everything nicely and smoothly, with both emotional depth and reasoning.

It also incorporates a time element, which is explained through the narrative boxes, and I think the timing is perfect as well, especially with the whole grooming of Timmy into being a stud and all…

Now, as for the release date… I can’t say I disagree.

Regardless, best of luck, Pegasus Smith🍀

Of the three TSB is the least egregious when it comes to pacing

AN is by far the the worst
 
Seriously... pardon me, but that sounds awfully harsh no?
Though maybe I shouldn't really cause a ruckus, as I am one of those people who likes a slow story...

No, Just saying TSB is the best paced of the three.

Don't get me wrong I like AN but more often than not each chapter just takes too long to get going, I don't mean jump into the action on page 1 (I wouldn't complain though) but not 70 pages in which equates to 7 weeks
 
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