[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

Oblivion said:
I agree chapter 30 80 pages of nothing but like I said this should be on hold as a future chapter while PS focused on the ceremony but that's not the case sadly, yes we want to see Brandi and Kelly getting along with the locals in different situations that's what needs to happen that was the point of the ceremony but I still see potential in The Swendenbergs.

I want them to return too but this time Vic must have a complete different mindset to fuck around in the island after almost die in the storm, same for Carl and Lucas getting local pussy including The Wilsons, Martin can keep fucking Kayla and other locals, hope Darnell is alive and gives some BBC to Vic and the blonde sisters too.
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Where’s Darnell 👀oh there he is😜
 
bigusdickus said:
Where’s Darnell 👀oh there he is😜
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Yes I mentioned him unlike The Swendenberg in chapter 30, I didn't forget about him he tried to save their lives so hope he's alive and Pete finds him.

Jedi92 said:
What do you think about a potential future sequel?

If I recall correctly, Gina once mentioned to Brandi that a boy on the island had previously gotten his own mother pregnant; well, with very few exceptions, Dylan has finished inside Brandi every single time.
Meanwhile, Brandi no longer worries as much when Dylan ejaculates inside her, so she has secretly toyed with the idea of having a child together.
It is possible, then, that in a future chapter, Brandi and Dylan’s relationship will shift toward actively trying for a baby—something that would make their bond complete—without leaving Kelly out of the dynamic. This way, Kelly could also ensure that Dylan doesn't get any other girl pregnant.
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Yeah I remember that revelation but a spinoff is the least this comic needs because is such a mess already and imo pregnancy would ruin the fun to see Brandi getting fucked even less and Dylan would have more time to fuck more locals and I don't want to see Kelly trying to take care of him all the time he's old enough to behave.
 
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Oblivion said:
Yeah I remember that revelation but a spinoff is the least this comic needs because is such a mess already and imo pregnancy would ruin the fun to see Brandi getting fucked even less and Dylan would have more time to fuck more locals and I don't want to see Kelly trying to take care of him all the time he's old enough to behave.
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I wholeheartedly agree, there's no need for a spin-off, just keep following the current time line.
•A pregnancy of (one of) the main characters, Brandi, Kelly or even Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) would ruïn the comic completely i.m.o. (eventhough I understand people that have that fetish)
•I'm ok with one of the side characters, Emily or Kayla, who want to get pregnant anyway, being impregnated by who ever pumps the neccessary cum into their pussy to reach that goal....
•I just want to see the main characters, Brandi, Kelly and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) suck and fuck as many dicks as possible and extract all the cum the various guys, main male (side-) character or otherwise (see my previous post #4235 ), and in various constellations, can muster whereby they cum in a location that befits the situation....
e.g. guys cumming in mouths when being sucked, guys cumming on tits or face when being sucked or tit-fucked and guys cumming in pussies when fucking and occasionally pulling out and spraying their cum elsewhere....
 
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Au Naturel Part 30 - 90 pages - now available! linktr.ee/PS_Comics

The ceremony died for this...

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Nippur said:
Well I hope the noises wake up to Carl ending in a threesome

Pd I can't believe PS wrapped up the whole Orgy Scenario to repeat threesome Carl, Lukas Vic
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Not only Carl also Martin so Vic invites him to join too after almost die in the storm it would be the perfect occasion to see her with her 3 holes filled hope Carl is the one who fucks her in the ass this time and Martin change positions with Lukas, we still dont know if Carl is going to participate to be fair so hope the spoilers is about that.
Optimal12 said:
Good grief, what a downfall. I was hoping for the continuation of the great orgy on island, but this? Pegasus Smith has no idea of a progress.
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Chapter 30 should have been about the climax to the ceremony and make it memorable but of course PS fumbled it and instead created this vanilla 1 on 1 boring dogshit we already see in the past🤦‍♂️90 fucking pages to just see Lukas fucking Vic smfh weak and lazy.

PS knows what to do but hes such a coward like dude you created a wild scenario involving a swinger island that allows free love to everyone no matter about name calls or what other people thinks and you give us this generic lame shit refusing to take things to the next level after 29 chapters how many years is that, unbelievable.
 
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Oblivion said:
Not only Carl also Martin so Vic invites him to join too after almost die in the storm it would be the perfect occasion to see her with her 3 holes filled hope Carl is the one who fucks her in the ass this time and Martin change positions with Lukas, we still dont know if Carl is going to participate to be fair so hope the spoilers is about that.

Chapter 30 should have been about the climax to the ceremony and make it memorable but of course PS fumbled it and instead created this vanilla 1 on 1 boring dogshit we already see in the past🤦‍♂️90 fucking pages to just see Lukas fucking Vic smfh weak and lazy.

PS knows what to do but hes such a coward like dude you created a wild scenario involving a swinger island that allows free love to everyone no matter about name calls or what other people thinks and you give us this generic lame shit refusing to take things to the next levell after 29 chapters how many years is that, unbelievable.
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I hope it doesn't follow the path, where Vic has sex with Lukas, then with Carl, hiding from Lukas in order not to upset him, extending the drama the whole chapter, ending with a threesome, so an entire chapter with Vic/Lukas, Vic/Car and Vic/Carl/Lukas
 
Nippur said:
I hope it doesn't follow the path, where Vic has sex with Lukas, then with Carl, hiding from Lukas in order not to upset him, extending the drama the whole chapter, ending with a threesome, so an entire chapter with Vic/Lukas, Vic/Car and Vic/Carl/Lukas
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Knowing PS boring rethoric thats very likely to happen sadly, crazy chapter 10 destroyed not just Brandi motivations and Rory involvement in the story as the needed antagonistic prick sidelined him to just a support npc but the rest of the characters motivations to do wild shit too just look at the poor state of Kelly the wild younger sister being a complete annoying jealous bitch while Dylan is having fun from day fucking 1 with the locals the hypocrisy is disgusting, hope not to see another unnecessary NTR but this time between Carl and Vic thats the least this comic needs holy shit.

Every update is a huge disappointment with this guy🤦‍♂️.
 
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Oblivion said:
Au Naturel Part 30 - 90 pages - now available!
linktr.ee
https://twitter.com/x/status/2103171458453180574

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Although I don't mind the (possible) return of Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) and her incestuous relationships with her sons, I agree wholeheartedly with @Oblivion that Pegasus fucked up big time by cutting the "big ceremony/orgy" rediculously short.
Pegasus should have made Chapter 30 a (lengthy) orgy chapter wherein all the (main) characters were depicting in all sorts of combinations of having sex....
[with no (lengthy) particular focus on any of the (main) characters]
Pegasus could have easily moved the arc with Victoria (or is it Fucktoria ) to a Chapter 31 or even a Chapter 32 without disturbing or messing up the time line....
 
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DollyNood said:
Although I don't mind the (possible) return of Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) and her incestuous relationships with her sons, I agree wholeheartedly with @Oblivion that Pegasus fucked up big time by cutting the "big ceremony/orgy" rediculously short.
Pegasus should have made Chapter 30 a(n) (lengthy) orgy chapter wherein all the (main) characters were depicting in all sorts of combinations of having sex....
[with no (lengthy) particular focus on any of the (main) characters]
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Thats exactly what should have happened to celebrate 30 chapters of this comic, every character involved having their moment to shine in the hottest way possible, very weak that Brandi only let Tom to fuck her aside Dylan and Kelly didnt fuck any local imo Pete would have been perfect for her showing how reckless and wild she is but no jealousy and insecurities took over like if anybody asked for that 🤦🏻‍♂️.
 
Oblivion said:
Thats exactly what should have happened to celebrate 30 chapters of this comic, every character involved having their moment to shine in the hottest way possible, very weak that Brandi only let Tom to fuck her aside Dylan and Kelly didnt fuck any local imo Pete would have been perfect for her showing how reckless and wild she is but no jealousy and insecurities took over like if anybody asked for that 🤦🏻‍♂️.
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And the future doesn't show signs to change since most subs speak about they don't want NRT?? of Brandi or Kelly to Dylan NONSENSE at all
 
Nippur said:
And the future doesn't show signs to change since most subs speak about they don't want NRT?? of Brandi or Kelly to Dylan NONSENSE at all
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NTR in a swinger paradise established since day 1 lol what a way to fuck up the concept of the comic with chapter 10 one job PS smfh.

Btw what plans has PS for Brandi and Kelly if is not sucking and fucking locals? more unnecessary drama like more jealousy and insecurities from Kelly? the future is not bright unless he grows some balls and take the unhinged perverted way and this comic desperately needs antagonistic characters like Rory and Emily to return.
 
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Oblivion said:
NTR in a swinger paradise established since day 1 lol what a way to fuck up the concept of the comic with chapter 10 one job PS smfh.

Btw what plans has PS for Brandi and Kelly if is not sucking and fucking locals? more unnecessary drama like more jealousy and insecurities from Kelly? the future is not bright unless he grows some balls and take the unhinged perverted way and this comic desperately needs antagonistic characters like Rory and Emily to return.
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I agree with you Kelly and Brandi restricted to Dylan would be nonsense at all.
 
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