Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters
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Gussetlicker
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Thankyou so much for this I like this much motre than ta now to be honest
kasiski
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Chapter 4, is now up on Substack.
Nelson spends an evening next door, and the distance between watching and being invited in starts to feel a little less comfortable.
https://fkasiski.substack.com/p/two-seconds-chapter-4
Feedback is always welcome.
m.dombaev
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Я прочитала новую главу «Триумфа». 30 страниц — подробное описание трёх сексуальных актов, и 3-4 страницы — что вообще движет сюжетом. Дэн вообще не упоминается, за исключением короткого упоминания. Мне кажется, это не драма, а серия повторяющихся сексуальных контактов. Где действие, где повествование, где сюжетные линии, которые держат читателя в напряжении?
gdiiopl
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FFS more granny fucking. The story is going downhill
fantafan
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Who ever said "Don't judge a book by its cover" hadn't seen this racist ass cover
Sure. But then its a BBC cuckold story. The term BBC is racist. Most cuckold stuff is misogynist as hell. "A little clitty dick" is transphobic--the whole idea is that a man is less of a man if he is like a woman, because of course woman aren't as powerful/important, whatever. Most humiliation stuff is problematic. Lots of gay phobias. Etc etc. Bestiality is correctly illegal. Lots of non-consent all over the place. Fantasies are fantasies. Maybe don't look so close at other people's an examine your own. Watching only ethical porn? Start a thread about it and try and get people interested.
The UK has just banned choking porn, pretend incest, not sure what else FYI. Obviously all of these are problematic in various ways, and yet lots of people are obviously into them despite that given the huge libraries of this kind of stuff.
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user322
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Hello, thank you for sharing your story here!
For now, the story is taking a little while to get going—I personally prefer a faster pace—but it is well-written, and the current approach does a good job of establishing an atmosphere. I generally prefer longer, more deliberate narratives over "fast-food" stories that lack any real depth, so, as it stands, your story and your writing style are quite compelling!
I also find that strong descriptions help weave in subtle details—a certain look, a specific turn of phrase, a particular gesture—all of which serve to heighten the eroticism. You’re doing a great job with that so far.
And I repeat : you write well ! And your descriptions—especially those concerning the woman’s physical form and her attire—are excellent. I’m very curious to see how the erotic and sexual scenes will unfold.
From my perspective, it would be highly erotic if Lara and Grant were to gradually lose control—if, for instance, Nelson proved to be more skilled in bed than Grant, and if Lara began to push past the boundaries they had initially set for themselves. Right now, the couple seems very self-assured and holds the upper hand over Nelson. It would be fascinating to see them become increasingly submissive—though, of course, without taking it to an extreme that descends into a crude or one-dimensional dynamic of domination and submission. But it’s your story, so I look forward to seeing what you have in store for us next. Keep up the great work!