[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

If Inces is main theme why Dylan does fuck every female of the island? Shouldn't Brandi have the same right? When Incest is the main theme they are exclusive like Immoral Desire or just Antie, Mom or Sister not women outside the family. Repeat is about a society with other moral rules where Inces is allowed
Dylan has fucked only 7 out 20 named female characters. Refer to this below link:
To say Dylan has fucked every woman is an overstatement.
 
Dylan has fucked only 7 out 20 named female characters. Refer to this below link:
To say Dylan has fucked every woman is an overstatement.
He fucked almost half of the girls by not being a resident that's a lot if you think about it while Brandi only have 2 locals in her body count on almost 30 chapters that's pathetic for the main female character, now imagine him as a new resident if PS stop fumbling him, his crusade would be relentless and full of moans all over the island, better be the case while Brandi and Kelly have fun away from him that's what needs to happen next and @wicksel knows it 😗.
 
He fucked almost half of the girls by not being a resident that's a lot if you think about it while Brandi only have 2 locals in her body count on almost 30 chapters that's pathetic for the main female character, now imagine him as a new resident if PS stop fumbling him, his crusade would be relentless and full of moans all over the island, better be the case while Brandi and Kelly have fun away from him that's what needs to happen next and @wicksel knows it 😗.
He fucked 5 locals,so its not even 1/3, far from almost half.And we dont count females for Brandi,because....
 
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5 are locals,so its not even 1/3, far from almost half.And we dont count females for Brandi,because....
7 girls including his mom and aunt in less than 2 weeks in his stay on the island is very impressive that's what I mean.

Now as a local that number should be increased until he fucks every girl showed in the island.

Brandi has more girls than Dylan in her body count including Kelly, of course she is lol.
 
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I’m leaving Victoria and her family—as well as Kelly—out of the discussion, since they were only added for the sake of making money.
After 29 chapters and over 3,000 pages, can anyone point to any development for Brandy? NO ONE!
Pegasus completely erased the 4some from an10 from Brandy’s character, as never happened at all.
Instead, he sent Dylan to the Master and some guys assumed this meant he intended to place dylan against rory but that didn’t happen.
Brandy was absent for entire chapters, with no off-screen development taking place, she never mentioned having done anything, nor did she describe anything that might have happened to her.
The sex scenes appear out of nowhere, while in other scenes—where everyone expected something to happen—absolutely nothing took place.
that comic should't cost more than 5$. I wonder how someone could pay 10$ or 20$ to see earlier those 10 pages.
after all it is just my point of view...
 
I’m leaving Victoria and her family—as well as Kelly—out of the discussion, since they were only added for the sake of making money.
After 29 chapters and over 3,000 pages, can anyone point to any development for Brandy? NO ONE!
Pegasus completely erased the 4some from an10 from Brandy’s character, as never happened at all.
Instead, he sent Dylan to the Master and some guys assumed this meant he intended to place dylan against rory but that didn’t happen.
Brandy was absent for entire chapters, with no off-screen development taking place, she never mentioned having done anything, nor did she describe anything that might have happened to her.
The sex scenes appear out of nowhere, while in other scenes—where everyone expected something to happen—absolutely nothing took place.
that comic should't cost more than 5$. I wonder how someone could pay 10$ or 20$ to see earlier those 10 pages.
after all it is just my point of view...
All this happened because chapter 10 now you understand that chapter ruined her motivations until chapter 29 when finally Tom fucked her in the DP she wanted to do since she admitted to Rory in the same chapter before she fucked her in the most forced out of nowhere possible way.

PS also removed Rory from any main antagonistic setting yes he showed up in chapter 22 in the bar briefly but Brandi wasn't there meaning PS is still doing damage control because again chapter 10 by not putting both of them in the same frame ever again and that's so pathetic and weak, Rory is needed to create tension and Brandi already forgive him for being a weirdo so why not.

To be fair Dylan mentioned what happened in chapter 10 in chapter 29 when he gave her his blessing to fulfill her desire to do a DP.

Btw to this day Kelly doesn't know about Rory fucked Brandi on literally Dylans back can you believe that shit at this point of the story she should already know that, this story went to shit because of a unwanted NTR scenario in a swinger paradise imagine fucking up so bad in such a wild place and now what PS is doing well focusing on filler drama while he keeps Brandi away ONCE AGAIN in favor of Victoria knowing the fact the one who needs spotlight to grow as a new resident is Kelly smfh.

Brandi's only development since chapter 10 is the DP in the ceremony that's it and Kelly is still chained to Dylan lol "the wild sister".

To sum up every inconsistency every filler every contradiction every Brandi possible scenario with a male local every Rory removal in the story is because chapter 10, I knew the moment I saw that garbage it was going to fuck up the story from now on and guess what time proved me right sadly.
 
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What i have heard

Victoria is between her sons and they take turns fucking her sideways and everyone is happy.(i wonder when PS will remember Martin and poor Darnell))
 
What i have heard

Victoria is between her sons and they take turns fucking her sideways and everyone is happy.(i wonder when PS will remember Martin and poor Darnell))
Bruh so nothing new while Martin is just there and Darnell isn't even mentioned🤦🏻🥱
I been told that dialogue is so cringe, and winner line is "mmm... Lukas, did you really miss fucking mommy, that much?"
What a waste of time and resources this chapter is holy shit just filler repeating the same shit we already saw 🥱 damn PS you really don't have imagination at all @wicksel
 
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