Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

[Pete]

Hope I find Looking for don Silver thread TA chapters

 

[enkindled]

It is evident that as the stories grow in length, there is a marked decline in quality. This may be due to Antarctica77’s particular writing style.
His attempt to incorporate a psychological filter into the stories consistently fails and contributes to the stories becoming a complex and opaque structure from which the author is ultimately unable to extricate himself.
The confusion described above manifests itself in a particular way in his other, parallel story * BTND *, especially in the last two chapters (20–21).

-- PC

There's also an increase in AI usage in these newer chapters of AYCJ, specific phrases that only AI tends to use. He's ruined the story though, the r*pe is harrowing and no one wants to read that, Kim used to be fine in the previous series and now she's a beyond awful human being. This series was so much better before Toby re-entered.

 

[lemonsqueezie]

AYCJ 24 & 25

I honestly don't get why anyone wants to read this series anymore. It's totally fucked up. I don't think a guy like Josh could exist in the real world, being that clueless as to Kim's true nature. After every fucked up thing she's done to him, he still chooses to trust her. And she keeps on corrupting everything good in his life, right down to setting Luna up so Toby can rape her. I'm gonna stop reading this crap and let someone tell me how it ends. The only good ending is with Toby's lifeless body on the floor, his brains all over the wall. Any other ending is a crappy one.

But thanks for sharing, buddy.

 

[CrownySuccubus]

There's also an increase in AI usage in these newer chapters of AYCJ, specific phrases that only AI tends to use. He's ruined the story though, the r*pe is harrowing and no one wants to read that, Kim used to be fine in the previous series and now she's a beyond awful human being. This series was so much better before Toby re-entered.

Agreed. It was Toby coming back that made me stop paying.

 

[makoto shishio]

Have fun!

I don’t understand how a wife can stay with a man who encourages her to be unfaithful—at the very least, the love is clearly gone; the husband wants his wife to sleep with just about anyone, even though he knows there’s a risk she might form an emotional bond. It’s very obvious that, before long, Jess will replace him with someone else—unless, of course, the couple has started exploring things like swinging. Tom, the husband, acts more like a female friend—a girlfriend of Jess’s who encourages her to have sexual encounters—than a husband.

 

[m.dombaev]

Эдди явно очень спешил, когда писал 27-ю часть TBT.

Части 25 и 26 были великолепны — богаты психологическими нюансами и напряженными эротическими зарисовками. Однако часть 27 значительно отличается от предыдущих. Она посвящена потенциальным любовникам Джесс, заставляя её задуматься: кого же ей выбрать? В разговорах с Томом коллеги и клиенты Джесс намекают на возможность свинга, но Джесс ясно даёт понять, что она к этому не готова. Тем временем, долгие обсуждения Дерека наконец начинают обретать смысл — Джесс заинтересовалась тренером. Хотя это не совсем логично, учитывая, что она только что сказала Бобу: «Я люблю твой член!» — не говоря уже о том, что она сходила с ума от своих оргазмов с эякуляцией!

В новой главе много нелогичных моментов — особенно если вспомнить напряженный разговор, граничащий с ссорой, который состоялся между Томом и Джесс в 26-й части, перед тем как они отправились в ресторан.

Я подозреваю, что в 28-й части речь пойдёт о деловых поездках пары в разные города. Что касается секса с Бобом — это пока отложено. Думаю, в 28-й части основное внимание будет уделено размышлениям Боба и его новым планам. Бобу нужно подслушивающее устройство! Анализ разговоров между Томом и Джесс поможет ему придумать новые интриги. А как только Боб узнает о своем сопернике, Дереке, он обязательно предпримет действия.

 

[carloswerty]

Here u go

 

[jayngb23]

Here u go

who’s the author of the hustle again?

 

[zxcv1029]

who’s the author of the hustle again?

Sire Rickenbach, who also wrote the Contact

 

[jayngb23]

Sire Rickenbach, who also wrote the Contact

ohhh okay, is it as good as the contact?

 

[SoulBird]

ohhh okay, is it as good as the contact?

I would say no, but I find the sleazeballs to not be as interesting as Ray. So it may just depend on what you look for in your story building.

 

[dailygrind]

for those who might or might not be interested, Antarctica77 i working on BTND 22 and will then jump into AYCJ Final this month, whether final means the final chapter of final story arc only time will tell.

There is also someone producing a comics of his work starting with BTND https://www.patreon.com/cw/Antarctica77Comics

still looking for slipping into depravity 53, 54 and 55 if anyone can help

 

[m.dombaev]

Gentlemen, what’s happening with Part 7 of *Encounters in the Neighborhood*? And what about the edited version of Part 6? Also, is Don Silver writing a sequel to *The Beach House*?